My First Fanfic(Part Thirteen)

Previous Parts

Part 1: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/318640/my-first-fanfic

Part 2: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/318884/my-first-fanfic-part-two

Part 3: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/319518/my-first-fanfic-part-three

Part 4: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/332225/my-first-fanfic-part-four

Part 5: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/334344/my-first-fanfic-part-five

Part 6: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/335966/my-first-fanfic-part-six

Part 7: /forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/337292/my-first-fanfic-part-seven

Part 8: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/340575/my-first-fanfic-part-eight

Part 9: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/341900/my-first-fanfic-part-nine

Part 10:https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=343 324

Part 11:https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=354228

Part 12:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/355250/my-first-fanfic-part-twelve

Scene 34

Rehearsal hall

Sometime after Prerna left Mukti comes. She keeps ignoring Prem and Prem feels bad about it. Prem calls a meeting with everyone and he was talking about it when he notices that one guy was looking at Mukti (that guy was actually distracted and looking at everyone). Prem gets so angry, he stops talking and keeps glaring at the guy and when the guy realized that Prem stopped talking, he looks at Prem.

Prem (rudely): You finished staring at Miss Deskmukh? Now can we continue please?

Prem continues to talk (keeps glaring at that guy), that guy and Mukti were embarrassed and Namritha had a huge smile on her face.

After the meeting is over, Namritha goes to Prem.

Namritha (excitedly): Oh my God Prem!!!

Prem(irritated): What?

Namritha: You were jealous.

Prem: No I was not.

Namritha: Then why did u scream at that guy?

Prem: 'Coz he was not listening to me.

Namritha(sarcastically) : Yeah right!!!

Suddenly she notices that Prem is glaring at someone behind her and she turns back and sees that their designer's assistant was taking Mukti's measurement. He puts his hand around Mukti's waist to take her measurement. Prem looses his control. He storm towards them and pulls the guy back.

Prem (angrily): Is this how you take measurement?

Guy (really scared): Ye….Yes.

Namritha comes running towards Prem: What happened Prem?

Prem: He was feeling her up.

Mukti (shocked): What??!!!

Prem: What what? I saw everything.

Mukti: What did you see?

Prem: That he feeling you up.

Namritha: Did he feel you up Mukti?

Mukti: No!!! He was just taking my measurements for my costumes for the show.

Namritha turns and glares at Prem.

Prem: He is not going to take her measurements.

Guy: I will…………………. I will ask someone else to take her measurements.

He runs from there and Mukti glares at Prem and leaves.

Namritha: What is wrong with you?

Prem: What I am telling you the truth.

Namritha: No Prem. The truth is you are becoming possessive about her. I asked you to woo her…………… this is in no way is wooing. I want you to be like Sharukh Khan from Dilwale Dulhaniya Le Jayenge not Sharukh Khan from Darr. If you act like this you will scare her away. (After a pause)You are kinda scaring me also.

Prem(helplessly) : Its just, I know she loves me but deep down I have this fear what if she doesn't love me………… its killing me…….. I don't know what to do and I am scared I will loose her………. When I sees her with other guys or when she talks to other guys, I get scared what if I loose her……….. And to top it all, she ignores me.

Namritha: Its okay Prem. Everything will be fine. True love never fails. And I know Mukti really loves you. Just don't give up Prem. She needs time because she finally gave up on you. She thought you could never love her. So you don't give up like that.

Prem: Ok….. thanx Namritha………… you know what?

Namritha: What?

Prem: You are a very nice girl and an even better friend…… I am happy that you are my friend. You are that friend that I always needed in my life.

Namritha smiles at him and hugs him.

Namritha: Even you are a nice guy Prem…….. just a little mislead.(smiles)

Prem smiles and Namritha turns to walk off.

Prem: Namritha (she turns) ………………..I feel so bad when I think about Mukti with other guys. She would have felt really bad when I was with other girls and insulting her right?

Namritha: Yeah.

Prem: I don't really deserve her right?

Namritha: No you don't.

Prem: I know…………. (Smiles) but still I am gonna win her over.

Part 14:https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=367962&KW =my+first+fanfic

dat was great n da way prem kept gettin jealous when he saw mukti with other guys seemed so realistic as if he would actually do dat in da drama dat is when he realizes her luv continue soon can't wait for da next update when prem starts 2 woo

wow thx for updating..tht was luvly 😊

thanks a lot for updating ur fanfic yaar

wow its great iam loving it 👏 👏

its great iam loving it 👏

thanks a lot for updating ur fanfic yaar

Originally posted by: mandy07

dat was great n da way prem kept gettin jealous when he saw mukti with other guys seemed so realistic as if he would actually do dat in da drama dat is when he realizes her luv continue soon can't wait for da next update when prem starts 2 woo

Ahem He was prety much like this...Panchmashwar 1st Dance...recall something? Love you're fan-fic padai karthi hoon ya nahi har din peheli kaam aap ki fan fic padna.

Krishi

I love ur fan-fic espically the part where prem gets jealous of Mukti 👏