SOUND OF LIFE Ch28(end) pg 55 oct 23 - Page 19

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: heer_85

Nice update
Poor Khanak trying to find the way to move out of the house bt all tricks in vain
what is Shaan trying to do? he is so heartless, Khanak didn eat for 2 days feeling sad for her
shaan knocked d door
now wat wil Khanak do
waiting for d update


thanks a lot heer...i hope u will like next update...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: jaisyjazz

this shan is so confusing is he in love with her seriously and just playing along and will tell her afterwards or he seriously wants to trouble her poor khanak ro ro ke bura haal hai uska shan just should stop now

yayyy u will update another part today itself i m waiting for it bring it on :)


thanks a lot jasiy...in next update u will know it...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maneesha28889

wow awesome update niki...😊


loved it...will wait for the next part then...hope u post it today...


thanks a lot maneesha...umm ya posting it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi friends...i dont know whether u guys like it r not this update...i dont know whether it is upto u guys

expectations..i hope u guys like it...

friends i want to say that shaan is also remebering his flash back...

both shaan and khanak r recalling these flashback ...after shaan seeing

ansh and khanak in the party in kodaikanal...so both their POV is written...

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shaan :wifey..come on open the door...

khanak placed the chair on the sofa and slided to the door so that he cannot open..

shaan : come on wifey i am waiting...

khanak : no..never...

sound of door knock stopped...she was standing still ...

khanak thought has he gone...she stood there for some more minutes...

there was no sound outside...she let out a long breath...

she turned around to go to bed...she bumped ...she missed balance on the sudden..

khanak was shocked it was shaan who was standing there with a teasing smile...

she was about to fall ...but shaan holded her tight...

khanak : hey u..how did u enter...leave me...leave me u ...

but shaan did not leave her..he was holding her tight and it was a tight hug...

shaan :u want to know how na wifey...

khanak :leave me..leave...

shaan :through that door...he pointed sideways...

khanak thought how can a door come all of a sudden...

shaan :u idiotic wifey...thats middle door for both the rooms...

dont u7 remeber next room is my room...(teasing smile)

khanak :umm..anyways..leav...leave me..u stupid...

shaan : how can i..u r wifey for a month...

khanak :no..leave..never...ahhh...

shaan carried her in his arms...khanak tried to escape from him...

but shaan was too strong for her...since she did not eat that made her go weak...

shaan and khanak landed on bed...khanak slapped on his arms...

but shaan was too strong...shaan holded her arms very tight...

khanak tried to push him with her legs..but she could not...

his legs were interwined with hers...shaan took his hand and pulled off her saree...

khanak with her nails scratched his arms and face...

but shaan grabbed her hand again... shaan brought his face very close to her face...

khanak :shantanu ..leave me...r i will ...

shaan looked at her with a stern look and asked wat will u do...

khanak tried to bite ...but shaan grabbed her mouth with his with a forcefull kiss...

his whole body was crushing hers...that hard kiss made her go weak...

she has no strength to fight him...and finally he made her as his...

in the next day morning...khanak slowly opened her eyes...

she saw sideways there was no one..she looked at herself...

she was shocked...her dresses torn and she recalled last night...

tears started to roll down from her eyes...

she saw that sidedoor it was closed...she was crying a lot...

khanak was talking toherself...how can u shantanu..how can u..

i kept u in my heart...but u...why did u do this ...i loved u..but u...

she recalled her first day college and she was talking to herself...

on the first day of college..when i saw u i felt like i know u..

i dont know why onseeing u itself i felt attracted...

when ur friend said ur name..i was happy...but when i saw ur hands kept

on other girl i got angry...whenever i saw u in the campus my heart beated

fastly...i felt nervous..they way ur eyes saw me my body shock a lot...

but on seeing u with tina i got more angry and

that made me to tease u...oneday we juniors were playing in the basketball

court..u guys came there...and challenged us for game...

we also agreed for it and when we were playing u was running either

back of me r infront of me...u was around me...i was enjoying that game...

whenever u came near me..that perfume smell and the way when ur arms brushes

mine..i felt shock and thrill in myself...in that game when i was about to fall

u got me ur arms encircled me...and my hand around ur neck.,...

ur face was close to mines...but tina came and broke that trance...

onthat day i felt angry when i asked question to me why am i angry i found

i love u...but i dont know whether u love me r not...

next day i came to canteen with nisha i could not find u...

tina was sitting with her friend maya near my table...

i heard there conversation...

maya :did shaan propose to u...

tina : is there a need to do in action of words..everything is clear in just actions..

