MG FF-VIVAH - Thread 7 - Page 17

Created

Last reply

Replies

711

Views

172.4k

Users

205

Likes

3.2k

Frequent Posters

Shruthe thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 12 years ago
Poongs this is for you...


poongs123 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: poongs123

fact fact fact hahhahahah

aka na poi saptu vanthuren
Shruthe thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: poongs123

aka na poi saptu vanthuren


check the photo...
Remya_Pillai thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 12 years ago
wow di..!!
love u a lot...
Happy onam...😃 in advance...
-lakshmi- thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
ritzy09 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 12 years ago

Thank you friends for your lovely comments. I have adjusted few colors based on the feedback.

Also, though I am giving 3rd update for this week, please don't expect it to continue. My work will be picking up again from next week so one or two updates per week with next update most likely on Wednesday

Remya and others from Kerala – Happy Onam in advance

Tushti-Kiran – I know you asked for not wasting an update on Rahul's POV but I think it is important.

In general guys please bear as next 2 updates (including this one) may not have a lot of Maaneet moments but they are more focused on family. But I promise after that, story will be totally focused on how they come together.

VERY IMPORTANT: Please add ritzypm as buddy to gets PMs for this FF

Chapter 47

Next Day, Maan was in office while Geet was giving tea to Mohinder in his room. Rahul came from office and Rano served tea to him too.

"Doctor se baat hui?"

[Did you talk to the doctor?]

"Hmmm…reports are all positive. Tusi itni fikar na karo"

[Hmmm…reports are all positive, You don't worry so much.]

Rano nodded.

"I am ok Rahul. "

Then she held his hand.

"Rahul, maine pehle bhi dekha tha…hospital mein aur kal bhi. Maan ne tere papa ke liye jo kiya tu uske baad bhi us se thik se baat tak nahi karta. Why are you so angry?"

[Rahul, I noticed it before also…in hospital and the yesterday also. Whatever Maan did for your papa after that also you don't even talk to him properly. Why are you so angry?]

"Why I am angry? Yeh aap puch rahe ho Mom?"

[Why I am angry? This you are asking Mom?]

"Beta"

Rahul spoke loudly –

"Kya Beta Mom. He hurt my Geet. My Geet. If someone hurts her won't it pain me? We never let any tears come in her eyes and today...

But you are right. Why should I be angry at him? He may have given me immense pain but he is probably not someone I should be angry with. I haven't given him that right.

But I am angry at myself. Since her birth, Geet has tied Rakhi to me. I vowed to protect her. In school / college, I never let anyone even look at her with bad intentions and now. Someone came and broke her heart so miserably and I could not save her. I couldn't do a thing…I have never felt so helpless in my entire life."

Tears streamed down Rahul's eyes as he thumped down on sofa.

"Main phir bhi chup hoon Mom. Chup hoon because somewhere I understand what you said. Usko maarne se ya Geet se dur karne se, meri behen ki khushiyan wapis toh nahi aayengi na."

[Still I am quiet mom. Quiet because somewhere I understand what you said. Hitting him or keeping him away from Geet will not return her happiness back.]

Rano caressed his head with love. Rahul turned to see his mother in tears. Realizing the situation due to his dad's health, he apologized "Sorry Mom…I don't think it is right time to talk about all this. Hum dad ke thik hone ke baad yeh…"

Rano shook her head in denial

"It's ok Rahul. Beta, College aur shaadi mein farak hota hai. You know what the biggest difference is? You were protecting your sister from unwanted eyes. But here, your own sister loves him. Agar ek baar bhi mujhe aisa lagta na ki woh us ke bina khush reh payegi, ya phir, if he had abused her, hit her or misbehaved with her. Ek baar bhi…toh kabhi usko apni beti ke paas wapis aane nahi deti. But I have only seen love in her eyes for him. Aur ab, uski nazron mein bhi mujhe woh ehsaas dikhta hai. Isiliye I want them to start their life afresh."

[It's ok Rahul. Son, there is difference between marriage and college. You know what the biggest difference is? You were protecting your sister from unwanted eyes. But here, your own sister loves him. If even once, I had felt that she will be happy without him or if he had abused her, hit her or misbehaved with her. Even once, I would not have let him come even close to my daughter. But I have only seen love in her eyes for him. And now, even in his eyes I see similar emotions. Hence, I want them to start their life afresh.]

"Aapka dil bahut bada hai Mom. Par mera dil darta hai. I am scared mom. I can't see my sister going through this pain again. Aur waqt ke saath, this pain will deepen only if things don't work out between them. I am scared of her breaking down Mom. I just want Geet's happiness. Uski ankhon mein aur ansoon nahi dekh sakta mom."

[Your heart is very big Mom. But my heart is scared. I am scared mom. I can't see my sister going through this pain again. And with time, this pain will deepen only if things don't work out between them. I am scared of her breaking down Mom. I just want Geet's happiness. I can't see any more tears in her eyes mom.]

Rahul broke down completely crying on Rano's shoulder.

He looked back when he felt Geet's hand on his shoulder. She wiped his tears. Her own eyes shone with unshed tears -

"Yeh sab kya hai Rahul. Stop it. Please. Tu agar aise royega na toh mein bhi…."

[What is all this Rahul. Stop it. If you cry like this then even I will…]

Rahul stood up, wiping her tears.

"Who told you I am in pain or crying. Sab thik hai Rahul. Maan always took care of me. Yes there were emotional distances but please don't make him a villain like this. Galti meri bhi hai. Maybe I had some extreme reactions also. Tujhe yaad hai na. You only told me that don't have any regrets. I don't have any regret Rahul. Mein khush hoon and aage bhi rahungi. Please tu itni tension mat le. I am sure this time it will work out. I am telling you the truth. I am happy. I have no regrets."

