SOUND OF LIFE Ch28(end) pg 55 oct 23 - Page 15

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: aasma1

wooow back to back updates not that ima complaining loool
I dont want shaan to look like the villain in.the story cause I dont think he can do anything rude to khanak xxx


thanks a lot aasma...i have send PM to u...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: heer_85

Wow!!! 2 updates in one day
thanx yaar
Khanak asked Shaan for money and he agree but told her to wrk for him, Khanak signed in a blank paper
later she got to knw she has to be her wife for 1 month
its shocking yaar
omgeee!!!!! wat wil happen next
hw her parents wik react wil she go to meet them n nw wat wil Khanak do
waiting for next part


thanks a lot heer...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Yasharanrocks

interesting twist.cont soon...


thanks a lot friend...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved it yaar.
Poor khanak, what will she do now?
Pls update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Saranya1990

Loved it yaar.
Poor khanak, what will she do now?
Pls update soon.


thanks a lot saranya...r u from tamilnadu...my cousin sister name also saranya...


Edited by niki_rbo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow ... the story is getting more interesting
mean shaan and poor khanak
but em lukin fwd to the fights endless teasing the passion and romance
its amazing
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: IF_rida

wow ... the story is getting more interesting
mean shaan and poor khanak
but em lukin fwd to the fights endless teasing the passion and romance
its amazing
update soon


thanks a lot rida...i hope u like further story too...
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi friends...


ch : 9

khanak tore the agreement paper...shaan throwed some more papers in table...

shaan:those r xerox...

khanak :no..its just a joke...ha na shantanu...

shaan:ummm...

khanaks face became normal with a smile...

shaan:no its not a joke...

khanak : wat..have u gone mad...

shaan : ummm...no...(so cooly)

khanak :ur parents will be angry at u..

shaan : they will not know they all gone to US to see bhaiya...

khanak : my parents will complain about you in police...

shaan:hey u FD...in the agreement u have said i am willingly agreeing...

khanak:no i did not write it..u cheated me...u cheated me...tears were forming ..

shaan : i was about to tell the work..ur phone rang ..u signed the paers and

u went out with the money...

khanak recalled last day...and she thought shit i am idiot...

shaan : thinking urself an idiot...(teasing smile)

khanak :past is past...look here shantanu...i will be ur servant but not this...

shaan :no...i wont accept that...(adamant)

khanak : wat no...i am going away from this place...

khanak turned around and started to walk towards entrance...

shaan:oh hello wait...u think i am an idiot...bringing u far away here...

see there r dogs outside...which is full of anger...u cont escape from them...

those dogs will not come inside the house they will be outside alone...

and suppose u escape its surrounded by electric fense...to avoid forrest animals to

enter inside...(said it with a laugh and smile)

khanak just looked at him that is not true...

shaan:i am not lying u can test by urself...i am hungry i am going in...

shaan walked towards dinning table...

khanak just shook her head and walked towards entrance...

she opened the door ...she stood still...there was a dog standing there...

she was about to take a step..it barked...when she was in it did not do

anything...she became very scared...

she walked back in...she dont know wat to do...she came to dining table...

shaan was eating in the dinning table...she saw the foods her stomach arched her...

shaan : wat u r not going...(while eating)

khanak turned her face so that he cannot see her tear that roll down...

she composed herself...she turned and looked at him firmly...

khanak : see shantanu..i wont compain to anyone...please leave me...

i will not disturb u in any way...

shaan did not bother to hear anything...

shaan : come eat..all r delicious..u need some strength...(winked at her)

khanak :shit...she turned her face...i dont eat ur food...

khanak walked to her room...she went and layed in bed tears rool down..

it was a sec...she quickly got up and she locked the room...

she looked around there was a sofa..she tried hard to push near the door...

she finally placed it there...she locked the windows...

she even locked the washroom...she was standing near the bed..she sat down

on floor and tears rolled down..she kept her head on bed...

she started to cry...she dont know when she slept...

she opened her eyes ...when she heard the knock on the door...

she was terrified...she looked around...she saw herself...

she was sitting in the floor and her head in bed...

a long breath she left out...there was again a knock on the door...

she dont know wat to do...she quickly searched around...

finally her eyes landed on flower vase...she quickly went and grabbed

it in her hand...her face full of tensed...she slowly walked towards

the door...she holded the vase tightly...she slowly took one hand from vase

and she opened the door and she quickly holded the vase...

she was about to throw the vase...but stopped it...

it was the boy ramu with coffee cup...he saw khanak standing with vase...

he was shocked...but then smiled and khanak quickly kept the vase down...

khanak : u r ramu na..please help me...please help...

she begged him...

but ramu talked in some other language..she cannot understand...

khanak:wat...damn i dont understand wat u speak...shit...

khanak explained him in action...but ramu cannot understand...

khanak:uff...oh no...

ramu placed the coffee cup and went to kitchen...

khanak:ufff...wat to do...she saw steps yesterday night...

she slowly walked to hall...there was no sighn of him r there is no sound...

she quickly walked towards the stairs...it was very cold...

her toes became cold...she was rubbing her hand and walked every corners

of terrace..she was shocked...she sat down in the terrace floor in shock...

outside every where full of greens..only trees bushes...

no sighn of anyone r any building out there...she was broken...

tears roll down from her cheeks...





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Posted: 13 years ago
WOW!!!! superb niki😊
Loved it!!!! Niki raaz kab kholne waali ho???
why is he doing this???? and where is he now????
Poor Khanak, she should have heard him first and then signed😔
Ramu is also no help to her, and the dogs outside the house, Shaan ne poore tayyari ke saath yeh sab kiya!!!!
Waiting for next update!!!
Update soon😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome nikki something which is very different and nice
superb work
next part soon

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