*SUB INSPECTOR NIKHIL*{story for contest}edited - Page 2

It's a good story 👍🏼
Btw, Nikhil is a sub-inspector.

I am starting this now...but such a small one...that's my first reaction. 😊

Originally posted by: Shruti_HR

It's a good story 👍🏼
Btw, Nikhil is a sub-inspector.

Originally posted by: visrom

I am starting this now...but such a small one...that's my first reaction. 😊

Ok...finished it now...nice to see someone writing a Nik-centric story. The story is actually complete...it's more like a Written Update which is perfectly fine.

Generally when people write here, they write with dialogues to get the 'feel' of the episode. I have no problem with either approach...just that this WU format gets over fast...😆

Originally posted by: Be.A.Rebel

very good first attempt keep it up mate 👍🏼

Nice story... Short and sweet... Its really nice to see someone write a Nik- centric story and you actually tried to relate it to his joining CID. 👏

Just a small suggestion..can you please re-read your story once you write it...to check for spellings. It becomes a little troublesome when there spelling mistakes in hindi dialogs.. I had a little problem understanding the last 4-5 lines.. had to re-read them.. and guess what the words could be.

Well.. Overall the plot was small and quick ... but for the first time writer it was a good start. Please continue writing.. and slowly you can increase the length too adding twists to it 😊

I liked it Soniya. Short and sweet. And it was nice to see a Nik-centric story. 😃

Wah! Kya speed thi story ki...
As its ur first attempt... So it was nice...
Keep writing...

wo kya hai na mene apne collage ki library mein likh kar pot ki thi aur waha ka keyboard kuch jyada hi purana tha aur mene story recheck bhi nahi ki

Nik centric story...really good attempt by you...already most of the readers said still i am again saying the same u must read your story after writing it...when u read ur story u must consider urself as just a reader not the writer then u can easily find ur fault...there is hindi as well english spelling mistakes and i think there also some missing lines & reader have to guess that portion...anyway u already understood ur problems...
But still really good first attempt...keep writing...👍🏼