virman (jab dey met) 2nd thread imp not page 8

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thanks a lot shilpa dear for banner
its was like eternity i am starting my ff jab dey met new thread, there was time i dropped the idea of continuing this ff, but never mind u people gave me so much love , ur request, ur constant pms and never ending question was all reason here i am continuing these piece and i am extremely sorry to my patient readers this is for u all...so keep showering ur love , likes and comment to my ff

welcome to second thread of jab dey metšŸ˜ŠšŸ˜›šŸ˜‰



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regarding pm list note

i am going to remove people from my buddy list whi are note commenting or liking my update
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recap

he slowly crept out of the room later at night, all the others have fallen asleep and he didn't want to disturb anyone... he had a weird habit of going on a walk when he doesn't feel sleepy and the fresh air would help him soothes down him and make him feel sleepy, he walked around the resort finding the way to the terrace but stopped on his track as he heard a soft hum, the voice felt similar and attractive that Virat's legs moved automatically towards it, Virat stopped moving as soon as the voice stopped humming and his eyes frantically moved around finding the owner of that enthralling voice, but again he missed the opportunity , he trance of thoughts broke when he saw a shadow moving across and was surprised out of his wits seeing the scene in front of him...

Hey to my reader this song is humming version of song that manvi sing for the first time in rainy day


Part31

"I love you without knowing how, or when, or from where. I love you straightforwardly, without complexities or pride; so I love you because I know no other way."
Pablo Neruda


these update all credit goes to ayesha thanks a lot dear

lines below in red are virat reaction and in blue are his observation

He saw a shadow moving towards him, he dazely moved in towards her and was amazed to see manvi standing who was looking stunning dressed in classy white attire

Imagine manvi in below attire



He saw her humming while walking in his direction .he halted in his steps when he observed someone standing infront of her

Bolo na tum zara, pyaar yeh hota hai kya
Yeh haseen raaz hai, jaane kaun bhala
Chherta hai yeh aasmaan, mausam lage aaj manchala
Yeh pyaar hai kya khoobsurat bala
Bolo na tum zara, pyaar yeh hota hai kya
Yeh haseen raaz hai, jaane kaun bhala

The person was singing above lines holding her hands while his back was facing virat



to say he was shocked was less, he was totally numb to see other person singing for his manvi




Pyaar ki roshni jismon mein ghul gayi
Pyaar ki aas mein rooh yeh dhul gayi
Rog chalne laga, dil ka yeh kaafila

in replica she smiled and hummed above lines while swaying in slowly with him by now he was fuming in anger

Sarsaraati huwi hawa youn baadiyon mein hai beh rahi
Pyaar ki hi kahaaniyan kaanon mein hole se keh rahi


he was about to interepet them when his face was visible to virat

Yeh pyaar hai kya khoobsurat bala

he was again shocked

Bolo na tum zara, pyaar yeh hota hai kya

as he saw his own reflection



Yeh haseen raaz hai, jaane kaun bhala

they both were swaying while humming

Pyaar yeh subh ki makhmali dhoop hai
Pyaar yeh shaam ko saawala roop hai
Yeh jadoo hai kya, jo hai humpe huwa

they were dancing lost in their own world

Pyaar paaya to zindagi ek pal mein jaise badal gayi
Rang ujhle hai raagini naye sur mein jaise hai dhal gayi

virat was overwhelmed with his own fantasy


Yeh pyaar hai kya khoobsurat bala

and he was smiling like no tomorrow

Bolo na tum zara, (bolo na tum zara)
Pyaar yeh hota hai kya, (pyaar yeh hota hai kya)
Yeh haseen raaz hai, jaane kaun bhala

suddenly he came out of trance and realized that he was dreaming with his open eyes

to listen song use below swf

Something flicked and he came out of trance realizing that he was dreaming with his open eyes

Was he really dreaming about dancing with Manvi, it was so magical he felt like he can spend his whole life like this, what does all this mean to him???, he never ever has these pleasurably weird kind of feeling for anyone till now then what happened in these past few days , as all of sudden he the Virat vadhera is daydreaming about manvi.???

With all these confusing thoughts he was moving forward but heard the flick again and noticed something shimmering near his foot, Virat bent and took what seemed like an anklet in his palm, 'someone must have dropped it' he thought' he was about to keep it away incase if the owner comes looking back, but stopped realizing the familiarity, it looked like the same anklet which he found days back' "Could the owner be same too'" he wondered,

Virat was surprised about the new piece of information, the girl who had attracted his attention with her magical voice, was here as by comparing the new ones with old ones he found it was ditoo with special mark on both anklet and now he couldn't wait to find out more about her, he felt restless and impatient' Will he able to find out who she is? What was happening to him? He felt so heavy and burdened with all these thoughts,

The night faded away as the sun rose up in the sky spreading its warmth, It was the shadi today and the whole resort was in a total hustle bustle, but Virat had all his mind on the anklet and the supposed owner, he didn't know why he was being so curious but he also knew that finding the owner's identity was important for him'

Here on the other side manvi was feeling totally down as yesterday she had lost the only anklet of her mother while taking a walk during the night, she remembered that she was gleefully humming her all time favourite tunes but was shattered when discovered about missing anklet as she already has lost first one a few months back and thought of keeping the other one carefully but she failed, she was so angry with herself' How could she be so careless? How could she just lose something which belonged to her mother, her last memory, the anklet had been her strength, her support and her everything' she had never thought that she would misplace it'

Manvi did not seem happy, she couldn't even pretend to be happy at least to keep her friends out of worry' she had been thankful for the workload for keeping her friends occupied, but Arjun never failed to make her laugh or smile whenever he came across her, these mood accompanied her till the end of shaadi'.

