Love to Hate U |KriYansh| ch7 pg109+new thrd link - Page 51

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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh Gosh !!!
This is too good ...
I hadn't read this before .. Just today read all the 5 chapters ...
Loved it .. Loved it .. Loved it ...
I just love the conversation which Kria's mind and heart have with her ..
I can relate to it so well ...
Its just nothing buy mind blowing ss .. plsss continue sooonnn
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Posted: 13 years ago
omg! Omg! OMG!!!
did u really write dat???
damn it was such a HAWT upd8...
seriously yaar... longed to c dis syd of kriya for a long tym in ur ss..
soo glad tune hum sab ki sun li...
continue soon.. but pls dnt make it a mistake for KR!
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Posted: 13 years ago
whoz waiting for an update ??
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: nams_arsha

whoz waiting for an update ??


hum wait karing 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
😆 . . . . Nams sab wait kar rahe hai dil se . . . . But filhal hum 2 hi yahan jamm ke baithe hai 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
okay okay im editing.. update on its way 🤗

yogini apurva konpal and kriyaanshmahima

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im updating in jiffy ty buddies ❤️

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Posted: 13 years ago
Plz update on page 75 . . . . Ye page to over 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
me 2 waiting plz update😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
CHAPTER 6

guys I really don't wanna make any chapter a 'serious' one..!! I just want it to b either romantic or simple or hilarious.. hope it has cum out the same !!
My eyes had already swollen due to crying.. I don't know till wen I was crying.. moreover the reason for crying ??
If he had done a mistake then so do I by letting him do it !! y did I allow him to come near me ? why ?? why dint I push him..y did i allow him to kiss me ?? y did I kiss him ??
DAMMN!! The guilt!! I cheated on my best friend!!! *sobs*
*sobs* *sobs* 'muummmyyy' I screamed!! *sobs* *sobs*
'I hate u rey !! I hate uu u uu u u u uu !!!!!!!!!!'
Huh ?? rey!!!! UGGGHHH universe ji !!!!!!!!!!!! wats happening to me!!! Why the hell am I calling him rey!! Neither im his frnd nor his gf! Uggghh STOP IT STOP IT KRIA!!! bas bahut hogaya!!! I wipped off tears.. again to drift towards that megical moment! SHIT MEGICAL ??? seriously wat has rey done to me ? did he hypnotise me ??? *sobs* *sobs*
*again wipes of the tears* *imagines the kiss*
A small smile crept over my lips wen I remembered tat.. he was a best kisser.. his hot breath! Thinking of wich I shuddered even now !!! his eyes spoke soo many unspoken words!! Am I right in reading them ???
*blush*
Shit !!! im blushing again!! KRIA TATS IT STOP IT NOW !!!!!!
*sobs* MUMMYY!!! UNIVERSEE JIII!!! I cried again..!
He cheated his GF Sharon!! I cheated my bestie Sharon!! I shud ask sorry wid her.. but kahoongi kya usse ? will it be right in saying tat I k k k ki ki kissed her bf ? how will she react !! GOSH!!!! I shudnt have gone wid him!! Damnn!!! He is proposing her on prom night and here here I kissed him!! No no he also kissed me!! Galti uski hai!! I tried to control myself soo much!! And wait he proved again he is a casinove huh *sssooobsss harder*

*pout* 'my first kiss!!'

