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Posted: 13 years ago
owww... banned... why...????

N yes I m raising my both hands...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 18: Red Wine


It was indeed Yash's fault that he was there in her apartment.

She'd gone back to the apartment after he'd abruptly left, knowing a little too well that he was somewhere behind the thick veil of the dancing crowd, puffed up with a temper very much like a puffer fish. As she took the elevator to her floor, she wondered what might the consequence of her words spoken in an impetus moment be. Surely, it hadn't a been uttered in an officious capacity and now she saw there were no clear lines on where their boundaries begun or ended outside office to understand how she was to approach their little unexpected tiff.

Tiff! It hadn't even been five days since their first meeting and trust her to pick a fight with the man who had gone a lot beyond his ways to help her with work. But there weren't a lot of people she felt like arguing with either. It was as if she'd to push them to this limit to observe where they sailed from there. For it mattered very much how their paths collided - or not- from that day forward.

But, who would have expected someone of Yash's size to turn into a wuss the minute he stepped onto a shard of glass and needed a man of his own size to come to his help in getting him to the urgent care and be back? Apparently, in his drunken revelry, Yash had taken off his shoes for the Bangra finale song and stepped on a broken beer bottle. Then there was Meera who just had to insist on having Yash be brought over to the apartment after the hospital visit instead of letting him crash at his own place. Maan had driven him for the first aid and so it was only obvious that when Yash was stretched over on the couch, he was seated in the chair opposite to hers, with Meera standing in the middle of the room while pointing a remote at the TV screen.

"Which movie do you think will not make me want to blow my brains out?" Meera muttered as she flipped through rows of the Netflix instant watch queue.

"As a general rule, I only keep to chick flicks on Friday nights" Yash said and everyone turned to him wordlessly, their eyes fixed on him as if he'd suddenly sprouted two horns on his head.

"Arey!" Yash drawled in defense, "Don't tell me you have never tried to mute the movie and lip-sync your own dialogues to the overly predictable storyline..."

Meera's face relaxed visibly and she nodded agreeing with a wistful smile as if she missed those memories of another time, "True...that"

"That sure sounds like fun...I don't mind trying for the part of the cliched best friend to the female lead" She added reluctantly with a brief, tight smile and surprising herself at that when the words came out stringed with coherency. While he sat slightly leaning over, as his elbows rested on his knees, his shoulders casually bunched up and with a teasing, playful smile on his lips, she worked at staying unaffected by the easy casualness he showed around her. Somehow the fact that she had to strive to achieve the same, irritated her further and that made it an uphill task all the more.

"Yeah...Its been a while we did that..." Meera spoke low, turning back and once again her eyes were lost in making a suitable selection from the mind numbing possibilities on the screen.

"We need some wine to loosen us up for the job" Yash gave a calculated nod, a mischievous smile kicking up his lips.

"Geet...I have a bottle on the top shelf" Turning to Maan, she asked, "Will Pinot Noir work for you? I don't have any of the fine wines..."

He shrugged and with a twist of his lips, he said, "I'm not a wine person...so, anything goes"

She took to the kitchen, welcoming that repose when his mere presence enervated her as if he was a black hole into which all of her calm and restfulness was being sucked into while leaving her as a bundle of nerves. There hadn't been a word or so much as a glance at her ever since he'd come in and she wrinkled her nose at that thought.

Opening the top cabinet, she tuned out the living room and the black hole that was seated there with that same wind ruffled hair that bothered her a little too much since that evening and pulled out the bottle and reached for the cork screw that was extraneously thrown around in one of the kitchen drawers. Once she found the cork screw, she lazily and with a bit of uncalled for annoyance at the bottle, twisted the screw into the cork until it worked its way down. With all her might, she clasped the handle and pulled on the air-tight cork to come apart with a loud grunt. But there was no movement and with another sigh, she put all that was left of her into pulling the cork out. Now, third time's the charm, wasn't it? And so, her fingers grabbed on the handle and just as she was about to pull, she felt movement close to the kitchen door and instinctively turned, her body stiff with a chafing tension. There was unseen force that felt poured into that third effort when her eyes widened finding him approach her.

"Perhaps, I can help..." She heard him say and seeing him reach towards her hand, she gave an unforgiving hard tug and with a plop came the wine thrown into the air. Her eyes drifted to the floor and winced seeing the puddle that she will have to mop up, her eyes closing in frustration from the sudden lack of grace that had become the routine on such occasions when she found herself to be in his vicinity. Despite the horror, she felt a small relief from the fact that she hadn't thrown the bottle down in that hasty move, all of which lasted for another two beats until she raised her eyes to him to find a big splash of the wine spill spreading a maroon red onto his white shirt - the same color as the pumping blood in her body that was turning a shade darker with all the embarrassment which had come along.

"Oh! Shit..." She really was all thumbs when it came to him and her hands flew to the roll of paper napkins on the counter. Her countenance shifted to a worried state.

"Sorry...Lord! I'm so clumsy..." She mumbled as she scrunched up a towel and rushed to him, while he was still flicking his hands and looking over the good spray of wine she'd given him.

