Os absence makes the heart grow fonder(ch4 at 17)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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ch 2 at 9

ch3 at 13

ch4 at 16

Arnav walk out as his flight was missed , he just stopped next to a tree as he heard Khushi shouting


Khushi:" if he is gone don't you think i will give you the papers,you stop blackmailing me"

Shyam: khushi ji if you will not give me then my deal

Khushi: "dont dare try to touch me dont dare "she pull her self away

Shyam : khushi ji

Khushi: " that day at fancy dress i didnot shouted ,but here i will shout and collect people if you follow me"she started walking

Shyam: i promise you i was coming to tell him the truth but i got late.

Khushi: i said dont follow me suna aap na she just stopped a taxi and seated

shyam when we both have to go at same place why dont i come with you?

Khushi: just asked the driver to drive



Shyam: khushi ji till you will give me papers i will not tell him . he smiled as he saw her going

he stopped another taxi and left


Arnav: what is all this ? he just recollected khushi begging him "don't go" he just grab a cab


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Khushi was at poolside when she received the call from UK that Arnav haven't reached , she panic "i will go and tell DI" she was about to go then she stopped her self "he is here he didnot go" she a weak smile appear on her lips she just try to call on his number but it was powered off, she just though for a will" DI said he goes somewhere ,might be possible, if i will tell Di she will get worried and in her condition it is dangerous , i will wait till tomorrow"

at night RM land line phone was ringing

Khushi was sitting on the lawn chair near pool side she just ran and picked up as she said hello there was silence at the other end ,she felt it was him"Arnav ji aap ha na" there was a silence for a min and then the call was dropped

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the next day

Khushi went with Anjali to temple she was praying when she felt him she look around but he was not there ," i am just feeling him" she just keep on looking here and there

Shyam" khushi ji "

Khushi: just move away she was just feeling him she just walk to the other side to look around , " i am just crazy , he doesnot want to hear me see my face why he will follow me " she just wipe her tears


they went to the orphanage,

Anjali: khushi ji should i tell you one thing as she saw khushi was playing with a baby who was holding her hand

Khushi: ji

Anjali: 9 years back chote came here on this day

Khushi: ji

Anjali: bubbly just hold his hand like this baby is holding your , chote didnot not feel like leaving her hand he just adopted her

Khushi: kya

Anjali: chote is very different he asked everyone never to tell her she was not part of Raizada family . she is actually chote's adopted daughter in papers

Khuhsi just again felt him she just look around as it was a park children were playing . cars were parked in the parking lot ,she just shake her head ." placed her hand on her heart to feel her heart beat it was racing she again look around and walk to the parking lot ,as she was walking towards the cars her heart beat was racing s ,suddenly a black car drive away it has tinted glasses , she just try to see in but could not .

Shyam : just came and try to hold her arm" khushi ji "

Khushi: i asked you not to touch me dont you get that she ran back to orphanage.




Arnav look at her in his back view mirror she was running in wiping her tears , Shyam was giving his cunning smile ." why i cannot resist my self ? why?last night i called her ?she found out it was me and now like an idiot i am following her and she finding me again and again" he recollected he was driving next to her car and she was trying to peep in the car too

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should i cont this?

Edited by naddiya26 - 13 years ago


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Superb !!!!!! Loved it !!!!!!
Wish something like this would happen !!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it di..👏.its an awesome one...😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
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SUPERBBB continue it Naddiya irt sounds really good

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Posted: 13 years ago
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why did u end it there ???? :(
it's BRILLIANT . plz cont.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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offcourse, you should continue this... 😊 and PM me whenever you update..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: zaniax

why did u end it there ???? :(

it's BRILLIANT . plz cont.

because i was going for shopping 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oh wow great os please cntinue it ,
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Posted: 13 years ago
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somebody told me too "absence makes the heart grow fonder" n i feel it in my personal life...
the title itself has sooo much meaning yar...
touching update...



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Posted: 13 years ago
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Yeahh, Do Update More Parts 😳

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