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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome blossom update niki!!
Loved the both the games...
oh my my next one is hot😳 eagerly waiting for it!!
and yes lets wish for Khanak, on the mind reading game😉
hope even she gets that😆
Update soon!!!
One request niki, please update the tale in your blog, i wanted an update on it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi friends ...thanks for the lovely comments..thanks for liking the story...whoever gave me the email ids i have sent u an email invite..pleasecheck it out..i dont know why today evening current did not go...so i finished this part...if anyone wants invite please PM me ur email ids

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next day early morning...


ansh : mom...mom...


khanak woke up but still sleep..


khanak : wat ansh...


ansh : loo...ma...


khanak got up and took him to washroom...


after coming khanak saw the clock it showed 4 o clock...


khanak : come lets sleep some more time...


ansh : no mom i am not sleepy...


khanak saw shaan who was sleeping nicely...


so khanak took ansh and they came out of the room


and they went inside ansh room which is next room...


they saw around...ansh was looking at the toys...he was smiling...


they were looking at the toys...both ansh and khanak saw a toy...


they looked at eachother..they smiled at eachother...


they both took one bat...and they took a ball...


ansh : come on lets start the game...


khanak : i am going to stand this side...


ansh : i am this side...


khanak :lets start the game...


khanak hit the ball with the bat...it went to ansh side...


but ansh missed and it hit the wall...


khanak : hey i got one point...


ansh : mommy mommy no...lets start from first...


khanak :umm...ok...


(game is they have the criket bat in there hands...they take a ball..


they have to hit the ball so that opposite side wall it should touch


then they get point...this is the game...)


meanwhile shaan waked up ...he saw they were not there...


he looked the watch...where did they go this time...


he came out of the room...he heard some sound from next room...


he slowly peeped inside without ansh and khanak noticing him...


he was surprised they were playing...and khanak was like a kid playing...


she was smiling...she was enjoying it a lot...


khanak : yah...another point for me...


khanak jumped in joy and she did a small dance...


shaan thought omg baby u r killing me this early morning...with a smile..


ansh : no...he took the ball near her wall and hit many times...


khanak : ansh...this is bad...u r cheating man...


ansh : no..i no chaet...(smile)


khanak smiled at his talk..


khanak : no more cheating okay...


ansh : s mom...u also no cheat...(shaking his head...)


khanak : ummm..(smile)


they again played ansh did the same thing...


ansh : mommy i won...


khanak : hey u cheated me...


ansh : no..no i dont cheat...jumped and smiled...


khanak : ansh...


he ran towards him and carried him in her arms and


she started to giggle ansh...ansh started to laugh...


ansh : momm..mommy ...no...


khanak : agree u cheated...making him giggle...


ansh : umm..ok...leave me...


khanak left him for a second...


ansh looked at her and with a smile...no cheat..laughed at her...


she carried him in her arms and she rotated him...


while rotating she saw shaan who was standing near the door...


she was shocked..she missed balance...


she was about to fall down along with ansh...shaan noticed that...


he came very quickly and he holded her along with ansh and they fell on the bed...


khanak and ansh top of shaan...khanak was shocked...


khanak tried to getup...ansh made khanak lay down near shaan...


and ansh was lying partailly on khanak.,...


ansh : come on papa make mom to giggle...


ansh started to do with his child hand...


khanak : ansh..no...


shaan : as u wish my son...


khanak was shocked...shaan turned sideways to khanak...


and khanak was looking at him shock...


shaan brought his hand towards her neck...


khanaks heart was beating fastly...


there eyes were starring at eachother...


khusbhoo : ho hi..wat a romance in morning...


shanak were shocked and they looked at entrance...


madhavi and khusbhoo were standing...madhavi smiled and walked away..


shaan and khanak moved away little away...


khusbhoo : dont u guys know we r sleeping...umm okay continue


romance without noise...(smiled naughtyly and went)


khanak quickly got from bed walked to their bedroom...


