Arhi: Desert Rose Chapter 11 updated pg 113

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charlotte74

@charlotte74

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Posted: 13 years ago

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peepli

@peepli

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Posted: 13 years ago

#412

R..

Oh wow...second time in a row I am first... [:D/] [:D/]

will now read it and then edit this again.. 😉

Your characters are really complicated...dunno if anjali is positive or negative...

Arnav n khushi s awareness was very well brought about..

What are arnav s thoughts about the slap khushi gave him..

Awesome update dear..

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aarrsshhii

@aarrsshhii

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Posted: 13 years ago

#413

grt part again...quite gripping... 👏👏👏
poor khushi...gtta sacrifice so mch...
nd dey kinda hv tht telepathic connxn?? wow...thts grt now... 😊

totally loved d update...thk you..

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norolim

@norolim

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Posted: 13 years ago

#414

Res*

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Im going through a slight tough phase right now. So pardon me if I dont write the usual non-serious comments.

The writing was as usual-excellent. I adore the character portrayal and the dynamics; they are extremely well done. Your plot is brilliant as well. The tension that stems when Arnav and Khushi are together is almost tangible.

Anjali is adorable. And I also liked Arnav's protective streak towards Khushi-the denial is obvious though.

Thank you for updating.

Avi.

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sharme

@sparklystarstud

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Posted: 13 years ago

#415

resvd by me

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once again a beautiful update carol...

u manage to maintain the charm of the deserts n their magic playing with the lives here so perfectly...

and ur Arnav Khushi telepathic relationship so far is amazing...

i felt the goosebumps as Khushi imagined him in her room beside her n i knew he wud come as her Knight...

so Khushi n Payal gonna stay at the guest house... cant wait to read wats gonna happen next...

loved it...

~~~ sam xoxo

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Shweta1691

@Shweta1691

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#416

Gunman is such a creep🤢

So change of lodging huh?!! Hope it gives payal some strength

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Cetronia

@Cetronia

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#417

Wow..I absolutely loved this update, this story is getting heated up every minute...I found the convo betwn Khushi and Anjali about Arnav not being a saint part little funny...man the sis knows her Iil bro a little too well...

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charlotte74

@charlotte74

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Posted: 13 years ago

#418

Originally posted by: aarrsshhii
grt part again...quite gripping... 👏👏👏
poor khushi...gtta sacrifice so mch...
nd dey kinda hv tht telepathic connxn?? wow...thts grt now... 😊

totally loved d update...thk you..

Thanks for your patience arshii! 😊

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bluetaj

@bluetaj

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Posted: 13 years ago

#419

Wow...Raizada ki aurat...well well will be soon Raizada ki chosen one. Will love to see how Anji and khushi get Aakash and Payal meet.

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farheen75

@farheen75

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Posted: 13 years ago

#420

Another fab update as usual...anjilli is such a sweetheart but I don't like payal at all...just for her Khushi has to suffer so much,if she would have been responsible enough then they wouldn't have been in this mess...Khushi shouldn't hide anything from her in order to make her understand that life is not a bed of roses and she should have thought abt all the consequences before taking such a big step in a relationship like getting pregnant without marriage bcz it's not only your life but the life a baby is involved with serious repercussions.