*SUB INSPECTOR NIKHIL*{story for contest}edited

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Sub INSPECTOR NIKHIL
A letter came to the CID beuro for ACP ...He start reading letter after read the letter he was in anger and came out from the beuro All are surprised from the behavior of ACP
FREDDY: ye sir ko kya ho gaya
ABHI: lagta hai kisi kaam mein uljhe hua hain
2 DAYS LATER A MAN IS CAME SAYS HE WANT TO MEET NIKHIL BUT ABHI SAYS THAT HE IS ON LEAVE
MAN : what but wo ghar par too aaya hi nahi
ABHI: par usne kaha tha ki usske ghar par emegency hai
FLASHBACK
NIKHIL: sir mera ana bahut jaroori hai sir plz mujhe leave de dejiye
ACP: dekho jabtak us case ki hearing nhi ho jati tab tak kisi ko leave dene ke liye mana kiya gaya hai
NIKHIL: sir...
DAYA:intrupt] esee kon si baat ho gayi o tum ruk nahi sakte
NIKHIL : sir hei kuch personal n important
ACP: thik hai mein DCP sir se baat karta huun
tum aa sakte ho 1 week ke liye
RETURN FROM FLASHBACK
ABHI: aur kal to use duty join karni hai
MAN: par wo to ghar pahuncha hi nahi isliye me mumbai aaya
ACP: ye thik kahan rahe hai DAYA& ABHI mere cabin mein aaao
jo letter aaya tha wo headquater se tha uss me likha tha ki tumhara ek officer DRUG rackt me mila hua hai
or ye photo bhi bheji hai jisme NIKHIL drug deal kar raha hai
DAYA: nikhil aisa nahi kar sakta
ACP: par phir bhi uppar se order aaya hai use arrst karne kaa
informers activate kar doo
all are shocked with news ABHI apne saare informr ko kaho ki drug supplier ke baare mein pata karen

