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Posted: 13 years ago
hi ria...🤗dekh jaise promise kia tha waise nibhaya maine..😳first chap padh liya..n it was super awesome..👏i loved the blend of characters..matlab raj n naina frm left right left..pia frm pyaar ki ek kahaani n gayathri frm geet..👏loved the concept..n the pics added to it..very beautifully explained..👏thanx pm ke liye..😃

p.s sorry powercut ho gaya tha..but maine tera 1st chap cel ke thru padh liya😳
p.p.s main ek chap ek din padungi k...😛so basically 14 din main complete ho jayega..😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

PERFECT COUPLE
By riaroy

guys today is an memorable for all rp fans as today is ulti duniya;s aniversary so on this occassion i am going to write an os hope that u all will like it as i am trying this for the fisrt time

so as its ulti duniya aniversary i am going to use the term but the story and situation will be according to me

"subhe ke 11baaj rahe haai rajveer jis ke liye aaj uske jeevan ka sab se special day haai aapne morning classes khatam kar ke aapne room ke taraff aa he raha tha ke tabhie ek cadet durte hue aake usse takra jaata haai

rajveer jo ke aapne mann he maan aaj ke din ko kaise celebrate karega soch raha tha achanaak is cadet ko aase usse takrate hue dekh kar uske woh soch jaise disturbed ho jaata haai woh us cadet ko rokhte hue aapne usse pucchta haai
By [URL=http://profile.imageshack.us/user/riaroy]"what happen cadet why are u running like this is everything ok?" ab woh cadet jo ke bohot he ghabbraya hue tha aapne fumbling voice mein rajveer ko kaheta haai"sir sir woh woh naina mam " ab naina jo ke rajveer ke jeevan mein sab se zada maainne rakhte haai uska mention hote he rajveer ka mann jaise ek dam ghabbara jaata haai woh us cadet ko uske shoulder se pakaarte hue aapne pucchta haa
By "kya kya hua haai naina ko just tell me damittt?"

rajveer ko aase uske chillate hue dekh kar woh cadet jo ke pahele se he ghabbaraya hua tha uske haalat toh aur bigaar jaata haai woh aapne saliva ko kisi tara gulp karte hue rajveer ke taraff dekhte hue kaheta haai"sir sir woh actually aaj jab mam hume drills sikha rahe the tab achnaak unhe kya ho gaya woh behosh hoke neeche gir gaaye hume toh samjah mein he nahin aa rahe the ke hum kya kare dr shaliny ko bulanne ke liye jaa rahe the "

us cadet ke yeh baat sunke rajveer jis ke zindage suru aur khatam dono naina par he hote haai uska toh
duniya he ghum jaata haai woh kuch naa kahe ke sidha ground ke taraff bhaagta haai

rajveer jab ground mein pohochta haai tab woh dekhta haai ke naina ke cadets usse gher kar khare hue haai naina ko aase
behoshi ke haalat mein dekh kar rajveer ka toh dil he chir jaata haai woh jaake naina
By ko aapne bahon mein uttha ke
infermary ke taraff leeker jaata haai

rajveer jab naina ko leeker infermary pohochta haai tab uske best friend cum advicer dr shaliny jo ke hamesha aapne maaziya mood mein rahete haai unhe aase dekh kar
aapne as usuall teasing tone mein kahete haai
"mujhe pata haai major ke aaj ka din aap ke aur naina ke life ka sab se special day haai par is ka matlab yeh toh nahin ke aap subhe se he aapke jaan ko aase aapne bahon mein uttha ke ghumte rahe this is really bad kaam se kaam aap ko academy ke rules ko toh follow karna chaheye naa after all u both are a respionsible officer of this academy "

dr shaliny ko aase usse tease karte hue dekh kar rajveer jis ka mann us waqt bohot he pareshan aur ghabraya hua tha us par gusse se chuillate hue kaheta haa
"plzzz doc aap aapne yeh bakwas bandh kijiye aur aake naina ko dekheye pata nahin isse kya ho gaya haai"rajveer eyes gets welled up with his tears

rajveer ko aase rota hua dekh ke dr shaliny jo ke unke pyaar ka hamesha supporter rahe haai feels bad woh rajveer ko naina ko bed par litta hue kahe ke usse intezar karne ke liye kahete haai haa

After checking naina
dr shaliny jab rajveer ke pass aata haai tab rajveer who was really worried for his naina shaliny ko pucchta haai"doc kya kya hua hai mere naina ko is she ok ?" ab dr shaliny who knew the reasson behind naina's fainting aapne sar ko hillate hue kahete haai
"ummhmm bilkul nahin kitne sahane se main aapko nahin baatunge ke aapke naian ko kya hua haai?"

shaliny ko aase phir se mazaak akrte hue dekh kar rajveer who was about to lose his temper aapne gusse ko kisis tara curb karte hue kaheta haai"plzzz dr shaliny yeh sab bandh kijiye aur mujhe baateye kya hua haai naina ko?"

