Manveer FF : Separate Worlds [Chap 16 - pg 84] - Page 11

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ultravioletray

awesome post...plzzz add me in ur pm list nd continue soon😊

thnx dear...ya course ...ya will update asap...😊
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Manyata and diya chatted for a long time. She was walking towards the entrance now after cutting the call when she felt a hand on her mouth with some kind of cloth...maybe a handkerchief .She suddenly felt her head getting heavier and she felt unconscious...

In tina's room jay was feeling very worried

Jay "tina im having a bad feeling...wheres manyata jiji ?"

Tina "Jay she must be enjoying herself...stop worrying about her and you too enjoy yourself "

Jay "ohh ya you are right..."

Manyata wakes up as she hears a door closing . She feels giddy . She holds her head in her hands and tries to remember what had happened...but dosent remember anything...so she looks around to see that she is in a room with a bed , glass of water , a small window which is closed and a washroom at one side...she had never been here ...n this surely wasn't any room of the hotel in which the function was held .

She looked around for her belongings including her mobile but didn't get any . She tried to open the door but it was locked...so she looked out of the window to see where she was and if she could ask for help but it was too dark to notice anything. She shouted for help a few times but all in vain .

She felt helpless like she didn't have any hope now ...she felt like crying...she sat down on the bed and started thinking...'what was happening ? was it all a nightmare ?"...she once again tried to remember what had happened n this time she had a flashback...'she was talking to diya when she felt someones hand on her mouth...after that she didn't realize anything '...'then maybe she was...kidnapped'...she thought...she shivered at that feeling...'why would someone kidnap her...n what about the coronation ceremony ' ohh no this was a big trouble . She felt tears escape her eyes .

'No ' she thought ' she wasn't gonna break down. Shed face whatever comes next . she would do anything to get out of here...' she fell asleep...thinking...how to get out of that place ...

Jay tries to search for manyata . It was nearly midnight and she was nowhere to be seen . She hoped nothing had happened to her . She decided to search for her again in the room where tina was getting ready before...She knocks the door but gets no reply so she pushes the door open and sees it wasn't locked . She turns the lights on to see that no one was there . She gets worried and looks here and there when she notices a note on the table . She picks it up and reads it...

In the morning

Manyata wakes up as the sunlight falls on her signifying the start of a new day . She looks around and wonders where she is...and suddenly remembers that she needs to get out...it was Wednesday already...two days to go ...she had to get out...she had to reach the mahal before Friday night ...she gets up and looks around...nthin...she goes to the window to see outside .

The window was closed from outside . she looks around and notices that there aren't any cars or any people around and that place is totally deserted . There are many trees in the front which seem to cover a long distance . 'Maybe its a jungle' .

She tries to look around to see if any houses are there bt there is only a road there and this house seems to be the only one there . She feels scared as even if she gets out of this house then she dosent know the way back and no one seems to live here or even pass through this road .

She turns around and goes to the bed and sits down thinking of a plan to get out . 'Maybe i can break the window and get out of this place ...n then ill try to find someone who can tell the way ' she thinks .

She takes a lamp placed there and goes near the window . Just when she is about to break it she hears some footsteps and decides to do it afterwards so she can get more time to run away . She puts the lamp down on a nearby table and runs and sits on the bed . After a few moments she hears the door open and looks at that direction to see a man standing there with a tray with food ...maybe breakfast for her...She looks at him confused... the person comes near the table , keeps the tray down

Manyata "who are u ? n why am i here ?'

Person "this is ur breakfast..."

He says n just leaves ...She keeps staring at him confused . Who was he ? She had never seen him so why would he kidnap her . Maybe it wasn't his plan ...he may be having a boss too .

Jay takes that note and shows it to daadisaab

Jay "but ds this cant be the truth . im sure this isn't written by manyata jiji ...ds i think she is in some kind of truble "

Ds "yess jay im sure that manyata wont do this . We have to find her and without anyone knowing that she isn't with us or anything about this note . This should be only between us only..."

Jay "ds what will happen to the coronation ceremony now ? jiji isn't here and all the people will be present here . Maybe we should post pone it saying that theres some urgent work jiji has to do ."

Ds "jay we cant change the date by ourselves . we will have to ask rajpurohit ji if there is any other date the ceremony can be held..."

Jay "ji daadisaab ..." she says and goes to her room ...

Manyata decides not to eat anything given by these kidnappers . She dosent eat the breakfast but just keeps sitting on the bed ...

Precap ' is it uday ?

hope u like it 😊 pls do tell how it is...


Chapter 6 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/58316965�

Edited by Anjalika13 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Yaar Anji... How could you write this much well...
Atlast manyata kidnapped...
I'm Liking It😉 😆

This concept is Different one...

nw I very eager to knw... How ManVeer will Fall in Love... hehehe

Awesome update dear

waiting for Next one

Edited by RockStarHuda - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update. Pls update soon. Thnks 4 the PM.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Beautiful, awww manyata kidnapd by uday,hmm different story ,den dere romance will start ,aww can't for manveer romance ,plz plzzz update next part soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Arieltabi

Nice update. Pls update soon. Thnks 4 the PM.

thnx ...will try...no probzz
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: annysyed

Beautiful, awww manyata kidnapd by uday,hmm different story ,den dere romance will start ,aww can't for manveer romance ,plz plzzz update next part soon

thnx anny ...yaa 😍...will try my best to update soon 😊
Edited by Anjalika13 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: RockStarHuda

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Yaar Anji... How could you write this much well...
Atlast manyata kidnapped...
I'm Liking It😉 😆

This concept is Different one...

nw I very eager to knw... How ManVeer will Fall in Love... hehehe

Awesome update dear

waiting for Next one

hehe mee too dancing with u
yayy...
😳 😳 😳
ya she did 😆
glad u r liking it 😃
yaa...it is 😆...hehe now ull have to wait fr that...hehe 😉
thnx 😳
will try to update soon
Edited by Anjalika13 - 13 years ago
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It was nice update and loved ur concept

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