Dial A Secret... MG FF (thriller) part 13 - Page 16

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sayaneegupta

wooo again lots of happenings in one chapter


gr8 .. starting with a shock ending with a shock😳

this story is meant to give me shock 😲

Damien is dead... that too by severe blood loss❓

but no it can't be MAAN... d f8 between MAAN n Damien took place before a some days... he wud have died then only.. hai na???

n y this Adrian behaving so odd..Gosh he is so dangerous .. MAAN is r8 he can kill any one😕

u cracked me with MAAN's reply on Adrian's look... that frustrated bf n cafe singer one🤣

n poor Brandon his 700 bucks 😆

n loved lil MAANEET scn .. though small but sweet hoping many more to come😳

gr8 going sis.. cont soon

wow thanks di.. so u think hez dangerous..😉.. just wait and watch..
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

ok tell us

what you did this time
its a hell night dear

poor brandon has to stop in between😉
this is reallly too much

you better not do this with maaneet

and
what is seen between
brandon and naomi

don't worry i dnt hv dat gut to stop Maaneet in between..🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

awesome, brilliant part
loved it
detective trying to find out new ans from them
what's wrong with Adrian , is he really just tensed or something else
oh no secret keeper hacked all girls' email a/c and send a video to maan
late night meeting for it
is that the video too dangerous ,
let's see
continue soon


ami abar bolbo wait n watch.. a shock is waiting..😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: impoojaverma

sorry for late comment
was on holidays wid family
awsome update
dis ff is full of suspense
waiting to knw who killed damein


u have to wait a lil bit more to know about the killer..😛
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: $ara_$hachi

Mimi, jaan plz send me a buddy rqst from that id coz the reason is, i am on my phone *a very long story*.

Coming to the update, read your reply on my comment and trust me that it was indeed the longest comment ever. About the guessing game, everyone knows Sara loves that and she really read all work throughly *itna toh exams ke liye bhi dedicated nahi hu*. Me love twists. Glad to have so many talented writers as my buddies. Love you a lot.
I am sure everyone is hiding something. Everyone is connected to richness, high society, disturbed past, spoil brat image, cunning nature, secret keeper, Gwen and Damien. Martin will be a pain in ass, for sure. These 9 names are stuck in my brain cells, very badly. Even i told every bit of word of this story to my cousin and she too really loves your talent. She always ask me for the update. Gosh, what got into Adrian? Maan and he used to be friends but what happened now? Why only girl's id hacked that too with e-mail having 13 videos. The videos must have been connected to Adrian and Damien. What was so special between Adrian and Brandon, to be that close. Geet want to shop for funeral too. Overall, me enjoying this.

In a hurry, so a small comment.
Will PM you the reason.

Do cont soon and do PM me.


Okk.. i don't call it a short comment...😃 i was waiting for your comment.. and i won't ruin ur fun giving spoiler now.. 🤣.. will update soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago
galz i'm really sorry for late.. i was busy with my college admission.😕. my pc was in coma..😭 n all right i know i am lazy..😕 now I m here with next part...😉
plzzz overlook my grammatical and spelling mistakes.. will edit it later...😛
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Precap: Maan figured out the girls's email ids are hacked.. Secret Keeper sent him a video via email.. the video opened the secret Brandon and Adrian were keeping..


Part 7: Remembering Damien

As they saw the video their jaw tightened. It was clearly showing the guy whom they found dead at the hotel party with Adrian and Brandon.

"you know what you've to do.." Adrian said smoking.

"yeah. I've to beat Damien. He will be at the beach party.. I have to stop him from going to home until Mr. Hyde will say me to leave him." He said in a breath.

"and we'll pay you 70lakh in cash." Brandon said with a poker face. "this is your advance." He placed a briefcase on the table. The guy opened it to find it full with bundles of cash.

"Don't worry your work will be done." The guy smirked and left with the briefcase.

"you've to keep an eye on him." Adrian said leaning back on easy chair.

"I know. I can't relax leaving all the thing on this dumb head bu*ta*d." He said taking a sip from his wine. "and we have only one way left to get that video. We have to do it within time."

The video faded into noise as it ended. A silence gulped them. After a few minutes Maan broke the silence.

"So this was the secret you were keeping.." Maan asked in a low but strong voice.

"well this is not a secret anymore." Adrian answered clearing his throats.

"from the day Damien was missing, he was found dead just a few days ago.. and now I came to know you guys bribed a guy to beat Damien.." Maan couldn't hold back his anger which resulted to raise his voice.

"Yes we did it.. but that too for all of our sake.." Brandon raised his voice at the highest pitch in reply.

"for all of our sake? Bribing some one to kill Damien is not for all of our sake.."

"Sorry to interrupt Maan.. we only said him to beat him not to kill him." Adrian said in his usual cold tone.."

"then why you wanted to shift in Dubai so soon? Why you wanna run away from here?" Maan gave a half smile..

"Now where does Dubai came from?" Adrian replied being irritated.. "believe me that has nothing to do with Damien."

"We should believe you?" Maan raised his eyebrow.

"Maan.. okk Adrian wanna run away from here.. but why I would do that when election is near? I can't go anywhere now for the election and killing Damien would only cause harm.. All knew it I had some problem with him killing him will effect me the most.." He stopped to sigh.. "and I'm the most effected one now."

"may be Maan is right.. the guy killed him accidentally. Geet became dumbstruck in their talks. Now she came forward to support Maan.

Adrian put his elbow on a table and placed a hand on forehead and laughed sarcastically.. then looked at Geet.. "Geet.. this guy was killed before Damien."

