OS - When You Say Nothing At All - Page 5

It is so true that their feelings are conveyed the best when they say nothing at all. Be it fairy lights after teasing, Diwali night, or the recent Shyam's revelation. The moment they open their mouths they do something wrong. But they made a good use of their mouths here, didn't they?


Thank you so much for the scrap :) a very well written OS :) Keep it up


P. S I have a feeling that I had resed a comment on one of your OSs but didn't unres it. Do you happen to remember which one is that? Because it is extremely impolite on my part to do such a thing :( Sorry :)

Originally posted by: lazyleaves

It is so true that their feelings are conveyed the best when they say nothing at all. Be it fairy lights after teasing, Diwali night, or the recent Shyam's revelation. The moment they open their mouths they do something wrong. But they made a good use of their mouths here, didn't they?


Thank you so much for the scrap :) a very well written OS :) Keep it up


P. S I have a feeling that I had resed a comment on one of your OSs but didn't unres it. Do you happen to remember which one is that? Because it is extremely impolite on my part to do such a thing :( Sorry :)

Originally posted by: inspiringstars

Thanks a lot for your comments, it means a lot to be appreciated from someone, who is a good writer herself.

I have written just one OS other than this,

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/iss-pyaar-ko-kya-naam-doon/3113058/os-set-fire-to-the-rain

You can read it again, and comment if you like, I dont remember if you has res'd it.

Thanks again :)

Thank you. But yeah I doubt @bold. There are way better writers here. What I write is utter crap :D

It was a nice OS.I enjoyed reading it.So wish that this happens

Originally posted by: oceanssea

It was a nice OS.I enjoyed reading it.So wish that this happens

in the show,but I know I'm wishing too much.

I know you because of the awesome thread that you created

listing the best FFs.'Cause of you I started reading FFs and

BTLSS by minimuffin86 is the one of best one that I came

across.

Hope you writemore stories in the future.😊

Hey thanks for your comments and appreciation. I am glad you liked it!

I loved the opening you gave to Munchy was beautiful and so sincere, that thoroughly radiated through the one shot, the lyrics synchronized with each scene and each movement so well😃 Actions speak louder than words, that's always been the case for ArHi if not most of the time 😆and I love how u portrayed that as the Diwali scene has been one of the my most favorite scenes of the show

I feel like this OS should be narrated by some whispering voice in the bg while the show unravels as it does... it would certainly fill in a lot of gaps created by the IPKKND script in which many nuances that Arnav and Khushi could have are simply lost in the telling...

Originally posted by: mistyrains

It was beautiful Pankti and I'm so glad you are writing more. The song was perfect, going with Arnav's thoughts. But what stood out was the way you have created this feeling throughout the whole OS, of Arnav missing her, and that was done perfectly, emphasizing on the right emotions. Left me smiling, when it ended!

awesome 😃