she said that with a smile...on hearing that i was broken a lot...

u love tina...on that day i was broken a lot...next exams came

and i did not meet u at all...that anger on tina made me to do a puppet show...

i really wanted to show my anger...after finishing the show everyone was

clapping i saw u ...tina was sitting close to u and she was saying something in ur ear...

i felt like crying so i went to washroom but u get hold of me there...

when u were near me i felt nervous and i felt happy...but when u spoke

and i remebered tina and then in that anger i slapped u...

i really loved u...but today u have proven me i am wrong...

i made a wrong decision...shit...damn...how could u shantanu...she started to cry...

in shaans room ...shaan was in shower ...he was standing in the shower for a

long time..he dont know how much time he has been standing...

his hand closed in fist...he hit has hand on wall hardly...he started to talk to himself...

damn wat have i done...i myself hurted my khanak...shit...

she recalls the day when he met khanak in college...

when he saw her in her class room for the first time he felt something inside...

when i came to know ur name i felt happy in my heart...

i was laughing in my room that day night how u lied that sir has come...

u were very cute and the way u said it i liked it...

i dont know y..may be my egoism made me to play with u in teasing u...

everyday when i came to college i really wished to see u first...

when u were taking seminar ...ur voice...they way u were explaing...

i was mesmerized...u were looking charming enthuastic...

i really loved to tease u...i really liked ur teasing on me...

something i felt happy..but when i saw with vidhruvan in college

in the seminar hall..u was talking with him very interestly it made me anger...

i really wanted to punch him that time and i wanted to slap u also...

u was talking to him with smiile...later i realized i am in love with u...

when we came to basketball court when we played together...

whenever u were near me i felt happy..ur smell ...when urs soft skin arms

brushes me..i felt an electric shock passing in me...when i holded u in my arms

before u fell down...ur closeness...i was flying in air...

next day i tried to meet u..i was coming to ur class...

i stopped and i listened to vidhruvans conversation with raj...

raj : i think u love khanak...and khanak also loves u...

vidhruvan : how can u say ...(with a smile)

raj :we know it man...(laugh)

on hearing that conversation i was broken a lot...my heart was broken...

and on farewell party when i saw u first time in saree...

i was mesmerized by ur beauty..but when i saw vidhruvan was talking with u...

and he was standing along with u...and everything made my anger increase...

and when u slapped me in washroom that also increased my anger...

why u did not love me...i really loved u..why...he hit his hand on the mirror...

mirror brken down some particles struck in his hand and blood came

from his hand...tears came from his eyes...

shaan and khanak : i hate u...i hate u khanak/shaan...


hey friends leave ur opinion whenever u get time...

does the story go in flow ? do u guys like this story...?

do u guys like the way i am writing...?

next update i dont know when...when i update i will PM u guys...

these three days i was free so i wrote daily...from tomorrow work will be there

so whenever i get time i will update...

PS : still one month agreement is there ...





Edited by niki_rbo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow awesome update niki...😊

They love each other so much that they hurted each other unknowingly...now they are like hating each other...OMG wat will happen next then...eager to read the next update...hope u update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh god..felling soo bad fr khanak...
dey bth loved each other bt due to misunderstanding all dis happed😭😭
gosh 1 month is left...he will do all dis daily?????/
waiting fr nxt...
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG what was this niki till now aisa ek second ke liye bhi nahi laga that they love each other ab tak toh mujhe inka pyar kahi nazar hi nahi aaya and now suddenly i m very happy and surprised to know that they love each other from the first day of college u r a brilliant writer hatts off to u
ok now i m getting their attraction love and anger but shan all messed it up aisa karke he just multifold the misunderstandings between them though i must say ke the kiss was hot😉 hehe i cant imagine how they r gonna face it now and how they will stay together for one whole month kash is whole month me hi kuch baat ban jati toh woh dono alag nahi hote
and good that u made it clear by saying that they both r recalling their flashbacks till now i was thinking from khanak's pov but actually its both and thats good otherwise phir shan ek mystry ban jata haha just kidding
oh ho i know from tomorrow working day starts today was such nice day got so many things to read kash aisa din har roj aaye
waiting for next :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
babe ima at work, but wooow niki they loved eachother and tgey still do hopefully they can trll eachother xxx
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update Nikki
They both love each other bt due to their misunderstanding they hurt each other in anger
loved hw u wrote their flash back
waiting for next update n der is stil one mnth for Khanak to leave with him
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Posted: 13 years ago
AWESOME NIKKI
LOVING IT AND YES IT IS NICELY GOING IN FLOW
NEXT PART SOON

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