*sobs even harder*
*knock knock*
I jerked my head up to c who is knocking the door.. well who can it be!! Its Sharon herself!!
[P.S Sharon n kria stay in same apartment.. they are housemates ]
I wiped my tears.. went to open the door.. but wait I felt weak again!!! How will I face her ?? *sobs*
'KRIAAA OPEN THE DOOR!!!! Please its urgent!!!'
She screamed from the other side.. for the last time I wiped off my tears.. and opened the door..
'KRIAAA PLEASE PLEASSSEEE PLEASEEE MERI HELP KAROOO'' Sharon started jumping!! Damn my poor heart!!! Ek din yeh zaroor mar jayega agar aisa sab usse tang karte rhe toh..! awww.. my poor helpless heart..
'KRRIIIAA..' Sharon screamed at top of her voice..
I made sure to hide my swollen eyes.. and plastered a broad smile on my face..
'haan haan bolo itna chilla kyu rhi ho ?? my ears r fine!!'
'kria chalo meri room..' saying wich she dragged me towards her room..
'array kya..' I was shocked at the sight. 100s of dresses laid on her bed and a number of shopping bags on floor.. so many accessories wer thrown on the dressing table.. seeing the mess I looked at Sharon.. who sheepishly walked over the shopping bags sometimes balanced herself from falling down.. she started throwing the dresses here and there.. finally few dresses stood on her head.. few on her hand.. few on the floor rest circled her..
Universe ji iss world ki saari pagal meri hi dost kyu bante hai ??
Ek yeh Sharon!!
Dosra wo swayam!! Kal aya hai wapas fir b zaroori nhi samaj muje inform karne k liye.. jaise rey mila muje bul gaya huh!
And wo rey.. wo..
Wait a sec! rey ?? mei rey I mean reyaansh ko rey kyu bula rhi hoon ?? and wo mere dost kab bane !?! *confused* *annoyed*
'kriaaa!!' Sharon pouted in a verge of crying..
'SHARON!! WAT IS DIS ??? yeh kya halat banaya hai room ka ??'
I went in, tripped over 2 bags and fell on the bed..
*ouccchhh*
Sharon *sobs*
'UFFOOO SHARON CHUP BILCUL CHUP!!!' I shouted.. my back had a small muscle catch due 2 d fall.. somehow I managed to relax and sat infront of her.. removed those dresses from head hands and made them into a pile and asked her
'wats all dis ?? care to explain..'
She smiled sheepishly..
'kria wo wo prom night hena..'
'sharon aaj prom night nhi hai!! ther is still time..'
'time!! Wahi toh nhi hai kria!! deko dress select karna.. fitting dekna hai.. accessories select karna hai.. fir agar last moment mei dress acccha nhi dika toh again change karo .. GOSH! Make UP b toh baaki hai!! time kaha hai kria ??'
'sharon 3 days more for prom night!! Tum dress pehen rhi ho dress bana nhi rhi ho!!!'
She glared at me!! I roled my eyes..
'tum meri help karoge ya nhi ???'
'fine meri maa karoongi!! Kya help chahiye ??'
'first aaj ke liye muje ek accha sa dress select karne mei help karo.. fir baaki ka kal shopping karte hai!!'
'WHAT ?????'
Well first I was shocked! Coz it was 10 pm and Sharon was going out
Second Sharon had already brought nearely 2 exclusive shops ( itne saaare dresses!! )
And again she wants to go to shopping!! Waaah waaah!!!
'are u insane ?? ek toh raat ki 10 baje hai! is waqt kaha jaa rhi ho ? and secondly itne dresses wo b high class designer wears!! Ismei se koi select nhi kr skti prom night ke liye ?'
'hawww!!! Yeh sab mien aaj ke date k liye laayi thi..!!'
Date!! I bit my tongue.. and I noticed her doing the same!!
The name date brought up sum uneasiness in me.. I don't know I felt my heart ache.. shit! Not again..
She got up and started picking up dresses..
'tum date pe jaa rhi ho ??'
There was sum awkwardness in air..
'huh ? hmmm erm wo actually.. mei hmm .. *thinking* *pause* haan haan date pe yess date pe jaa rhi hoon!!!' she grinned
Wats there 2 grin ?? I wondered!
'okay..' I said getting up and took my path towards my room .. she stopped me..
'wait!! Help karna please.. muje aaj.. super hawt dikna hai..'
I looked at mouth hanging.. super hawt ?? bikini mei jaane ka toh irada nhi!! *wondering* already itni choti kapde pehenti hai ki chote chote bacche b isse bade kapde pehente hai!!! and hot toh tum ho hi Sharon.. but.. rey.. rey GOSH STOP IT KRIAAA!! My mind screamed!! I got back to my senses..
She was in dreamland..
Rey's ??? dreamland ?? *uaaan uaaan [sobs from inside]*
'aaj muje uski pasand ki kapde pehna hai.. I wanaa do all wat he wants..'
*sobs* uski pasand *sigh!
Suddenly she jerked back from her dreamland.
'kria please please help karo na tumei toh uski pasand pata hoga na..' she said excitedly holding my hand dragging towards her wadrobe wer she dumped all her dresses wich was scattered.. while dumping dem she continued.. 'please batao kounsa color pasand hai usse.. wat kinda dress pasand hai usse.. bolo na.. tumei pata hogaa na uski pasand.. wo tumara best friend jo hai.. bata na..' she froze.. I froze
Rey aur meri best friend ???? *OMG GIMME A PINCH!! HOPE SHARON IS ALRIGHT!!*
'sharon ??? are u alright ? rey .. ermmm I mean reyaansh! Meri best friend ?? k-a-b b-a-n-a ???? and rey ke pasand mujse zyada tumei pata hoga na ?? u know him since childhood!!!?? muje toh sirf ek hi best friend hai ( male ) aur wo swayam..!!'
She dint move.. I wonder wats wrong wid her..
'ss ssw sswwyaa swayam ki ho ya rey ki dono .. ddon dono ladke hena.. d dono ki pasaa pasand similar hogi na.. haan right..'
'what ???? rey and swayam ki pasand similar hai ???'
Hope sharon ki tabyat teek hai..
'sharon ??'
'uffooo kria!! tum help karoge ya nhi ??'
'lekin muej rey ki pasand nhi pata hai!!'
'swayam ka pata hena ??'
'haan par rey ka nhi pata!!'
'swayam ka batao! Wahi rey ko pasand ayegi..!!'
'swayam and rey ki pasand alag hai Sharon!!'
'tum bas swayam ki pasand batao I don't care abt rey!'
"WHAT ???' my eyes wide open!
'WHAT ??' she almost gulped
'tumne kaha u don't care about rey ??'
'nhi meine kaha swayam ki pasand batao..'
'aur tumei kabse swayam ki pasand , pasand aane lagi ???'
'mei kabse matlab ?? what do u mean!! Tum soch b k k kaise sakte ho ki mei swayam ki pasand ko pasand karoongi??'
'toh tumne abi abi kya kaha ???'
'meine tumse help manga simple!!'
'UGGGHH SHARON!!! Ur making me mad!!'
'jo already mad hai unhe aur kya banaongi!' she Said under her breath..
I made a 'O' shape wid my lips
'I heard tat!!' I glared at her..
'gud for u!! now can u please help me!???'
'FINE!!!!! Lemme get over dis!! Huh'
I went thru the dresses.. I picked purple blue colored strapless kneelength outfit and another white colored backless umbrela bottomed knee-length outfit and placed on the bed..
'here!!! swayam ka fav color purple and rey ki white!! Do watevr u want..'
I snapped off and went towards the door wen I heard her saying 'wait a sec kria!!' well the tone was suspicious!! I turned to c her, her hands placed on her hips.. eye narrowed at mine..
I was confused
'tumei rey ki pasand.. I mean fav color kaise pata ??' she asked raising her eye brows.
*froze*
I frowned and screamed 'SHITTT' from inside!!

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Edited by nams_arsha - 13 years ago

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