Arhi FF: Angel (Ch1 on Pg 8)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hello everyone, yes I am back with a new idea and new FF.. I hope you will enjoy reading this..
Prologue:
Payal was staring out of the window, looking at stars and missing Akash who had gone to mumbai for business deal. She needed to talk to someone, but she didn't know wih whom. She got to know only few hours ago that Buaji is health is all fine and Khushi had lied to her and everyone in family too.
There was something wrong between Arnav jiju and Khushi, so she wasn't ready to come back home. Even though everyone tried to explain her. She wasn't giving them reason for their fight too. She was just quiet, the way she was just after they got married. The glint of happiness lost from her eyes. Something was bothering her, but she was so stubborn and mature not to tell anyone and make others worried. She was really strong, more than anyone had known. 😕
But Arnav jiju also looked lost and scared, as if he was fighting with himself. His eyes showing pain, anger, guilt all at the same time. Initially, he tried everything to make her come back, but then Khushi said something and he stopped trying. 😕 Payal didn't know what.
Everything was going wrong. Payal knew it. Her and Akash's relationship was now almost back to normal and again he was angry as she didn't join him for mumbai trip. But she can explain him later. She had more important matters in her hand. Her Khushi and her happiness.
She again glanced at stars and remembered the conversation with Khushi who was mimicking dialougues of film Kal ho na ho. (She was indeed filmy 😆)
"Beta, ek farishta aayega." (child, one angel will come)
"Farishta..?"
"Angel beta.. Angel.." "Humara farishta aayaega.. Humare aansoo pochhega.. Hume dher saari khushiyaan dega aur humare gumon ko kahi door chhod aayega.."
(our Angel will come.. who will wipe our tears.. will give us happiness and will take away all our pain)
now Payal was asking, "Humara Angel kab aayega?" with tears in her eyes. (When will our Angel come?)
but little did she know that God had planned to send her Angel for solving all their problems.. 😳 😛
hey, so how was it? Please let me know if you people want me to continue. 😕 Let me know your view. Constructive feedback is welcome. 😛 Please hit the like button if you enjoyed reading this. 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i Wish.. Payal was same as here, in the show too!

And Kushi's reaction! Awesome! After knowing the reason, it should obviously take some time for the wounds to heal.. i hope she becomes Normal Soon :)
Edited by -vrshn- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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yayy new ff i love it i actually really really like it i wanna know who the angel is as well love how u did this cht in payal's pov it was diff pls continue and tnks for hte pm
Edited by desigirlx5 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome prologue :D
who is gonna be that angel ?
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome start a story line with payal pov very nice can't wait to read more thanks for the pm

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ohhh nice concept x I wonder who will be their Angel <3
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow!! Continue dear!!

I like the fact that it is connected to the recent episode 😆

Would love to see your take on it...

I hope the Angel might be Payal's child 😳...lol then Mamiji might change (Hello hi bye bye😡 )

Poor Arnav!! 😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey continue it dear..its a different one...from Payal POV...loved it...awesome prologue...:) so continue and update :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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liking the start and waiting for the angel
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I gotta say an awesome prologue !!
Angel hmm so can't wait for that angel to come and solve all the problems !! So everyone found out that Khushi left the house and had a fight with Arnav which she didn't .
Thanks for the pm and do continue this <3

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