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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update.
and this shyna 😡 I want to kill her.
plz no MU between maan and geet.
plz update soon.


Edited by valli30 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

PART 48

two weeks passed away in a blink… it was the last day of shyna in the house and she would be leaving the very next day in morning… these two weeks was really a hard time for maan… shyna didn't leave even a single opportunity to woo him… he tried his best to stay away from her but she would one way or the other try to be near him… he was going insane with each passing day and was thankful to god that none of the family member noticed her moves or shyna would surely have gone on four shoulders instead of her two legs all thanks to his mishty…

that day was a really busy day for maaneet in office… geet had some disc plans with the raj and this time dadi permitted annie and dev too to enjoy in disc but be back till 12 at maximum… geet was happiest as she always wanted her friends to enjoy the night life of Delhi and thus they all left too disco… maan came home really late around 10 due to some office meetings and was finally feeling relaxed… finally he felt a little light because shyna would be out of their life and he would no longer had to hide something from his mishty…

maan came and set inside his room… the room was dark and dimly lit... it was smelling intoxicating and a romantic setup was created… he was not aware of geet being out as his phone was switched off since evening and thus thought may be his mishty had did for him… he decided to have a quick shower before she came back from mansion as this was her routine to be in mansion with dadi and tell her about her day events and then after family dinner they would return back into outhouse…

after half an hour long warm bath he came out in his track pants and vest… the temperature of the room was perfectly set not too warm nor too hot… lagta h madam Is in good mood today he thought and smiled to himself… he was combing his hairs in dressing table when he felt two hand engulf him from back… at the very touch he knew it was not his mishty's hand… he turned around in an instant and was shocked to see the person standing in front of him…

at disc the people was enjoying fully… they rocked the dance floor moving in beats… the stage was all set with rock hard music playing at DJ and the youngsters shacking their legs on the music… alcohol was flowing like water while some couples were trying to be mushy-wushy getting full advantage of the dark lights and ignorant people…

geet along with her gang too joined the dancers enjoying her first ever disc visit after her marriage… the number was one of her favorites and she was the centre of attraction as she danced gracefully with her perfect moves and grooved the dance floor… raj was holding her while she danced in full swing… same was the case with other couples… dev and annie too joined the floor being single and enjoyed their first ever night out with the friends…

the night was still young and they decided to have some drink… they all were responsible ones and thus ordered mock tails instead of hard drinks… they all sat down on nearby couches and chit chatted for a while… but somewhere geet started felling suffocated as something bad is going to happen… she didn't knew what happened to her suddenly but her sixth sense was giving her bad vibes and at the very moment her thoughts went to maan… she called him the very next moment but couldn't reach through as there was no network… she felt something in her burn and she felt difficult to breath… it was raj who noticed her being so uncomfortable and asked with his eyes what happen… she didn't replied and left outside to get some fresh air…

she came out in the dark where winds were blowing in full swing… temperature was a little low and cold winds were blowing… she felt a hand on her shoulder… she turned to look at the person and saw raj standing beside her… its an odd time for this type of weather in delhi… he looked at the dark clouds that covered the entire city preventing even a single ray of light emitting from the moon… it seems it will rain soon… said raj looking into geet's eyes…

he felt a strange emotion in her eyes and felt the turmoil in her… kya hua geet you look tense raj I feel today a storm will come and its raising a fear inside me… she said lost in her thoughts… raj was perplexed with answer and cupped her face… geet where are you lost bacha… it was the first time he called her bacha after he came… she remembered how he use d to call her bacha when she was so young an innocent child but after all that happened she refused him to ever call her that again… the word made her felt timid like a child and she wanted to be strong hard shell…

she placed her hand over his that were on her cheeks and said with determination… my maan needs me today to protect him from the storm that is trying to engulf our life into it but I would save him and rescue him from that even if it needs me to endanger myself… raj didn't understood even a single word she said and the next second he saw her in her car and the engine roared to life the next second and he heard her last saying… raj please escort dav and annie safely to house along with the rest its your duty the weather is bad and I don't want anyone to be struck in it… with the said she zoomed pass him with the speed of light…

maan pushed back shyna hard making her stumble on her feet… he looked at her dressed in a night gown not much revealing still it enhanced her each body curve perfectly… what are you doing here… he roared not able to believe she could go so low… but this time she didn't answered back… she took a step closer to him and tried to kiss him on lips… he tried to push her hardly but she held his hand tightly and kept on her waist trying to close the distance between them…

maan struggled to free himself… how can she be so strong being a girl he thought but the main point was to shoo the bitch away before someone found them in such a position… he pushed her with all his strength and she felt herself misbalanced an held his vest for support… maan was not prepared for the sudden fall and couldn't balance himself and fell on her with her below him on the bed… it took them a minute to realize what happen… after coming to senses maan saw their position with her on bed lying on her back and him totally lying on her body…

he tried to get up but his hands were stuck up behind her back as she fell on his hand and he tried to free them but she applied her all weight on them making it impossible for him to move… shyna move up he shouted but she pulled him down instead closing the little bit of distance between their bodies…due to the dim lit room he could see her face but the smirk was still visible from the little light he got…

he was trying to get up but was frozen as the lights were clicked on … he looked at the person on the door and was shocked beyond wits to see geet standing in flesh and bones all shocked… he looked into her eyes which were filled with unshed tears and pain in them… he looked back at shyna who pretended to be damsel in distress and faked tears and struggle and it seemed as if he was trying to force her… both of them were badly clad with their night dress and it just worsened the situation…

he immediately stood up and tried to go toward geet… geet please listen to me… he tried to say something but was stopped in mid … he looked at her raised hand which indicated she didn't wanted to hear even a single word from him… he looked into her eyes and he saw deep pain in them which broke him into million pieces…



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Posted: 12 years ago
Yeh me first🥳

Loved the update
finally the storm has arrived
Shyna😡
Maan
Geet 😲
I hope Geet rescues Maan from this storm
I so want Geet to break Shyna's bones
Please no misunderstanding
😕

Continue soon
u can't leave us on this cliffhanger
😲😳
Edited by heytal - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awww Geet you have to trust your Maan
Shyna😡
i'm going to beat her up !
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Posted: 12 years ago
nehaaa how could you stop there ab kya hoga
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mel420

nehaaa how could you stop there ab kya hoga

whi hoga jo manjure neha hoga
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update but it's very unfair of u to stop there =((
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Posted: 12 years ago
I knew it ... now it's time for that witch to see
watll geet do to her lolz m getting funny pic in my head
nd poor maan .. he'll have to hear from geet can't wait
m sure geet is gonna take some serious action against that
shyna nd than against maan lolz he'll b all paani paani
thinking wat if she trust shyna over him lolz
if he had told dis geet earlier this would have never happen
she woe have make sure that shyna is out of their life for good
oooh I can't wait for d next prt
dreamy4ever thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Can't wait to know Wat happens next 😊
Amazing update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow, feeling horrible for geet

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