maaneet ff 'love u always' part15 pg 23

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somia

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Posted: 13 years ago

note this is my new ff read it and tell me hows it ]CHARACTER SKETCH maan singh khurrana md of khurrana]constructions[/I]

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somia

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Posted: 13 years ago

geet handa Mohinder handa's daughter Hoshiyarpur's best lawyer loved her father and bother

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somia

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Posted: 13 years ago

Mohinder handa lawyer geet's father love his wife who death and his daughter geet and son brij brij handa love his sis and dad dev~dev singh son of anurag shingh anurag singh Mohinder handa's best friend aditya singh anurag singh's elder son love geet

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Mishty Shah

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Posted: 13 years ago

awesome...dear..waiting for you to continue

congratulations on you new FF...!

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somia

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Posted: 13 years ago

[B]<font index:

Part 1:pg 1

Part2: pg2

Part3:pg3

Part4:pg5

part5:pg6
part6:pg7 part7:pg8
part8:pg9

part9:pg10

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part 11 pg 14

part12 pg16
part10:pg12

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somia

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Posted: 13 years ago

part one a 4 year old girl is crying his brither and dai maa tell her too stop but she can't she crying and saying papa muje papa pass jana hai a car stop out of the house and a very handsome man come out of the car runing take the girl in his arm and say stop crying papa is here girl say mama merl mama taha hai (meri mama kahan hai) her father 's eyes become wet he control and says she is coming tomarrow after some time her father say brij main car main khuch toys laya hon geet k liye le kar to ao toys ka naam sun kar geet aur brij bahir baag jate hain aur toys le kar khelne main magan ho jate hain lekin mahinder bohat gehri soch main gum ho jata hai dai maa mahinder ko kehti hai beta dosri shaadi kar lo mahinder guse se kehta hai kabhi nahi or apne room main chala jata hai room main apni wife pari ki tasvir dekh kar kehna hai ke agar saath chorna hi tha toh geet k ane se pehle chor deti tell me hows it meri english weak hai i hope u all under stood waiting for feedback

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somia

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Posted: 13 years ago

part two mahinder's past 20 saal ka mahinder dehli ata hai train se station par khara hota haiaur apne khas mulazim ramji ka intzar kar raha hota hai tabhi aik ladki baag kar ati hai or bcha lo plz mahinderuse le kar waiting room main jata hai or use apna overcoat pehna deta hai or apni hat pehnata hai or kehta hai ke ab koi nahi pehchan paye ga apko ramji ata hai or kehta hai choti sarkar taxi a gai hai cholo mahinder ladki ko kehta hai aap bhi chalo main apko chor deta hon ladki kehti theek hai dono taxi main beth jate hai to mahinder kehta hai btaye kahan jana hai aapko ladki kehti hai mera koi ghar nai mahinder driver ko apna pata deta hai ghar ja kar mahinder ladki ko guest room main sone ko kehta hai or puchta hai kon log the us ke peche ladki kehti hai yeh lambi kahani hai jab aap farig honge main bta dun gi abi aap thaak gaye hon ge aram kar le jeye mahinder ramji ko ladki ka khayal rakhne ko kehta hai or apne room main sone chala jata hai subha mahinder ko pyass lagti hai wo pani lene room se bahir jata hai pani pi kar mahinder apne room main ja hi raha hota hai ke use ladki ka khayal ata hai wo guest room ki taraf jata hai to room andar se band hota hai to mahinder sochta hai kitni achi ladki hai or sone chala jata hai precap : sab tumhari waja se tum jesi ladkiyan amir ladkon ko apne pyar ke jal main asani se phasa leti hain sab janti hon main

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Deepa

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Posted: 13 years ago

CS and till part 2
nice dear...
can u just do the proper alignment alone?
it would be more catching...
cont soon and pm me...
sent the buddy invite...