shaliny bhi ab aur situation ko naa khichte hue aapne chahere par ek baadi se smile laate hue kahete haai"major jo baat main aapko baatene baale hu uske baat u will lose all ur worries and tension aap aap papa banne baale haai aapke naina pregnant haai "

shaliny ke muh se yeh baat sunke rajveer ka mann jaise ek dam khushi se khel utthta haai woh shaliny pucchta haai"doc kya main naina ko room mein leeker jaa sakta hu?"

rajveer ke chahere par itne khushi dekh kar shaliny usse kahete haai"jee bilkul mjor u can take her to ur room but she is still unconsious due to the morning exhusion isliye aapko usse aapne baahon mein he aapne room mein leeker jaana hoka "

rajveer shaliny ke baato ka koi jabab naa deke ke naina
ko aapne bahon mein uttha ke aapne room mein leeker jaata haai

He made her lie on their soft cute bed
and keeping her head on the pillow
he took out the
photograph of naveen jo ke hamesha naina ke pillow ke neeche raheta haai

rajveer while looking at the photgraph says with his smiling face"bas kuch aur din yaar us ke tu bhi humare saath yahaan hoga kunki mujhe aur naina ko chor ke tu zada din dur nahin rahe sakte isliye yaar jaldi chala aa me waiting for u"

rajveer naina ke forehead par kiss kar ke uske uper ek blanket ura ke bahar chala jaata haai

kuch der bad jab naina ke need tutte haai tab woh dekhte haai ke woh kamre mein so rahe haai naina dheere se bed se utthte haai aur aapne rajveer ko dhudhnne laagte haai par rajveer was nowhere isliye naina phir se aake aapne bed par baithte haai aur aapne mann he mann soch ne laagte haai ke rajveer kaha hoga aase he sochte sochte achnaak uske nazar side table par paarte haai jaake ek letter rakhe hue the

naina woh letter uttha ke paarte haai jis mein likha hua tha that rajveer is waiting for her in the terrace room

naina jis ko pata tha ke aaj uske aur rajveer ke marriage aniversary haai aapne chahere par ek smile laate hue jaake taiyaar hone laagte haai

After getting ready naina jab terrace ke room mein pohochte haai tab woh dekhte haai ke room pura candels se saaja hua haai aase candel se saaja hua room dekh kar naina gets really happy woh rajveer ko hug karte hue kahete "wow raj this is really beautifull "ab raj jis ka mann aaj double khush tha naina ke forehead par kiss karte hue kahete ha
By riaroy at 2012-07-25i"so may i have the pleassure to dance with u ?"

naina jis ke liye rajveer ke saath dance karna uske jeevan ka sab se khushnuma moment raha tha aapna haath uske haatho mein dete hue kahete haai
"offcourse major "

rajveer and naina started dancing
on the song "de maa loo".after the songs gets over rajveer naina ko leeker jab table ke pass hai tab waha do do cakes rakhe hue dekh kar naina jis ko kuch bhi nahin pata tha gets really confused woh rajveer ke aor haairaani dekhte hue pucchte haai"raj yeh do cakes kun rakhe haai aaj koi aur special day haai kya ?"

niana ko aase usse pucchte hue dekh kar rajveer jis ka mann aaj dance kar raha tha uske cheeks par kiss karte hue kaheta haai
"haan jaan aaj ka din bohot he special haai kunki pahele toh aaj ke din mujhe tum mile the aur aaj ke he din do saal bad humare zindage mein phir ek khushi ke baarsha hone baale haai tum maa banne baale hoo naina "

rajveer ke muh se yeh baat sun ke naina ke khushi ka toh koi tikana nahin raheta woh rajveer ko hug karte hue kahete haai"ohhh raj i i am sooo happy aaj finally humare life complete ho gaye hai thanks raj thank u very much aaj agar tum nahin hote toh but before she could say anything further rajveer who cant see her getting teary uske lips aapna haath rakhte hue kaheta haai"no naina no rona mat aaj khushi ka din hai lets celbrate it "

rajveer aur naina dono milke cake katte haia and fed eahc other 😳
Edited by ronojoy_ria - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Gorgeous OS. Very touching.
Thank you for the pm.
Edited by ..Amira.. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey
vry cute nd beautiful OS
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hi Ria

OS was gud.👏👏
Raj was really worried when he hears that Naina is not well.
Then he gets the best gift of his life when he comes to know that his wife is pregnant.😃
Their life is full of hope and happiness😃
Edited by suhana.dixit - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
this was very sweet...

Loved it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow...this was beautiful and the best gift for all of RN fans
Loved the scene where Raj spoke with navin's pic asking him to come back in their life as their child.
loved it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh god this is so cute , i always dreamt of naina getting pregnant of rajveer kid , this was very cute and i loved the way you changed the full ulti duniya scene , amazing and also the part where Raj spoke with navin's pic asking him to come back in their life as their child.😊


keep writing would love to read more of them.
Edited by FarzuIrani - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful OS. loved it. keep it up

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