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-Serene.Rose- thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely update.. 👏But ithna short? Plz update soon.. I'm loving this story.

Thanks for the PM😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
thank u guys for ur comments...i know u all want longer update but can't help it...i m very impatient when i write...which leads to short update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice updt but short! cont. soon! and good work👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow loved it.cont soon yaar.
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks for ur reply ...i vl update it soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
it was nice..
but so short??😭
anws thnk u fr the pm...😊
wud love 2 see hw it goes frm here
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part16

Next day

All youngster went outside for outing'''''''''''''.

As there were only elders so dadaji decide it's a high time to speak beeji'''."samdhanji I wanna talk to u" said dadaji ; Beeji got worried but nodded in agreement.

Dadaji:who actually samdhanji we want manvi's hand for our virat'''..

Beeji stood still for few minutes in deep thoughts''''..after that she spoke tearing stillness in environment'''..she said"samdhiji, virat is a good boy and gal would be lucky to have him but I don't think manvi is eligible for this I mean she is still a child how she will be your ideal daugter in law"

Dadaji: oh samdhanji u don't worry about that we all except her like that we will be grateful to u if u say yes''''''.

Beeji: samdhiji I have no problem '''''I vl be very pleased to have virat as son in law who actually I m tensed with manvi's reaction''''

Dadaji: don't worry samdhanji we will wait for suitable time ta ask them''''.

After sometime at living room''''

Viren asked dadaji" can we four can go for dinner tonight"???

Dadaji: ofcoarse you all can go''..(with a smile)

Viren: thank u dadji'''''.(excitement)

Dabbu was about to ask then chachi shuts her mouth as she knows his son very well...

later

Dabbu: ma I also want to go for dinner'''''..

Chachi: beta its their dinner date what u vl do there''''..

Dabbu: toh phir why virat bhaiya and manvi di r going???

Then chachi explained him everything and asked him to not inform manvi about this''''.

Scene shift

Manvi: di what I will do there I don't wanna kabab mein haddi'''.

Jeevika: trust me mannu u vl not'''.(with a sheepish smile) and then making an excuse she said " dadaji will not allow us so we thought to take u two with us"

Manvi: okay di''.(oblivious to her intention)

At night they leave for dinner'''''as they entered hotel manager greeted them showed their way to hall booked by them''''.it was incredibly beautiful decorated with white drapes,white ballons and lavender adorning it'''''.

Manvi excitedly says" wow jiju nice decors I must say di is going to love it''waise u don't worry , maine kabab mein haddi nai banugi"''''.u don't worry about that Sali saheba waise u lyk arrangements?? Hmm jiju, its awesome''''after turning towards both of them(viratand manvi) viren said" u two enjoy here'we are going to other one"''''..oh acha haddi ko pehle hi bhar kar diya manvi said(smirking)'''.pls understand na Sali sahiba saying dis viren and jeevika left''''

Manvi was oblivious to this and virat found something fishy and in his thoughts"if bhai wanted to go other place then why he booked this place"''''he just brushed his thoughts and made manvi comfortable at her sit'''..den both of them stared surfing menu card'''

Manvi: virat this is chinese restaurant''and I don't lyk chinese and see in this big area only we two are here''''no other customer its so boring(pouting)''''

Virat: u just wait I will be back in few minutes saying this he went to manager and said "xcuse me we want indian food can u provide it""???

Manager: sorry sir we only serve chinese''''

Virat: why only we two are here??? Where are the other customer's???

Manager: viren sir booked two hall for two couples'''..hearing this virat was shell shocked and after awhile he went back to his table'''''.in his thoughts" I will talk about this to bhai" he came back to his sense when manvi waved her hand ifront of him and said" kya chep,kahan chale gaye the"???

Virat: can't u maintain silence for a while??

Manvi: its so boring here plus u are irritating me'''..its enough for me I am leaving'''''

Virat: manvi! Manvi! He grabbed her hand''''.and said manvi where are u going???

Manvi: home''''I am feeling damn hungry'''

Virat: but we should wait for bhai and bhabi na?? lets go inside and eat something??

Manvi: I don't like chinese'''''.

Virat: okay lets go somewhere else???

Manvi: okay''''

Then they leaves the restaurant'''..

hope u lyk it/////////////

comment and critics both are welcomed///////////

i tried to make it long//////////////

avika😉😉

Edited by avika26 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanku Thanku Thankuuu 😃
I was sooo looking forward for your update!!!!!!
I love Dadaji <3 <3 <3 he is too cute...
Ha ha so VirMan are going someplace else ha???...just like them to leave such a place and may be go have fun at a daba or something 😉
Thanku for making it long...next time make it longer 😆
Awesome 👏
Hugzzz
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Anu101

Thanku Thanku Thankuuu 😃

I was sooo looking forward for your update!!!!!!
I love Dadaji <3 <3 <3 he is too cute...
Ha ha so VirMan are going someplace else ha???...just like them to leave such a place and may be go have fun at a daba or something 😉
Thanku for making it long...next time make it longer 😆
Awesome 👏
Hugzzz




HEY THANK U SO MUCH...IF I WILL TRY TO MAKE IT MORE LONG THEN MY FUSE WILL GO OFF...WAISEWHEN U UPDATING NEXT???
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awww! Such a cute update.. So VirMaan are going out?! 😍😍 Can't wait to read what happens next!😍

Thans so much for the PM.. Glad you made it longer. Awesome part👏👏Thoroughly enjoying this story.. Update soon🤗🤗

Keep up the brilliant work👍🏼

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