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HeadOverHeels

@HeadOverHeels

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Aww this was so sweet. Great descriptions (love the outfit) and narration.

P.S. I love it when a girl is shown to take the initiative.

Girl power dammit!! 😉

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arushi05

@arushi05

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

So romantic. Loved it. Atlast they had the kiss

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Fuzzbucket

@Fuzzbucket

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

hopefully cv's will steal your story!

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rusticreet

@rusticreet

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

very well written...loved it in entirety 👏

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dorindakate

@dorindakate

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Wow..inspiringstars...your OS was just beautiful...

The story just transported me to where I want Arshi to go...

The song choice was perfect...and one of my favorites...

Thank you for sharing...

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647669

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

This was very cute.
I loved how you described Arnav's feelings and letting us get an insight in to his heart.
Him finally realising what importance Khushi now has in his life. How she has carved a place for herself in the little corner of his heart.
Very cute to read and loved the whole concept :)
Thanks for the pm

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Sona

@mistyrains

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

It was beautiful Pankti and I'm so glad you are writing more. The song was perfect, going with Arnav's thoughts. But what stood out was the way you have created this feeling throughout the whole OS, of Arnav missing her, and that was done perfectly, emphasizing on the right emotions. Left me smiling, when it ended!

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Eggon_Snow

@Eggon_Snow

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

hey good job...one of my all time fav songs too😊

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MvDiva25

@MvDiva25

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#29

Hello ^^,

Just wanted to say that I really loved your OS! Khushi's depiction was very well described. And when Arnav saw Khushi from the stairs too! Everything had this light touch of sweetness and romance.

Beautiful work!

xoxo