ArHi FF: Colors of the Wind; Th-1 Prologue - Ch-6B

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Ajita Spencer

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Ahhhaa... thats way!! she was so nervous, and did not want to go inside the shop . Ok now Arnav knows that she pawned her kangans , now I am waiting for him to get them back for her . I love how you start the chapter with a beautiful poem then a flash-back , takes me back to all those magical ArHi scenes . Loved this beautifully written update too .👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

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meera30

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Posted: 14 years ago

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Dude, what the hell?! Arnav cannot go missing here too! I will go mad! I demand my Arnav back PRONTO!

The rest of the chapter was very nice...the flashbacks were some of the most powerful and important ones and I like how you played them around...instead of "Khushi!" there seems to be stage set for "Arnav!"

And Anjali...kya pata hai yaar usko?!

Great job!

And the song - I want that to change to Marry Me by The Train soon, okay! :/ :p

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tina_1234

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Posted: 14 years ago

#634

awesome part..loved it .

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BlueMystique

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Posted: 14 years ago

#635

Hi!😊

Thanks for updating despite your busy schedule. Much needed today!

I loved the way you connected both the flashbacks. In the first one, he was unaware of his affection and care for her, he knew she affected him and irritated him, made him feel, but he didn't understand why she was so important, only that he couldn't imagine something happening to her. For me, that was the scene, when Arnav realized that he did care for this girl (remember him staring at her through the window?), and that knowingly or unknowingly, he had done her injustice. But being the ASR he is, he couldn't just apologize.

And in the second flashback, he was more aware of his love for her, but pushing her away because of his fear of loving people, and then realizing that his breath would really stop if something happened to her. This is when he might have unconsiously accepted his love for her, and when anjali said he should confess his feelings before its too late, this is probably what he remembered.

This chapter raised a lot of new questions. Who was the woman who called Arnav? Why did her hurry off to meet them? Why would Khushi worry if she knew the reason? Who was the person Arnav was talking to? Why wasn't he home yet?

Love Anjali's and Khushi's talk. I think Anjali already knows about Shyam, but knowing you, you can bring in a new twist!😊

Waiting for the next update! :)

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appy

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Posted: 14 years ago

#636

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Meeraa!! Man, this was the right time to come online! :) There are so many PMs!

The flashbacks are again doing their magic. It was beautiful to read them. And I loved Anjali and Khushi's conversation. She will be a good source of strength for Anjali.

Ohh!! So that is why she was upset. The ring is something that shows her connection to Arnav, and the Raizadas.. And she doesn't want that?? Hmm..

ASR is scared! Of his wife.. but were the hell did he go? Is that some PI? It's 11 pm Arnav.. Where are you?? :P

Loved it Meera!

Oh, and the song.. I think I have it in my playlist.. Will have to check. Continue soon! :)

P.S: You're going the channel way.. Is he kidnapped here too, or what?!

Love,

Appy! :D

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Gunjan Mukherjee

@gunjanmkj

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Posted: 14 years ago

#637

Loved hw u used such powerful FBs at such an intense turn in their life..dis tym d tables hv turned,places xchanged..
loved d growing bond btwn khushi n anjali..vry much cherishable 😊
bt where d hell's arnav???nw evn here he's mssng!!pls,dat wud b too much to handle,wat wid arnav mssng on d show too..!
n wat duz anjali knws yaar??wats up wid her??

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