An Indescribable Emotion Link for #2 PG 136

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I dont know why Im writing this. I have no idea what the crap I just typed. Honestly, I dont like the way it turned out. But here it is, and its up to you guys if you want me to continue or not. PS: To my other Fic readers; this helped me come out of writers block and Im typing Part 17 right now. Tell me what you people think. Somebody asked for the Index. Here it is:
Prologue: Below
Chapter 2:https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3117888&PID=62117730&#62117730
Chapter 4:https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3117888&TPN=24
Chapter 6:https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3117888&TPN=32
Chapter 16 : https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3117888&PID=69472162&#69472162
Chapter 17 : https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3117888&PID=70090390&#70090390
Chapter 18 : https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3117888&TPN=127&#70490990




An Indescribable Emotion

"Shuklaji, gaadi aapko hataani chahiye thi!"

He heard that voice bounce through the air around him, erupting out of nowhere. It compelled him to look around, searching for the source of that delightful sound. As if some deity-the ones he didn't believe in, had heard him; his gaze fell on the backside of a churidaar clad woman.

"Jee haan. Aapko. Hum nahi! Yeh lot hamaara hai!"

The white suit hugged her ample curves decently, highlighting a graceful back and a tucked in waist. Her derriere seemed soft, the legs immensely long for someone of her height.

"Koi baat nahi Shuklaji. Galtiyan toh sabse hoti hain!"

He raised his gaze at an opportune moment, his eyes colliding with the very woman they had been admiring.

His breath halted and his eyes widened as he stared into the most beautiful hazel orbs he had ever seen.

And at that moment, Arnav Singh Raizada knew he was a gone man.

"Shuklaji, gaadi aapko hataani chahiye thi!"

She felt someone look at her back. The feeling was alien, but strangely pleasant. In fact, surprisingly, this feeling was'wonderful. Astoundingly, a strangers gaze was making her feel desired.

"Jee haan. Aapko. Hum nahi! Yeh lot hamaara hai!"

Who was it? Her mind pestered for an answer while her body reveled in the pleasurable feeling. The gaze was doing something funny to her; it was making her stomach do odd sort of'.back flips.

"Koi baat nahi Shuklaji. Galtiyan toh sabse hoti hain!"

Finally, she sighed. Now she could finally know who had been staring at her all this while. She turned around, searching for the person whose heated looks she had felt to the tips of her toes.

Her breath halted and eyes widened as she stared into the most beautiful warm chocolate orbs she had ever seen.

And at that moment, Khushi Kumari Gupta knew she was a gone woman.

The two strangers stared into each other's beguiling eyes; their lenses conveying a thousand thoughts in one second. A second that stretched to a hundred years, yet stopped short of leaving them satisfied.

As an Indescribable Emotion passed through their eyes; Arnav and Khushi turned their backs on each other, walking away only to be be together...forever.

Bakwaas tha ya nahi?

Anyway, your call peeps.

Cheers, Avi.

THIS IS MY WORK. DO NOT COPY.

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Peehu24 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#2
hey! you are back with a new fic...

the prologue sounds interesting...its kind of love at first sight...if not love, then definitely attraction...would be looking forward to this fic..please do update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey Avi, I really liked it. Pls continue and pm me with ur updates. Thks
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sounds great! Love at first sight. Please do continue.
peepli thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#5
that seemed like the start of a fairytale...

you must defo continue...
-Yuks- thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Not bakwas at al
I love ho they both feel and sense each other and get pulled towards each other.

Please do continue!
...shruti... thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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quite interesting
first meet and already attraction
hope he is no ruthless jerk here
continue soon
Edited by Shruti_P - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey..it was wonderfull...and pls continue soon!:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hai avi! I was expecting next part of your ff hj.But you suprised me wit this new beautiful ff. This s really not bakwas instead it s very gud. I loved your way of expressing two strangers feelings in their first meet. Do continue and i hope u update soon:)thanks for the pm:-)
Edited by pari93.92 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice start...
continue...😊

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