later in the morning breakfast


shaans cell rang...


shaan : ha..bua...umm we will come in the evening..


no rest..yes tired..but i am going to office for meeting...


defiently will come in evening sure ...


later in the evening...shaan came from office very tired...


he went to the room he saw ansh was sleeping...


and khanak was in a saree...


shaan : ummmansh is sleeping...let me tell bua will come some other day...


khanak : no...


shaan looked at her in shock...raised his eyebrows...


khanak : uhh...lets go...


shaan looked at ansh in the bed and then looked at khanak...


varshana : bhabhi...she entered the room...


khanak : thanks varshana...takecare of him...


varshana : dont worry.. i will be here bhabi...u go and come...(with a smile)


shaan was surprised at her..how she is mingling with his family...


and they way she is ready to go to buas house...a smile appered...


they went to buas house in car...khanak saw shaans face..he really looked tired..


they reached buas house...after a small welcome...


shaan was sitting in the sofa with his head at back and eyes closed...


bua : r u alright...


shaan : ha little headache...


bua : headache...wat happened...she walked towards cubboard...


shaan : i am really tired bua...


bua : take this tablet...


shaan took the tablet...khanak felt sad on seeing his tiredness..


shaan : bua i will take a small nap...


he walked to a bedroom and he fell on the bed..


bua was giving sweets to khanak..she was about to sit and talk...


buas phone rang...she atttended the phone...


bua : important now...ha..ha...ummm okay...


bua : sorry beta..important case came in hospital..so i have to go...


they both went to see shaan he was sleeping nicely...


bua switched off the light and they came to hall...


bua : i am going now..let shaan take rest..u make urself


comfortable..dinner is ready in table..be comfortable ma...


its been very important case...so...


khanak : no..no bua.work is first..u go first...(smile)


bua : okay ma..lock the door...


khanak :umm...


khanak locked the door and came to hall and she started to


see the pics in the hall...and she read a magazine...


she was bored..she walked towards the bedroom...


she saw he was sleeping...she walked to the washroom in the room...


she removed her saree pin and she adjusted her saree...


meanwhile she heard some one is moaning sound...


she quickly cameout of the washroom and she saw


shaan was shivering a little..and his lips were trembling...


khanak walked towards him...she sat besides him...


she touched his body..its really cooled..he is shivering a lot...


she quickly covered him with a blanket...


she became tensed...she went to the cubboard where bua took a tablet...


there was lot of tablets..she dont know which one to give...


she saw vicks bottle there...she took it and went to shaan sat near his legs


and started to apply vicks on his legs and she started to rub his legs...


his legs r very very cold...she started to rub hard...


she applied in his hands also..he is shivering a lot without opening his eyes..


(he is really shivering guys..as he was tired a lot..as he did not taken rest)


khanak : phone...let me call mom...


she took his phone from his shirt pocket started to search for a no...


home came ..she clicked on green button...


no battery phone swicted off...he did not charge it...


she came to hall to call from landline...


she took the phone...her fingers were shaking and she was about to hit a number..


damn i dont know a number na...a tear formed in her eyes...


suddenly her eyes landed on the self with bottles...


her face brightened...ha when shaan took her to that estate one day she


was shivering when she was standing under shower for long time...


next day she asked him wat he gave he told he gave alchol...


she went near the cubboard...she took a glass...


but there were many bottles...she dont know which bottle to pour...


so she took a bottle and she poured little init..but its a strong one...


she ran inside the room...she sat besides him...


made his head rest on her chest...she slowly poured inside his mouth...


she placed the glass in the sidetable...


she started to rub his hands and legs..she called out his name...


she thought of calling some person outside but houses were in distance..


she quickly layed besides him and she hugged him...


shaan also needed heat he moved little closer to her..her saree has moved ...


his face resting near her chest...she felt his cold face near her neck...


her mind..khanak this is not fair..go and ask for help...


her heart the houses r far away..if i go..and anythings happen to him...


no..no i wont...khanaks hand tightly hugged him making him come closer...


her mind no khanak dont do this...her heart it is my hubby...he is not feeling well..


i love him when i saw him first...her mind..he did not wat he did...


her heart i love him..i love him very much..he is my hubby now...


her mind move away from him..her heart no..he is my hubby nothing wrong..


khanaks face was near his face..she was hugging and rubbing his bag...


her mind..dont u remeber wat he did...her heart he is not feeling well..


he is not acting..he is not well...her mind..n...her heart shut up...