[Who told you I am in pain or crying. Everything is ok Rahul. Maan always took care of me. Yes there were emotional distances but please don't make him a villain like this. Even I made mistakes. Maybe I had some extreme reactions also. You remember, you only told me that don't have any regrets. I don't have any regret Rahul. I am happy and will stay happy. Please don't ge so tensed. I am sure this time it will work out. I am telling you the truth. I am happy. I have no regrets.]

"But I have."

"Rahul"

"Agar yeh shaadi nahi hui hoti toh aaj yeh din hi nahi aata."

[If this marriage itself would not have happened, then today we would not be seeing this day itself.]

With that Rahul started walking away

"Don't say that Rahul. Life mein koi guaranties nahi hoti. Is se behtar hota ya bura yeh kisne dekha hai Rahul. Yes, it is true that in these 5 months my heart has developed feelings that I can not run away from. Mein in se dur jaa sakti hoon par bhul nahi sakti. Yes it is true ki ek aisa rishta bandh chukka hai jise mein tod sakti hoon par use nazar andaaz nahi kar sakti. And there is another fact Rahul. There is no control over heart and love and I love him. Us ke bina khush nahi reh sakti."

[Don't say that Rahul. Life has no guaranties. Things would have bee better or worse, who has seen it Rahul? Yes, it is true that in these 5 months my heart has developed feelings that I can not run away from. I can go far away but I can not forget. Yes it is true that I am tied in such a relationship which I can break but can't ignore. And there is another fact Rahul. There is no control over heart and love and I love him. I can't stay happy without him.]

Rahul wiped his tears and walked towards her wiping her tears.

"Teri khushi se badh kar kuch nahi Geet. I will never stand in your happiness. But that does not mean that it does not hurt or I trust him fully. Koshish karunga to change my feelings for him but I can't promise."

[There is nothing more important then your happiness. I will never stand in its way. But that does not mean that it does not hurt or I trust him fully. I will try to change my feelings for him but I can't promise.]

As Rahul walked away, he almost collided with Maan who was standing at the door. They shared a brief eye lock before Rahul removed his gaze and started walking out. As he crossed him, Maan spoke - "I am sorry Rahul. I know I have hurt you and everyone in the family a lot. Even if I want, I can not turn around time. I understand your feelings about me. All I can say is that I hope I can change it by keeping Geet happy. Some day, you accept me because not only are you my family but also because Geet can never be truly at peace till you are."

Rahul looked at Maan and nodded walking away.

Maan entered calming Geet and Rano mom.

Precap - "Vicky so gaya na…mein ek baar dekh kar aati hoon use"

kkiddoo thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update love both the bro-sis bonding 😊
Edited by payalpari - 12 years ago
-lakshmi- thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
nice one...

can understand the dilemma rahul is facing! it shows how much he cares for geet...loved the sibling bonding!

maan is true... geet wont be happy until all her family accepts her and maans relation. and seeing them happy only will make all trust him completely.

precap is bit confusing... vicky? is geet in km???

😔 sad that have to wait more now for the updates! but i immenely loved this week...dhanadhan updates mil rahe they! i will miss it...but hope ur hectic shedule soon becomes relaxed and we get more and more updates,,,,greedy me!!!😆

will be waiting for wed!

ps: last time i was 3rd today 2nd... me happy and feel dancing
Edited by -lakshmi- - 12 years ago
Shruthe thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 12 years ago
This was one of the much required updates...

i was actually waiting to know rahul's POV... and it was awesome ...
Everyone is right from their POV... and Rahul's anger just expresses the affection he holds for his sister... and like maan said, with time and maaneet getting together things would get better with everyone...

precap makes me feel that Geet finally gets back to Maan... next update on wednesday... phew... i cant wait for the next one...

would be waiting eagerly... and thanks for 3 updates this week
Edited by shrutheAjay - 12 years ago
poongs123 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
di itwas an emotional update btwn sis bro love Heart Scrapshe want take care of his sis so much... i can defo understand his pain ... he is angry on himself for his sis pain ...very well potraied di... how geet told rahul abt her maan and wt special place he have in herHeart Scraptruly Awesome Codesdi Good Job Glitterseagerly waiting for next part diFor You Scraps waiting for geet to move to her house and uh thank u sooo much for 3 updates this weekLove Pictures
Edited by poongs123 - 12 years ago

Related Topics

Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: priya_21

11 years ago

Priya Fan fiction - Update thread /pg 120-22 july

hello friends... am not able do pm regularly... so please my all friend follow this thread... i post the link here... so you get link easily of

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: priya_21

2 years ago

thread #2 Kuch Rang pyaar ke ase bhi/pt21/22/23 -pg31/33/34- 28 may

Concept This is story about two strangers which tied in sacred bond and one partner fall in love with another at first sight. Two individuals...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: tammana.m

3 years ago

Maaneet New SS - Dillagi Thread 2 -Part 88 Page 49- 27/5/25

Dillagi Dil ki Lagi Jab Dil kho jata hai kisi aise mein Jo apna na hoke pe apna sa lagge. Jiski ek jhalak ke leye yeh nighein tarpati rahe Or...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: tammana.m

3 years ago

Maaneet New SS -Dosti ya Pyaar Thread 2-Part 62 page 40 24/6/25

Prologue Zindagi ke kuch faisle hum lete hai or kuch yeh zindagi humse karvati hai.. kabhi hass ke to kabhi is dil pe pathar rakh kar!! but is...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Queen0fDarkness

2 years ago

The Devil in the Dark Thread 2||Chapter 70 pg 24 Updated 26/01

As mentioned in the notes in the other FF threads that I had created the other ID at a time when I wanted to be anonymous and avoid raising...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".