virman (jab dey met) link to thread two page191

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what happens when two different people of two different world meets and their world become one to know read the following ff

index


part1:page1
part2:page1
part3:page2
part4:page2
part5:page2
part6:page3
part7:page5
part8:page5
part9:page7
part10:page8
part11:page12
part12:page16
part13:page20
part14:page23
part15:page27
part16:page31
part17:page36
part18:page42
part19:page46
part20:page50
part21:page58
part22:page69
part23(a):page82
part23(b):page88
part23(c):page97
part24:page111
part25:page118
part26:page134
part27:page141
part28(1):page150
part28(2):page156
part28(3):page164
part29:page173
part30:page181

link to second thread
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3433363/virman-jab-dey-met-2nd-thread-imp-not-page-8


Hey guys I m new to dis website n a huge fan of ehmmbh so I m writing a story on dem'''.plz guys comment dat u lyk it or not''


part1


it was raining heavily, the weather was awesome and even too romantic a car stops due to breakdown n a person come out of it n a person come out of it n was trying to repair it den he hear something n was mesmerized by dat he started to follow it n when he was near to it he just stop n saw a gal who was singing the song n was dancing n enjoying every bit of it wid rain''''..he was just starring her''he just can't able to see her face as she was far away from him to recognize''.he stop starring when some one shouted to call her from other side n she ran away after dat'..the person was non other den virat vadhera who was lost at dat moment'''as virat wanted to talk to dat gal he just followed her but she was no where den he saw a anklet which he keep with himself as it

belongs to dat gal n den he left from der''''''.


He reached home''

Viren: why r u so late???

Virat: bhai wo car band pad gayi thi isliye'''

Viren:toh isme smile karne wali kya baat hai bhai'''.????

Virat: wo bhai aaj wo na''''(hesitatingly)

Viren: ab bol bhi de bhai''''😊

Den virat explained everything to him n saw him anklet

Viren: bhai uska naam kya hai???

Virat: I don't know''''

Viren: bhai u dont know her name dont think about her its a waste of tym

n den viren left n by hearing dis virat was very upset...



next part>>

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BrunoMars thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I like it!
It's a really good concept.
I hope he can give that anklet soon to
the owner -wink,wink...
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it was superb pm me when u update

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part2 (introduction)

Dat night virat couldn't sleep of thinking of things happened der'''

Next day...

Description

Virat: he belongs to vadhera family n has a strong family background'''he runs a music company which he earned through his hard work''.n sometimes sing for his company album n also help in his family business ''''.he is done his mba in London''.now is at age 26''''he is simple person and who loves adventure''''''''...

Viren: he is a lawyer who completed his law from abroad n was very successful in his work and also help in his family business dat is his dadaji's law farm he is very decent guy at age 28'''''

Der dadaji was a magistrate and a lawyer and inder chachu was also a lawyer'''''. Dey r searching a suitable bride for viren''''..


Virat was very upset ''..he went to bed thinking of dat girl,,,,,,,,

Next day he went to his music company''''he has to take auditions for his new album'''..

At the same tym a women aged 45 years met with an accident(a car was about to hit her)''den a girl came n save her''but women was hurted in her legs so girl taken her to hospital''.

Conversation between them

Gal: aunty r u fyn???

Woman: beta mera paro mein dard ho raha hai'.

Gal: mujhe dekhaiye???? Aunty apke paro mein toh moch aayi hai''''..bas aunty thodi der mein hospital pahunch jayenge''.

Aunty: beta agar aaj tum nai hoti toh pata nai kya hota''..

Gal:aunty pls don't say lyk dis ur lyk my mom'''..

Den dey reached hospital n gal admitted the lady''''.

Den the gal left for her work''.

Dis was the same gal virat saw dat day'''..

Docter: what is ur name???

Woman: my name is swamni vadhera''''..

Docter: did u inform ur family???

Swamni: haan dat gal informed dem'''(pausefor a moment) oh my god maine toh uska naam tak nai pucha''.

Back to virat office'''..

Virat to assistant: I m leaving '''..have some urgent work '''..u take care of auditions'''n he leaves the office''''

Edited by avika26 - 12 years ago
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Its awesum...plz cntinue soon.and pm me
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it was great
please cont soon and pm me
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Part3

after few minutes the gal enters virat's office''''''..

Gal: mam can I go for auditions?????

Receptionist(rp): sorry, audition are over mam''''

Gal: pls give me one chance''''.???

Rp: sorry mam our sir just left'''.now we cant do anything''''''.

Gal: k at least u can give dis cd of mah recorded voice to dem''''????

Rec: k mam I vl try''''''

Gal: thanks(wid a smile on her face)

{den gal leaves from virat's office n unfortunately without giving any details of her}

As virat got a call from stranger about bua's accident he hurrys up to hospital to meet swamni bua''..den der swamni bua described the situation n how dat gal helped her''''..n virat takes swamni bua to home''''..everyone in house was very thankful to dat gal''''

Next day''.

All of dem went to temple to thank god'''''.all of dem ascending the stairs''..suddenly dey heard the bhajan wid very sweet voice'..all of dem were mesmerised by dat'''

At the same time virat was surprised''''.as it was the same voice dat he heard dat raining day''

A sudden smile appears on virat face'''.