...
from here it will be in blog...

...

they were sleeping in eachothers arms with a bed sheet covered...


please leave ur opinions in blog aswell as here..😃
Edited by niki_rbo - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Niki its damn hottt...

Am dead🤢🤢...

Thats all i can say!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
i m dead too omgeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 🤢🤢
its very hot Nikki ...☺️ 😳 i m speech less yaar
need water to cool my screen, did i read what u have update some one pinch me 😵
omgeee!!!!!!! i m stil speechless
awesome Nikki only u can write this yaar hats off of u yaar 👍🏼
what will be the reaction of two when they wil wake up like that omgeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! can't wait for next part yaar
please update soon
wish power cut nah ho so we get next update soon😆
Edited by heer_85 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hello Nikki

I am a silent reader of your story ...started reading your SS last week & than i saw your new stroy SOL ...& got hooked to it 😃 i am loving the way shanak are getting close ...can i please get an access to your blog ...i love reading your write ups ...i am reading blogs by aditee & Pranjal. & also started reading story of Chandana really RBO has superb writers 👏

loved the way SOL started ...Cute fights, missunderstandings, hidden feelings & now they are getiing close with each passing moment ...Ansh is superrrb i loved him ...he is a cute kid. i had felt really bad when i read those updates when shaan had forced her to live with him ...than khanak escape & finally destiny tied them together again but this time in a sweet bond of lifetime 😃

Can i please get the invite to your blog?? will PM you my mail ID 😃

thanks

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Posted: 12 years ago
hi Nikki
I am a silent reader and I love all of your stories.
can you please invite me to ur blog?? my e-mail id is garvi.kothari@yahoo.com

Thanks 👏👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey u updated thank god current didnt go hahaha
OMG romance in morning romance in bua's house technically its not a romance but for me everyting is romance 😆
i loved the whole part in bua's house poor shan he is very tired and khanak took care of him how a wife should do
now cant wait when will wake up and c
update soon will check it in blog
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: maneesha28889

Niki its damn hottt...


Am dead🤢🤢...

Thats all i can say!!!!!!


thanks a lot maneesha...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: heer_85

i m dead too omgeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 🤢🤢
its very hot Nikki ...☺️ 😳 i m speech less yaar
need water to cool my screen, did i read what u have update some one pinch me 😵
omgeee!!!!!!! i m stil speechless
awesome Nikki only u can write this yaar hats off of u yaar 👍🏼
what will be the reaction of two when they wil wake up like that omgeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! can't wait for next part yaar
please update soon
wish power cut nah ho so we get next update soon😆


thanks a lot heer...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Swagatika.

Hello Nikki

I am a silent reader of your story ...started reading your SS last week & than i saw your new stroy SOL ...& got hooked to it 😃 i am loving the way shanak are getting close ...can i please get an access to your blog ...i love reading your write ups ...i am reading blogs by aditee & Pranjal. & also started reading story of Chandana really RBO has superb writers 👏

loved the way SOL started ...Cute fights, missunderstandings, hidden feelings & now they are getiing close with each passing moment ...Ansh is superrrb i loved him ...he is a cute kid. i had felt really bad when i read those updates when shaan had forced her to live with him ...than khanak escape & finally destiny tied them together again but this time in a sweet bond of lifetime 😃

Can i please get the invite to your blog?? will PM you my mail ID 😃

thanks



thanks a lot yaar...thank u so much..i have send u an invite..

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