ArHi FF: Colors of the Wind; Th-1 Prologue - Ch-6B

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the_breeze

@the_breeze

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Posted: 14 years ago

#111

both the prologue and the chapter were BRILLIANTLY written!!! 👏

beautifully described,, a very realistic depiction of both arnav's and khushi's emotions after the tell-all... 👍🏼

i would really appreciate it if you could send me a pm the next time you update! 😳

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Kannvee

@Kannvee

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Posted: 14 years ago

#112

that was brilliant

so intense...their pain are obvious

thankx for the pm

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meera30

@meera30

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Posted: 14 years ago

#113

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--Siva--

@--Siva--

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Posted: 14 years ago

#114

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Really? Me first? Really?😲 Yay! This is called Luck!

Meera.. That was fabulous.. The way you are taking it was sure heart breaking for me.. It is like no flinching words yet the pain and hurt is perfectly conveyed..

The way flashbacks and present has been mixed was very good.. Not really giving much time to dwell in any of the emotions for a long time.. I like this effect..

Starting to say sorry from the parking lot incident is a clever move! Wanted to apologize for something but apologized for something and Kushi understood his move! Perfect..

And she thanked him for her friendship with Lavanya, that should have been a fine attack on his heart!

Ending was sure worth reading! Just one night! Loved it!

Total good dear!

Thanks for the PM!

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

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Posted: 14 years ago

#115

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Oh Meera! That was exquisite and I dont even recall at which exact moment did I have a lump in my throat!

It was poetic, no other words for it.

The imagery, the feelings, the memories, their inner thoughts and turmoils, their outward expression of them...beautiful!

Arnav's helplessness and still a desperation to talk to her lest she disappear forever and Khushi's honesty and her realization that she cant help him...heartbreaking-ly beautiful!

I am just short of words at what brilliance this was. Update soon.

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Ajita Spencer

@sini1234

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Posted: 14 years ago

#116

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It was beautiful Meera .. Just beautiful .👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

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subiscs

@subiscs

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Posted: 14 years ago

#117

just awesomeee!!! penned down really well ya!!!! loved it 😊

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appy

@appy_12

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Posted: 14 years ago

#118

Beautiful, Meera! Truly beautiful.. This is so genuine.. I hope the CVs take something from here.. No am not hoping for your work to get plagiarized! :P

They were better people than him. Lavanya and Khushi. And everyone had been able to see it. Except him.

Those lines! Awesome! You did Lavanya justice.. The CVs can never do this.

Awesome man.. Continue soon.