An Indescribable Emotion Link for #2 PG 136

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Ann Maria

@MariahMohan

Explorer

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Posted: 13 years ago

#281

Oye Hoye! Iss Sexual Frustration Ko Kya Naam Doon?😆

Heehee! I loved this chapter. I don't know if its because they both were so turned on by each other or because there was thought from both sides simultaneously which really helped understand both their predicaments. Either way, it was a lovely chapter!

Also, I love how you make Khushi's clumsiness seem so sexy! Ahahah! And oh boy, Arnav. And I absolutely adored the last paragraph. They gods laughing at the stupid humans. It was perfect. Because honestly, that was what I was doing. Laughing at their resolutions.

I know I say it all the time, but your writing is fabulous! -Ann:)

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norolim

@norolim

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#282

Originally posted by: MariahMohan
Oye Hoye! Iss Sexual Frustration Ko Kya Naam Doon?😆

Heehee! I loved this chapter. I don't know if its because they both were so turned on by each other or because there was thought from both sides simultaneously which really helped understand both their predicaments. Either way, it was a lovely chapter!

Also, I love how you make Khushi's clumsiness seem so sexy! Ahahah! And oh boy, Arnav. And I absolutely adored the last paragraph. They gods laughing at the stupid humans. It was perfect. Because honestly, that was what I was doing. Laughing at their resolutions.

I know I say it all the time, but your writing is fabulous! -Ann:)

I solemnly swear that I will never take offence to you saying that my writing is fabulous. It aint, but I never said Im not shallow 😆

Its easier to write this than DKC becuase here Arnav and Khushi are actually fine with each other. Unfortunately for these two, in my other fic they are at each others throats.

Its so confusing to write something like that 😕

Love you for the comments Ann! Always a pleasure to read them 😊

PS: Khushi's being klutzy is always going to be sexy. It just gives Arnav an excuse to touch and tease her more often 😎

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sruthick

@sruthick

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#283

Suprb update... Lyk it
They became frnds...!! Wow... Really nice..
Cntinue soon

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meera06

@meera06

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#284

Loved the update!

They became friends!

But for how long can they avoid the sexual tension??

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bhadraprasad

@bhadraprasad

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#285

Fantastic update...with a few words,you portrayed both their physical and mental tensions...loved it dear...Thanks for the PM

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fareeha

@pinkpearlz

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#286

The last sentence made me say ' atleast they are trying'. Am actually happy they are planning to keep their forming friendship, it will be a fun ride for us;)
Awesome update.