Below is the lyrics of the songs''..

oh kanha ab to murli ki madhur dhun suna do na

oh kanha ab to murli ki madhur dhun suna do na '''''

n den song ended'''''

now vadhera family reached mandir''''.

There was huge crowd present there'''virat was very restless n was searching for dat gal''.

But he couldn't find her'.he came back to his familyn was very sad '..den dadaji asked pandit ji''.

Dadaji:who was singing dat beautiful bhajan????

Panditji:ek pyari si bitiya''.was singing the song ..

Dadaji:where is she, I want to meet her'''.????

Panditji:she just left'''..

Dadaji:ohhk'.but one thing c has a beautiful voice'''

Den everybody went home''''except virat n viren who went for there work'''in virat's office

His assistant gave him the cd which that gal has left''.virat was not in a mood so he told keep it In desk''.

After sometime '.virat was searching for some other cd n came across the cd which that gal left

He just played it ''''.n was shocked n surpriesd ''''.

It was the same song which he heard dat day wid the same voice''''

The song was lyk dis'''''

Kya baatun dil khud hi na janne kaise mehka mehka ahsaas hai'''''

Aate jate in lamho ki lehro mein kahin na kahin toh kuch khass hai'''

Na jane kaise hai ye madhoshi hai ye kaise nasha'''''.

Hawa se karu baatein ye dil kyun kya hai wajah''''''

Jahan ye sara apna sa lage sapna sa lage''''..haan.aaa''aaa'''..

Na jane chala hai kya pane laga hai kyun gane''..

My heart goes on dhin tana''.

Na jane chala hai kya pane laga hai kyun gane''..

My heart goes on dhin-tana'''.

My heart goes on dhin-tana''''

My heart goes on dhin-tana''''.

My heart goes on dhi-tana'''

Listening to dis virat was shell shocked n surprised'''''.


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Part4

Listening to dis virat was shell shocked n surprised?????

Den after few minutes he called his assistant'''.and asked about cd''

Virat: anup ye cd kahan se aaya????

Anup: sir I don't know mujhe toh ye
cd riya ne diya hai''''

Virat: acha phir riya ko mere cabin mein bhejo''''

Riya: sir apne mujhe bulaya???

Virat: haan ,riya tumhre pass ye cd kahan se aaya???

Riya: sir, kal ek ladkhi aayi thi auditions k liye'''.usi ne diye hai'''wo late se aayi
thi'Or aap office mein nai the'''.islye apko pata nai hai'''

Virat: what was her name???

Riya: sorry sir, I had not taken any details from her''''.

Virat: what??? How could you be so
irresponsible???forget it''''just leave(he was frustrated at dis and Virat was
very upset at dis it was third tym he had chance to meet that gal'..but he
couldn't make it up)


Whole night he was not able to sleep and was
thinking of dat gal'''''

Virat's in his thoughts''''

Who kaun hai????

Why she is coming again and again across my life???

Her voice was just awesome''''

Kash mein usse mile pata''..

If next tym she will come I will surely get all dis answers'''''

One minute I can do one thing''..yes ,yes'''''yesss!!!!!!!!!!!!

He was over joyed wid his idea'..


Next day he has given
a add on newspaper and asked the owner of cd to meet him in his office''''..


Time passed but unfortunately no response came''''.


And like these on month passed''''..


ONE MONTH LATER/////////////


Virat in his room was doing some work then shlok(son of inder chachu n member of vadhera family'''.studying in school and is 8 yrs old) came to his room''.

Shlok:bhaiya, I need ur help''''.

Virat: nai beta I am very busy these days'''.(virat was kind of person always busy with his work)

Shlok: bhaiya its really important'' I need ur help bhaiya plsss''''.pls pls pls!!!!! (making puppy face)

Virat: okay, tell me what is the matter??? (reluctantly agreed)

Shlok: bro our school principal wants to meet
u''''so u have to meet her tommorow''''..

Virat: okay,I will come''''


Next day////////////


Virat: good morning mam, I am virat
vadhera''''shlok's brother u called me???

Principal: yes sir''''.thanks for coming''''

Virat: mention not ''''its my pleasure''''

Princi:actually sir we wanted u to become judge for our next inter school singing and dancing
competiton''''''.shlok is also participating in it''''..

Virat: but maam''.i don't have any experience''''N I just know about singing skill what about dance''''.??? (confused)

Princi: dat u don't worry''..der will be two other judge's with u''sir pls do it's a request
on mah behalf''' (pleading with puppy face)

Virat: okay maam I vl do it''''

Princi: thank u so much''''..

He just then leaves the office and was passing
through the corridor's of the school''..and heard the same mesmerising voice''..n follow it''but once again it was his bad luck he couldn't make it
up''.


AFTER TWO WEEK/////////


Time for competiton''''.whole vadhera family has reached ther destination as shlok was
also to perform n virat was judge the competiton''''''


One by one performances started'''.n at last it was tym for
sholok's performances in which dey will sing it will live n at the same tym vl dance''''''

The gal who was singing was who choreographed it n she was
non other than virat's dream gal''''''

Performances started''''..

N virat gasped''..

As recognised the voice''''

But was helpless'''''

as being on of the judge's he can't move from there...

stay tunned to my next update whether he vl meet dat gal or not...






Edited by avika26 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice os
pm me wen u update
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Wow amazing concept .
You changed the whole story line , Virat a hard working guy and that gal ( Manvi ) a singer , Wow !
Continue soon and do pm me .

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