"How do you now?" Naomi questioned..

"Naomi.." Brandon looked at her.. "the beach party happened almost a month ago.. and police discovered his body just a few days ago and it was in good condition.. If he was killed back then it wouldn't be in that condition.. simple.."

"This guy is very dangerous' we've to be careful." Nicole said biting her lips.. "Now may we know whole story of that night."

Clearing his throats Brandon started to speak. " we knew it he has the tape of Gwen.. and we just wanted to scare him a bit and most importently make sure he won't get home soon so that Adrian can snick into his pent house and steal the video."

"how did you know where he had kept the video?" Maan asked.

"Maan you know Damien's parents had kicked him out.. they even had stopped sending him money.." Adrian said.

"Hmm.. So?"

"The pent house he was living is mine.. so I had an idea where he could keep it.. he needed money badly.. I paid for his doses so many times.. So he started to blackmail us.."

"our plan was perfect.." Brandon interrupted. "non would care why a alcoholic drug addict went missing suddenly.. none could point his finger at us.. but at the party Maan lost his temper he started to beat Damien and our plan failed which resulted us to trap in this mess.." Brandon looked at Maan directly.. "so don't act like we're responsible forwhat's going on with us now.. you're equally responsible."

"okk guys the matter is over.." Nicole interrupted. "please forget about this video.. forget everything about tonight. We all are trapped here badly.. we've to work together. If we start to blame each other we will be even trapped more.." After pausing a few seconds she spoke again.. "Now as we all are very tired after this drama we should go home.. see you at the funeral party.." All left one by one leaving Geet and Maan alone.

"Partners in crime.." Geet looked at Maan.. "friendship of Brandon and Adrian are really strong.. they didn't say a word about it.."

"Friend?" Maan said mockingly.. "No they're not friend.. we know about nature of Adrian and there is no scale which can measure how selfish Brandon is.. they just do everything for their sake.. let it be hurt you'll see their real face.."

Maan sat on a sofa and covered his face with hands sighing.."I really don't know how did all this happened.. don't know how to get out of this mess." He took a deep breath. "last thing I want is you to trap here.."

"Maan.." Geet sat next to Maan and pulled him into embrace.. "you're the strongest one among us.. if you break down like this who will take care of us hmm?"

"you think I'm the strongest one?" Maan asked with half smile.

Geet gave a naughty smile and pointed at his arms "after making this kind of body you don't think you're the strongest one.."

Maan's half smile became a full hearted smile.. he pulled Geet into a kiss.

Geet entered with Maan at the furenal. All were already there busy in their own gossip. People had created little circles to gossip. A few girls were hopping circle to circle to collect gossip and make it a bigger gossip. They found others in a circle busy in their favorite hobby.

The only people who were silent was Damien's parents.

"I'm really feeling bad for them." Maan said in a low tone.

"you're feeling bad?? Strange.." Nicole sneered.

"Damien was their only son.." Maan replied.

"but why are you feeling sad?" Adrian said with a shocking expression.. "I should be the happiest person right now.. but I'm not.. cause that bu*t*rd trapped us here.. why should we feel sad?"

"Brandon.." Kate intoruppted.. "press is here.. they want to talk to you.."

"excuse me guys." Brandon left..

Maan was hearing Brandon's coverssesion with the press which caused Maan to smile mockingly.

Press asked him rumours are saying you have some connection with the dead of Damien..

With a sad expression Brandon answered. "all know Damien was a very close friend.. I'm really shocked hearing this news."

"so this is just a rumour?"

"ofcourse it is. Election is near.. this is just a dirty trick by opponents.."

"what do you think Geet?" Maan whispered in Geet's ear.. "Brandon is such a good actor.. he should be in Hollywood.. not in field of politics.." Maan smirked.

After a few minutes Brandon came back..

"guys I have arranged a small party tomorrow.." Brandon said clearing his thoroat..

"why? To celebrate Damien's death?" Adrian replied with a question.

"exactly.. to remember Damien.." He said with a fake sad tone.

All gave a small smile to each other.

Next day on evening clad into their best formal wears all reached the Remembering Damien or Celebrate for Damien party. There were a small stage just infront of the projecter. Nicole came down from the stage saying a few blah blah blah about Damien.. It was Geet's turn to went on the stage.. She was going to enter the stage on the very moment the chandeller broke down on the stage a few foot away from her.

Geet sat down on the place she was standing out of fear and shock.. Her gaze was fixed on the broken chandeller.

"Geet.. Geet.." Maan jerked her.. Geet looked at Maan.. only naked fear could be seen in her eyes.. "Maan.." She called his name with shaken voice and pointed at the broken chandeller..

"Geet everything is all right Geet.. nothing happened.." Maan her face in his chest so that the view of broken chandeller could be guard.

When everything became normal again Maan went to the stage and started to lie about how good friend Damien was.. A few photoes were showing in the projector.. hearing a sound Maan turned back to face the projector. A video was playing in the projector which snatched the land from Maan's feet.

The video of the pool party six of them with Gwen were playing in the projector..

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Now I have a question.. whom do u hate most here???

i'm waiting for your likes and comments...😃

Edited by princess_mimi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

awsome update dear

brandon nd adrien r really mean nd selfish

sometime dis story makes me confuse as it is thriller😆😆

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Posted: 13 years ago
Just can't wait to see who is this secret keeper.
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Posted: 13 years ago
this is so confusing ... Lol

Interesting.
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice part

thnx for updating

thnx for pm


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