Manveer FF : Separate Worlds [Chap 16 - pg 84] - Page 6

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Posted: 13 years ago
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gosh hate dese media people!!!!buss aise hi karte hai..aww manyata and uday's friendship broke😭
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Originally posted by: tejuangel

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Originally posted by: sreeja_rox

gosh hate dese media people!!!!buss aise hi karte hai..aww manyata and uday's friendship broke😭

lol yaa...yupp but when the misunderstanding would be over...they would be more than just friends 😉
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Originally posted by: nityah

amazing part dear...
continue soon...

thnx nitz
ya...
Edited by Anjalika13 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey everyone 😊...heres chapter 3 😛 ...hope u like it ...btw im gonna rush it up a bit as everyone wants the misunderstanding to be cleared between Manyata and uday...



Jai was feeling very sad after seeing manyata so sad . She loved her sis a lot .She decided to talk to her and help her in any way she can . She knocked the door of manyatas room and went inside after she heard "come in "

Manyata "jai u need not knock the door of my room...u can come in without knocking..."

Jay "okk jiji "

she went to the bed to sit near her

Jay "jiji what happened u r looking very sad "

Manyata 'nothing jay im not sad at all ...im very happy to see my family at last ...i missed u all soo much " she said hugging jay

Jay "ohh ok jiji ...but if theres anything u want to share u can talk to me...ill always be here for u jiji "

Manyata "thanks a lot jay " she said smiling

Jay "soo jiji u must be tired ...we should sleep now "

Manyata "ohh ya ..." she said and switched off the lights...

Manyata tried a lot to sleep but wasnt able to ...she was really sad . She hated herself for going against her family...ya the jaigad family was their biggest enemy ...she recalled that day...her father brijraj told her everthing...


Flashback

Manyata came running from the store room . She was sixteen years old then . she was holding a photograph and was roaming about when her father came and saw her .

Manyata " dad...who are these people ? I have never seen their pics before ..." she showed the photograph to him .

Brijraj "beta from where did u get this ?"

Manyata "it was in the store room ..."

Brijraj "beta they ...the one who is in the middle is ur grandfather ...u must be knowing that and the ther two standing to his left and right...are just our enemies..."

Manyata "enemy ...what did he do dad ?"

Brijraj " but beta...okk..."

"so you know that at the left side its ur grandad okk n the persons next to him were his best friend . They did everything together . The three studied in the same school and college ."

Manyata "but dad if they was grandads best friend than how are they our enemy "

brijraj " beta when ur grandfather started his business , they trid to take away devgad and were nearly successful but then at the last moment they stopped and we dont know how udays grandfather , who was one of his best friends was murdered and the other person...he ran away and no one knows anything about him now...The jaigad family lost the trust ur grandfather had and they are just our enemies now who can do anything to get devgad..."

Manyata "but dad who is the third person...dont u know anything about him ?"

Brijraj "beta i just know that he was also a prince but his kingdom was snatched away ..."

Manyata "ohh ok " she said and went to her room...


Flashback over


Manyata noticed that the lights were switched n...

"jiji are u ok ?" manyata heard jay asking her

Manyata " hun ya i am...why what happened jay ?"

Jay "jiji if u are ok then y are u crying "

Manyata "bt jay im not..." she was about to lie when she noticed that she already had tears in her eyes

Manyat " actually jay...i ...i lost my best friends..."

Jay hugged her and said "but jiji ...how did this happen ?"

Manyata told her everthing which happened in the airport

Jay "jiji its ok...u need not worry about that...u have ur crowning ceremony this week and after that he cant to anything to our family or devgad "

Manyata "yaa..." she said thinking...

Jay "jiji forget it...dont u remember we have to go to my friends marriage tomorrow...and u promised that u would come too so we should sleep " she said trying to make her jiji forget about whatever happened

Manyata "ohh ya i forgot...dont worry jay ill surely go with u " she said and at once tried to go to sleep .



Unnati "dada how can i go to sleep without seeing u once ..." she said hugging him "i missed u soo much "

Uday "okk unnati but know its getting really late and u have college tomorrow na so go to sleep "

Unnati "ya dada now i can go to sleep "

She went to her room after saying this

Uday walks slowly towards his room thinking . Ya he hated manyata and he would take revenge ...for the past and for fooling him . He would get devgad under him and the devgad family has to suffer a lot now . Suddenly he heard a voice ...it was his mobile .

Uday "hello "

person "hello...i have got news "

Uday "what ?"

Person " the crowning ceremony...its this week...on friday " uday looked at the calender ...it was monday today

Uday "okk "

They cut the call ...

Uday goes to his room thinking ...

Precap ' a marriage to attend...wheres manyata ? 😲😲




Chapter 4 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/58021627�


Edited by Anjalika13 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved the chapter. But Anjali it was too short 😔
Make it longer the next time 😊
Ooohh precap sounds interesting. Does Uday kidnap her or something?? Sounds cool 😉
Update soon. Eagerly waiting 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: fia21

Loved the chapter. But Anjali it was too short 😔
Make it longer the next time 😊
Ooohh precap sounds interesting. Does Uday kidnap her or something?? Sounds cool 😉
Update soon. Eagerly waiting 😃

glad u loved it fia 😃...oh ya hehe srry about that 😛
yupp would try my best to make it longer 😆
umm...maybe...😉
ya will update asap 😊

Edited by Anjalika13 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice update dear :) pls continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow, angie
nice update, so you mix best friend and kidnapping tracks , bravo
pm me your next update

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