Originally posted by: Soapoperasrfun
The last time around, it took Maan a trip till the Grand canyon to realize and accept his unfound feelings for Geet. This time around, a drive till Yale did the job... he is fast improving. But it surprises me that he is so comfortable with his feelings so early in the story.
Hmm! I don't agree here. They surely are curious about this pull and it makes them question a lot of things that they hadn't before, but, they also haven't decisively arrived at why this matters or what this is (In short, they haven't named this pull). As I said, it will show once Geet realizes it is far more serious than what she thinks it to be. And for Maan, he is certainly getting on that flight to Canyon.
I have to say that I find Geet's reactions to everything a little more realistic, which makes me conclude that Maan in this story is a lot more complex that he is being shown to be (since all your characters are a very very close to reality).
I think this time, they both have many shades that wasn't explored the last time around.
But by the time I try to analyze anything you write even, I land up confusing even myself. Did you get a hang of what I am trying to convey? 😕
Yes, don't worry about that. Just write.
And to answer ur last bit, nope... please continue to update all of your stories... I will miss NYT terribly if you don't update it as often as you have been...
But, I still think I will have to finish Piazza soon, otherwise I would lose the plot details for that. So, updates might be delayed here.
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