then phone rang VIVEK picked the phone and tell other that MUNNA is comming to supply drugs tonight in ishq bar all are getting ready to cayght him ABHIwants to inform ACP but his phone is out of range
AT NIGHT IN ISHQ BAR
ABHI:dhoondo use
all scatterd and VIVEK saw him he conveys th message to everyone all caught him
Everybody in the beuro except NIKHIL and ACP MUNNA in interogation room he tell them that he was doing on the order of his boss and sucide with his gun
then ACP enters and ABHI tells him all the things he says that there is order from head office that they have to caught NIKHIL and all gang members in this racket
and order all to sarch at nikhil house
AT NIKHIL HOUSE
there is a lock on th door DAYA opens the door with his coolstyle in his home they start searching all things are present on right place but in his bed room all of his clothes are on his bed and some files they found some burnt paper peice which was sent to forensic lab . In lab with the help of well eqquipent dr salukhe tells that it was a bill or paper of ishq bar In bar they found that nikhil came here with MUNNA
AT BUERO
VIVEK tries to track the mobile of NIKHIL and he found that his last call was reccived on 5 days ago at 6:00am by a private number at joggers park mumbai
ONE DAY LATER
All are busy in doing their work except DAYA ABHI sees him nd came to him
ABHI: kya hua
DAYA: NIKHIL kya sach me racket mein shaamil hoga
ABHI :kuch kaha nahi aa sakta
then Daya phone start rings after reciving the call he was very upset and moving outside the beuro
after some time they got an information that the mobile of nikhil was in a godown at k m r road
all team was there they found that godown they open the door they found a letter and NIKHIL mobile
in letter it was written they stop the rescuing him otherwise they were caught in a big trap for example some blood
all are surprised because they think 99% that NIKHIL was a criminal they also found the blood on the floor which was send into the forensic lab and Dr salukhe said that it is of daya all are surprised
then they got the information that NIKHIL came to deal in the fairy park at night 10:30 pm
all went to the park and they scattered NIKHIL and two more person came with a suitcase and after an hour three more guys came with cash SACHIN said that they should ctch them but ABHI stops him and says make the deal complete and caught all the members FREDY ask they should catch NIKHIL also ABHI nodded his head in yes
suddenly there is a blast and all around and all the dealers ran away the CID start chasing them and they reach to a yard they saw that they put gun on NIKHIL and there are many girls are tied on chairs the CID control the situation and saw that the gr8 drug mafia MUNNA was there suddenly he put the gun on ABHI but NIKHIL gave him a kick all were send to the ail and NIKHIL says thatThey caught DAYA also ACP came with DAYA and ask why did he do it alone
suddenly DCP came and says because he is on duty to catch drug maafia in 6 months he request him that he wants to take entry in CID as a cop but it is not possible to enter him with the help of ins DAYA he came and tracking drug mafia
he gave the information to me of the drug mafia and I said A C P to give him leave
ABHI: to ye 3 ladkiyan
NIKHIL: een 3 no ko ye mafia london bhena chahta tha ab mene mana kar diya to eesne mujh par gun taan di
DAYA: aur haan eesne no muhe code word me eeske 5 main aade bata diye the
ACP: par uss letter ka kya chhakar hai
DCP: wo DIG ne kaha tha ye information bhi unki thi
FREDY: aakhir ye hai kaun
NIKHIL: mein...
DCP: ye jo bhi ho aab ye sirf inpector NIKHIL hai
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Will read it soon Soniya...but can you add the story name to the subject? 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Quite fast paced story.
Confusion I have is ----
"Everybody in the beuro except NIKHIL and ACP MUNNA in interogation room he tell them that he was doing on the order of his boss and sucide with his gun."
Now who committed suicide-- Munna that too in interrogation room or boss. I think I am confused as Munna is alive in end. And who is boss as I can't find him in whole story.
At end there is blast, who was behind this behind couldn't make out. and those 3 girls is they same which were tied to chairs and
ABHI: to ye 3 ladkiyan
NIKHIL: een 3 no ko ye mafia london bhena chahta tha ab mene mana kar diya to eene muh par gun taan di
Nikhil ne mana kiya I could understand till this point aur gun kispe tani ?????? girls pe, girls ne Nikhil pe ya phir Munna ne Nikhil pe.
I think I am tired so couldn't connect things and got confused . Will re-read after your reply may be I could better connect things then.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sunnyp1414

Quite fast paced story.

Confusion I have is ----
"Everybody in the beuro except NIKHIL and ACP MUNNA in interogation room he tell them that he was doing on the order of his boss and sucide with his gun."
Now who committed suicide-- Munna that too in interrogation room or boss. I think I am confused as Munna is alive in end. And who is boss as I can't find him in whole story.
At end there is blast, who was behind this behind couldn't make out. and those 3 girls is they same which were tied to chairs and
ABHI: to ye 3 ladkiyan
NIKHIL: een 3 no ko ye mafia london bhena chahta tha ab mene mana kar diya to eene muh par gun taan di
Nikhil ne mana kiya I could understand till this point aur gun kispe tani ?????? girls pe, girls ne Nikhil pe ya phir Munna ne Nikhil pe.
I think I am tired so couldn't connect things and got confused . Will re-read after your reply may be I could better connect things then.

yaa its munna sorry pehli baar story likhi hai isliye
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Posted: 13 years ago
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me too...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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am waiting for your comments
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Soniya g..well a Nik centric story..nice...but some confusions.r.still der..sunny g ne keh diya ..,..lekin koi baat nahi first time hai na.. Good job..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very good first attempt keep it up mate 👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: 42Hercules

Soniya g..well a Nik centric story..nice...but some confusions.r.still der..sunny g ne keh diya ..,..lekin koi baat nahi first time hai na.. Good job..

right👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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GOOD TRY... keep it up...!!!👍🏼
(wesay is NIKHIL is a INSPECTOR or SUB INSPECTOR😕)

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