"It's ok...don't worry" She heard him say vaguely, but before her brain could make any sense of her actions she was pulling on his shirt and foolishly tried to scrub the stain away.

"I will buy you a shirt...I know this one is ruined for good" She added mindlessly, speaking in run-on sentences and when all that hadn't been her undoing, she forgetfully raised her eyes and looked at him. Her scrubbing hand stilled while her other hand loosed her grip over his shirt, when she felt the tip of his fingers graze against hers to take the paper towel from her.

She didn't need a full second to register his full gaze on her and in that measured proximity, in the alarming sense of abrupt awareness that she felt inside her, she couldn't imagine what she would have to do this time - that might perhaps have to cover every inch of her skin - to possibly help wiping away what she felt then.

Faintly, a reckoning of the sorts came into her mind then, that it was always the deliberate touches, the ones she saw it coming and the kind that were the briefest of all that stayed with her longer; a mere brush of his fingertips against her skin, lingering as if they permanent markings on her skin there.

There she saw in that moment of stillness that came be to be, a little of the many things that she would never dare to read. And more so because there were many such little things that sometimes she thought showed in her eyes too...

For now, all those little things were their secrets to keep...
Edited by 6th.Element - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh ho so he was not J ...
Loved the insight to his thoughts, so much going on within him, its just not her but he too whose world has turned completely upside down in last 5 days.
... an emptiness that hadn't been there days ago encroaching inside him.
...There was a part of him that was a surprising contrast to all that he'd become and still it was infuriating when only that small part of him felt alive that evening.
... all until the three framed a picture of everything that was lost to him now.
...When there hadn't been a woman in his life before who let him gamble his good sense in return for petty squabbles, it confused him what it was about her that made him give her an air of importance to all that she was.
Awesome lines, the depiction that how much a deeper place she is coming to take in his life... that she's making him look upon certain missing things in his life that a few days ago didn't matter to him at all & was least bothered with their existence or not.
He's still very wary of her... but just can't keep too much distance as for him consciously its just an attraction as he was terming the feeling at the airport in the 2nd or 3rd part (I guess)... but now he feels towards her its a little more than before, he is not yet in terms with the fact that she is slowly coming to be someone very important whose presence sooths him, interests him, stirs him, makes him aware of missing joys in life but still with her there he's hoping to get them...


all in all just loved this part...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Arwenish

owww... banned... why...????



Its a long story...Longer than NY Times ;) We will have to keep it for another day.
Edited by 6th.Element - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: 6th.Element

If there are readers here who prefer the current version of Pensieve series or think if it agrees with them, please do raise hands here...


i dont really remember the previous version n am lovvving this ..so am in
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Onir

the depiction that how much a deeper place she is coming to take in his life... that she's making him look upon certain missing things in his life that a few days ago didn't matter to him at all & was least bothered with their existence or not.
He's still very wary of her... but just can't keep too much distance as for him consciously its just an attraction as he was terming the feeling at the airport in the 2nd or 3rd part (I guess)... but now he feels towards her its a little more than before, he is not yet in terms with the fact that she is slowly coming to be someone very important whose presence sooths him, interests him, stirs him, makes him aware of missing joys in life but still with her there he's hoping to get them...

all in all just loved this part...


And you have hit the nail on its head 😊...This is exactly what I was trying to convey...Thanks much for putting this into words. Great summary, indeed.


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: honeygrape


i dont really remember the previous version n am lovvving this ..so am in


I was really asking if the Pensieve series is confusing you (not comparing it with the older version)...because many had derived other conclusions that was not intended by the update.

So, do you still think I need to re-write Pensieve II?


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Posted: 13 years ago
Maan is somehow the last person I would expect to indulge or shall we say, resort to drinking. Not demeaning him or anything... But then he has evaded understanding so long that I should hardly be surprised.
Know its bad to say this, but am curious about Dev.somehow... Hehe
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ivre

Maan is somehow the last person I would expect to indulge or shall we say, resort to drinking. Not demeaning him or anything... But then he has evaded understanding so long that I should hardly be surprised.
Know its bad to say this, but am curious about Dev.somehow... Hehe



Well, you don't know this Maan...The old timers will remember the "The curious case of Mono..." 😉 where he smokes up a joint with a bunch of hippies...After all, he is a Yale grad and its only expected of such college town folks.

Dev doesn't make an appearance anywhere...you can be assured of that. He is a ghost character who drives the story from behind the scenes.


Edited by 6th.Element - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Yipee...
Lucky day indeed I just finished reading & commenting on the earlier part and I get to see that you've updated the Red wine too...
Poor Geet she's always so clumsy around him.
She's just so confused on how to deal with this Man, he's just not giving her any of the expected reactions... oww so sad.
But I'm happy now as finally she's spoilt his white shirt, & now wants to buy him a new shirt... so now I'm eagerly waiting for the shopping trip, which will thereby lead to one of my favourites - HOT CHOCOLATE...
Loved the line where she mentions that she doesn't argue with everyone... but that she judges them & watches out for their reactions towards her & how relative their going to be...
continue soon...

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