It was only when she had been seated in a corner she had heard the announcement of a lost anklet, she didn't think twice before running to the place to retrieve it, she had even asked for the person who had returned it back to the reception but they had said that he had gone away regarding some urgent work, she wanted to thank him for giving her possession back but shrugged and skipped away to at least enjoy the rest of the moments.

Virat cursed his luck as he returned to the reception, the girl had already collected the anklet and he had missed the opportunity he had with him yet again... he at least felt at ease for only giving one of the anklet in the pair he had with him as he personally wanted to return other by confirming it history , he was still hopeful as he had the other one and would use this opportunity wisely... But how? The shaadi was almost over so the guests will all be leaving' Virat grimaced,

"Didn't you'll at least ask for her name'" he inquired,

"No sir' I was not the one who returned it, And the person who handled this matter is not here presently," The lady said as she tried to smile, 'wondering about his bothersome'

"Can you at least say what did she look like'" How could he just walk out on the wrong time' 'damn the idiot who called him at that time' he cursed silently,

"I'm very sorry sir' I didn't notice, but will surely let you know after my colleague comes back' he would have at least asked her name' " she replied apologetically,

Virat didn't acknowledge her but moved away lost in thought, how could they just return something like that? What if it had gone to another person but not who actually owned it? He quickly shook his head eliminating such thoughts' who would want another person's anklet anyway that too one in the pair?

"Ouch'" Manvi frowned and looked up to face a lost Virat,

("Oh hello'" She snapped and Virat gave a confusing smile')

"Where are you lost' you hurt me'" she rubbed her arms complainingly and was surprised when Virat grabbed her hand softly nursing it,

"Oh I'm sorry' Mein kuch soch raha tha aur tumhe dekha nahi'" he apologized still rubbing her arm softly,

("Oh I'm sorry' I was thinking something" he apologized still rubbing her arm softly, )

"It's okay' waise why are looking so troubled' koi pareshani hai kya'?"

("It's okay' waise why are looking so troubled' any problem'?")

Virat looked up suddenly and blinked his eyes' Not knowing what to tell her, "Aisa kuch nahi hai' bas kaam ke'" he was going to continue with his lie but Manvi cut him short,

(Virat looked up suddenly and blinked his eyes' Not knowing what to tell her, "nothing like that, its work" he was going to continue with his lie but Manvi cut him short,)

"Ya right' Tumhe toh kaam khi alawa kuch yaad hi nahi rehta'"she complained grabbing her arm away from him, 'Mujhe toh miss bilkul nahi karoge na' bus mein hi pagal hun jo'" she blabbered in a friendly way

("Yeah right 'u don't know anything except work''"she complained grabbing her arm away from him, 'u will not miss me'I am only the mad'" she blabbered in friendly way)

"Kya'" Virat asked surprised by her sudden outburst,

("What?" Virat asked surprised by her sudden outburst,)

"Dekha' You'll never miss me'" She replied childishly,

("See' You'll never miss me'" She replied childishly)

"Umm'" He still couldn't believe her words,

"Hmph'" She huffed and turned away to move but Virat pulled her towards him by holding her wrist, Manvi who was not expecting this move couldn't keep herself steady and fell on his chest with a thud, Virat took advantage of the situation to wrap his arm around her waist lightly, not wanting to make her feel uncomfortable,

"So you're saying that you'll miss me'?" He questioned,

Manvi narrowed her gaze, while studying his weird behaviour, "Of course I would' I'" she was going to continue but Virat covered her lips with his free hand to stop her,

"I will miss you too'" he replied feeling touched with her naive confession,

Manvi stared at him while he kept looking at her tenderly, she was surely surprised to see the this new side of him, new but touchy' they kept on looking at her till Manvi phone buzzed, Virat gained his sense and released his hold on Manvi in a second, feeling embarrassed, Manvi on the other side was totally unaware of the emotions erupting within him,

"Abhi aayi baba'" she pleaded and turned looking at Virat who volunteered to escort her to Arjun's car, the car zoomed pass the road as Virat moved towards his car to leave Shimla with a lump of confusion regarding his and Manvi's relationship, mostly his reaction to her presence and proximity forgetting about anklet thing.

("coming yaar" she pleaded and turned looking at Virat who volunteered to escort her to Arjun's car, the car zoomed pass the road as Virat moved towards his car to leave Shimla with a lumps of confusion regarding his and Manvi's relationship, mostly his reaction to her presence and proximity forgetting about anklet incident. )

how was it???

virat will able to find anklet gal??

he will realise his love for manvi??

to know about all these stay stunned to future updates...

please share your views regarding this//////

pls guys do comment//////

lots of love

avikašŸ˜‰šŸ˜ŠšŸ˜›
Edited by avika26 - 12 years ago
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Wrong link plz edit. Wanna read now... šŸ˜›
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yipeee... congo🄳 for the second thread...šŸ‘šŸ¼...

m so happy finally after sooo manyyy daysssi will be able to read this stry...😃

update soon..

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link edited to 1st thread

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COngrats...! looking forward for the update..!
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Hope u love the sng as its one of the fav
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Awww this is super awesome...cont soon

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