ISHQ JHAGRA MANZIL (chapter 1-12)

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chetna yogini

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Posted: 14 years ago

#821

Originally posted by: lover_D3
loved it a million times but nokiss scnes thats not good

sorry 4 no kiss

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chetna yogini

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Posted: 14 years ago

#822

Originally posted by: Shweta-kriyansh
hey chetna(dunno whether to call u di or not)...awesome update...swaron becoming frnds...nd plsss show the cranky+concerned rey both equally.cracky-ness redefines his hotness,while his concern speaks for his cuteness.so plsss...vaise aapne kria ko bilkul show jaisa hi rakha hai-assumption maker...kuch bhi sammj leti hai rey k baare mei...da best part was sharon chirping in between"did u try to rape him".i was holding ma stomach after dat...ur ff seriously provided a fresh air which was surely needed to get off the current happenings in da show...kria getting lost in rey for da 1st tym...wow,...nd swayu was too too tooo cute...i had a smile on ma face before,after and while reading it...so plzzz update soon...loads of hugs and claps to u...👍🏼👏🤗

thnx a lot 4 commenting...it encouraged me a lot

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chetna yogini

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Posted: 14 years ago

#823

Originally posted by: misha65
eagerly waittin 4 cranky rey...
loved ur update yaar...😊

thnx

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chetna yogini

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Posted: 14 years ago

#824

Originally posted by: anamika143
yay ur update comes finally...
i ws waiting for it!!!!!
it ws fab
kriyaansh ki valentines eve, bathroom mai was fab

swaron bhi fab, did sharon seriously sleep wid swayu??🤣

thnx

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Hera Flames

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Posted: 14 years ago

#825

chetna di u left me speechless with your update and the bantering was amazing...
i seriously love banters a loads...

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chetna yogini

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Posted: 14 years ago

#826

Originally posted by: aditi061
chetna di u left me speechless with your update and the bantering was amazing...
i seriously love banters a loads...

thnx a lot

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chetna yogini

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Posted: 14 years ago

#827

TEASER

"oh my god swayam u r married!! finaly u r married!!

ur wife is damn beautiful...!!"

"tum!! tum yaha...?? am so happy ki tum yaha ho...

missed u like hell..."

"me too missed u..."

"hey sharon howz u..??."

"so whats up??"

"lets all go 4 party..."

"hey am abhishek!!"

"u r not gonna sign those papers"

"is that abhi??"

"shit!!"

"no i dont wanna marry him"

"but u have to"

"how could u do this to...how could u..??i trusted u blindly n..??"

"listen..."

"no backoff...everything is over..."

" i just care 4 her...i cant live without her..."

"i am sorry..."

"ok am ready 4 marriage..."

THREAD 2

ps: ok peeps sorry instead of an update ,am sending a teaser.. i promise next chapter will be long one..i cant update as this week am busy with my vivas n all ...i'll try to update asap...

Edited by koko_chetna - 13 years ago