Manveer FF : Separate Worlds [Chap 16 - pg 84] - Page 8

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Posted: 13 years ago
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poor M hope uday wont be too rude with her thanks 4r PM😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: tejuangel

poor M hope uday wont be too rude with her thanks 4r PM😃

😆 😆 no probzz dear...hope u like the future updates...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Short update :( :( plsss make it long nxt tym coming 2 d J n M convo was jus cute loved the sisters bonding...thnx4 d pm !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: ashukapoor007

Short update :( :( plsss make it long nxt tym coming 2 d J n M convo was jus cute loved the sisters bonding...thnx4 d pm !!

hehe srry about that 😛...ohh glad u liked it 😃...no probs dear 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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heyy loved it witin fr more 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Khawaunju

heyy loved it witin fr more 😊

glad u loved it...will try to give one more short update today...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey everyone...srry fr the small update...bt posted two updates na 😉


In the morning -

Everyones is in a mess in manyatas room . Manyata and Jai are getting ready ...

Manyata " Jai we still have nearly 9 hours left till the function starts...why are u getting ready now ?"

Jay "jiji im not getting ready im just deciding what to wear . u know im soo excited . me and tina are soo good friends...though she is really bigger than me but we both get along pretty well ."

Manyata "ohh ya i know ...so u going early or at 6 ?"

Jay "off course im going early jiji...and u r coming early too na ?"

Manyata "umm no id come afterwards...have some work to do "

Jay " ohh okk jiji...but don't be late okk...id go there as soon as i decide the dresses and we both will spend the day together " she said smiling

Manyata " have fun there "

Jay "ya jiji off course i will ...ohh jiji hows this one...?" she asked showing a maroonish lehanga

Manyata "its great jay ...u will look awesome in it "

Jay "okk then its decided...ill wear this one " she said excited

Manyata "ya it looks really amazing...jay ill be in garden if u need me..."

Jay "okk jiji ..."



Its afternoon...manyata has gone early to tina's house and is helping tina get ready.





Uday is having lunch and talking about to someone on his phone.

Unnati "dada u can do ur phonecalls later . Please eat ur food now..."

Uday "ohh yess chotti sorry..." he said lost in his thoughts.

Unnati "dada what happened ? Why r u so lost ?"

Uday " nothing unnati im fine ." he said coming out of his thoughts...

suddenly his phone rings..

Uday "hello "

Person "its time..."

Uday "okk ill be there...see to the plan once again "

Person "ya...well see to it "



Manyata and the others were ready now and manyata was roaming here and there chatting with diya...yess she trusted diya...but not uday or vicky...She didnt tell anything to diya as she knew that diya cant be involved in that...

Diya sensed something was wrong with her when she talked to her in the morning but she didnt ask as she thought that manyata needed to be alone .

They chatted fr a long time...suddenly manyata felt a hand over a mouth and after a few seconds of struggle felt her head getting heavier and fainted...



Chapter 5 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/58188804�


Edited by Anjalika13 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sooper dooper good anjy...loved it baby...update soon...will wait for it :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks for the pm. Loved the update. Looking forward to the next one.


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Posted: 13 years ago
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very well written story:) eagerly waiting for the next part..:)

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