SOUND OF LIFE Ch28(end) pg 55 oct 23

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi friends...

how r u guys...hope all r doing good...

thought of writting a FF...this is my fifth ff...hope u guys like it...

i am taking few scenes from novels...i hope u guys dont mind that...

i really want ur support guys like u gave for my other ff...

whenever u get time please leave ur opinion...ur comments encourages me a lot...

and sometimes ur comments make me include some more scenes...

so when u get time please do tell ur opinions r atleast hit like button...

okay here goes my FIFTH story...


SOUND OF LIFE


sun is raising slowly...birds r humming there songs...

since it is april month climate in kodaikanal(it is in tamilnadu currently i am starting

the story from kodaikanal) is very pleasant..summer vacation also

started many tourist people r started to come to kodaikanal...

khanak :ansh...ansh...

khanak came near the bed...bed is covered with bed sheet...

a smile appeared on khanaks face...

khanak:there once lived a boy called ansh...he is very cute...

khanak slowly walked towards bed while talking...

there is a small shake inside bed sheet...

khanak : one day a small snake entered his room...

khanak now slowly sat on the bed...there was little more shake inside the bedsheet..

khanak:that snake slowly entered inside his bedsheet..

khanak slowly inserted her hand inside the bed sheet...

there was lot of shake with a small giggling laugh...

khanak:that snake slowly moved from his toe towards his stomach...

while talking khanaks hand gently crawled upon ansh leg...

ansh:mommy no...stop...

ansh sat on the bed with a smile and giggle...

khanak still made him giggle...

khanak : ansh its getting late come lets get ready...

ansh:mommy first we have to go to cake shop..u promised me...

khanak:ummm...ok..sure...first get ready...

ansh : s mummy...ansh kissed khanaks cheeks...

ansh and khanak got ready...khanak was wearing a saree and ansh

was wearing a pant shirt with sweater...

khanak locked the house and she took her scooty made ansh to

stand infront and she started to drive ...

ansh:mommy ...

khanak:ummm...

ansh:deepa di will also come na...

khanak:s..she will be there...

ansh:wow..i will play with her...

khanak stopped her scooty infront of the cake shop ...

khanak and ansh went inside the cake shop..

ansh:mommy i want black forrest cake...

khanak:bhaiya blackforest cake one...

ansh:mommy two..for deepa di also...

khanak smiled at ansh then ordered for two cakes...

khanak paid money for the cakes...

ansh:mommy see this cake...

ansh pulled khanaks saree pallu...khanak did not expected this

she missed balance...she was about to fell down a pair of hands

holded her waist...khanak has closed her eyes...on the touch of the hands she felt

something she opened the eyes...her eyes wide opened...

khanak:shantanu...(whisper)

shaan:khanak...(whisper... his face full of lot of emotions..)

her face became tensed and then changed to anger...

she quickly moved out of his hold...she quickly carried ansh in her arms...

shaan was about to walk behind her...he stopped watched the moving figure with a kid...

and walked out quickly and got in an auto which was standing out...

she left her scooty in the cake shop and she went in the auto...




hey friends please leave ur opinions when u get time...

ansh age is 3 ...do u guys like the name ansh...

sneha suggested that name so i kept that name...

i will not be able to write daily..whenever i get time i will update and will send u guys pm...

if any one wants pm please buddy me so that i can send u guys pm whenever i update...

































my first FF LOVE STORY


second FF KYA JODI YAAR


third FF ANOTHER LOVE STORY


fourth FF DIL THOH PAGAL HAI


my OS



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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow NIkki!!!!!!!! Awesome start
i loved it n yeah Aansh is very nice name i loved it
i loved the way Khanak wake up her baby sooo sweet of her
Khanak n shaan met at cake shop
again i have start with my questions 😆
is Aansh shanak baby 🤣
Khanak left the scooty n took the auto after seen shaan
she got angry
take ur time Nikki wil wait for the update
loved this beginning😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: heer_85

Wow NIkki!!!!!!!! Awesome start

i loved it n yeah Aansh is very nice name i loved it
i loved the way Khanak wake up her baby sooo sweet of her
Khanak n shaan met at cake shop
again i have start with my questions 😆
is Aansh shanak baby 🤣
Khanak left the scooty n took the auto after seen shaan
she got angry
take ur time Nikki wil wait for the update
loved this beginning😊


thanks a lot heer...lot of questions...each will answered...i hope u guys will like it...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wooow cantr wait for the next update wanna really know what bappened btween them xxx
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey niki its a pretty gud start
at least they know each other
the name ansh is very cute
lukin fwd to the update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: aasma1

wooow cantr wait for the next update wanna really know what bappened btween them xxx


thanks a lot man...it will be unfolded... i hope u like it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: IF_rida

hey niki its a pretty gud start
at least they know each other
the name ansh is very cute
lukin fwd to the update


thanks a lot rida...how r u ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nikiii superlike it...

grt starting well m bit sure dat ansh is shanak kidbt i wanna knw hw dey seperated n dey were married????????????

ansh is sooo cute...

waiting fr nxt...😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey niki
nice one:) love the title, even the name ansh
why is khanak angry???? n why shaan is filled with emotions??? as he done something wrong???
waiting for the next one:):):)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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heyy Nikki
nice story,,,,interesting from first chapter..
loved the introduction scene between Mom & Son... so, they know each other...hmmm
continue soon

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