Manveer FF : Separate Worlds [Chap 16 - pg 84] - Page 64

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: catty2000

Nice update and quite interesting !

So it seems Riagarh is the main culprit 😡

Continue soon ...
... Thanx 4 the PM

thnxx...
haha ya it is
i will...no probzz
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Archi02

Very nice update fungi. Loved it.:-D

thnx chuhi...glad u loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: andy.a

Nice update dear
it did clear some confusions
continue soon and thanks for the pm

thnx...glad it did
i will tryy...no prob
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Ashish.Holic

Superb update
so raigadh is the main culprit
thanx for PM.

thnxx...haha yaaa...no probzz
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Very interesting update,

Glad that Uday & Manyata figured out who the actual culprit was. Continue soon , thanks for the PM.

thnx...will try...no prob
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MsLuscious

Beautiful update anjali...

but it didnt had any manveer scenes...
well now m not confused anymore so the culprit are royals of raigarh? but now who is this mysterious man? i hope its not akaash:(

thnx sarah 😃
hehe jst a few more chaps
yaaa...well he might be related to raigarh or maybe the guy isnt related to their family problems at all 😉 lol never...unless im out of names
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: cherry.parul0

wooo wooo wooo...meeting chupke chupke,,,sounds interesting...nd whose that 3rd person???? Reveal the suspense na!!!! Nd ye ghar ka bhedi kon h??? Whoz giving ol the info abt devgarh nd jaigarh??

yuppp 😆 mystery...in d next update it will be revealed most probably...haha koi bhi ho skta hai 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago


While Diya and Manyata left to talk to Jay , Vicky stayed in the room . He stood and started exploring the room when his eyes fell on something and he looked at cell and laptop kept on the dressing table such that it was a bit hidden . 'bechare , achha hua mujhe sath nahi lekar gaye.Ab vo dono yahan nahi hain to uday sai hi baat kar leta hun' he thought amused .

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"Manyata ye kya kar rahi ho ?" asked an annoyed Diya "Vo tumhare choti sis hai koi rakshas nahi jo tumhe kha jaayegi...challooo" she said while pulling Manyata . They opened the door only to find the lights switched off and Jay asleep . Manyata heaved a sigh of relief and started walking back while Diya asked her "arre kam se kam mobile n lappy to le le "

Manyata "i think its with VB not Jay"

Diya "uhhh okkk" she said still unsure "

Manyata went to her room while Diya just followed quitely . She stopped as she bumped into Manyata .

Diya " kya huaa?..." She asked as her expressions turned from confused to shock to anger after what she heard .

Vicky "sachhi yar Uday ye dono na humaara khoon chusti rehti hain order de dekar...kabhi humaari baat to sunti hi nahi...dono dayan ...aaahhh" he stopped as he saw both the girls fuming .

"tu toh gaya beta" he whispered to himself then said "arre tum dono aa gayin...vo mobile mil gaya ?" he said making funny faces .

"Vicky tu humaare baare mai baat kar raha tha naa...ruk abhi bataati hun" Diya said as she started chasing him while manyata started thinking about her mobile and laptop . Thats when she saw them kept on the bed .

"Vicky ye yahan kaise ?" she asked pointing at the things and making cute faces . Both Vicky and Diya stopped for a while .

Vicky "pata nahi jab tum gaye to bhi yahin tha "

Diya "to humme bataya kyun nahi duffer"

Manyata "sachhi yar...gadha kahinka"

Vicky pouted "tum dono to jaise bohot intelligent ho na...kamra tak check nhi kara jaane se pehle " Diya gave him a look as if saying 'shut up dude or u are gonna regret being here' . He gulped and looked at the other side .

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Jay was not able to sleep . She knew Manyata had come to her room . After she went away Jai got up and went to talk to DS...

Jay "DS sorry to disturb you but im really worried now . Are you sure your plan is going to work ? Also jiji still talks to Uday . It might make things difficult "

DS "no jay . everything is going as planned and it will be fine , just a few days more ..."

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res baaki badme 🤣 🤣

Edited by Anjalika13 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow gr8 update interesting track pls cntinue soon na

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