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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Netz

nt totally boringg.. t ws a good start...


thnk u... d stry is gnna tk its speed v sun...😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Netz

good going dr... maan's meaningful smile at chuck at calcutta ws really smooth...

historical setting s perfect..
continue soon...


thnk u... i wl try to keep the stry mving 1st😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Netz

good going dr... maan's meaningful smile at chuck at calcutta ws really smooth...

historical setting s perfect..
continue soon...


thnk u... i wl try to keep the stry mving 1st😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
5armad, sheetalvasa, nehavashi, kabslocks, mansi.tripathi, goyalkalpna123, Netz,

THANKS TO ALL OF YOU FOR LIKING THE PREVIOUS PART OF THE STORY...

GONNA UPDATE WITHING A FEW HOURS.. HOPE YOU WILL LIKE THIS PART TOO.. IT WILL BE A ROMANTIC ONE.😉😉

I have replied ur comments on pg 21-22.. srry cud nt replies all of u..😭
Edited by princess_mimi - 13 years ago
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Chapter 2: The First Meeting


Usually Maan is an early riser. The day wasn't exception. As he woke up his eyes traveled at the sky through the window. The sky was very cloudy. The heavy dark cloud was signaling the rain is going to fall very soon. It's very rare to rain in the month of the year Maan thought.

He sat up on the bed chanted a short prayer and left the bed.

"Good morning." As Maan entered the dining room a sweet voice welcomed him.

"Good morning didi." Maan smiled looking at Nayantara. Nayantara was only 16 when she got married. But after a few moths of her wedding her husband died in an accident. Since then she stays with her parents.

"Hmm. I thought you have not changed at all." Nayantara said putting plates on breakfast table. "But you have changed so much."

"Why thoughts like this crossed your mind?" Maan said sitting on a chair.

"you used to woke up early in the morning. But you have become a late riser now." Nayantara declared.

"didi we all know that you wake up before the first bird of the morning. It's only 7.30. Most of the people here are sleeping now." Maan smiled like a wise.

"really? In which country?" Naintara smiled.

As soon as their parents came to the dining table they started their breakfast.

"How is the food? It's your favorite no?" Nayantara said passing jug of juice to Maan. "I made it."

"you can never cook well didi, accept the truth." Maan said even though he was eating like a hungry animal.

"Hmm! Your behavior is reflecting how is my cooking.." Nayantara replied within a second.

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Thing didn't improve in evening. It was still cloudy. Maan became ready to go to the royal palace. A carriage was waiting outside of his house. as soon as he get in the coachman belted the horse to make him run.

When Maan reached the palace Charles and Ayushmaan were already there sitting at the drawing room. Usually they sit at the garden but the chose dinning room for the exceptional weather.

"Maan." Ayushman smiled looking at him. "how are you?"

"I'm fine thanks for asking." Maan said taking a seat.

"How is Nayantara doing?" Ayushman asked again. "she was very dear to me. I never thought something like this would happen to her."

"Nayantara di is doing well." Maan replied with a smile.

"we're really lucky that someone lighted a candle in the dark phase of her life." Ayushman said sighing.

Maan was going to say something but Henry's arrival interrupted them. They sat circling around a tea table. After a few formalities they started their work.

"I hope you know the details about the school?" Henry said clearing his throats.

"Yes sir." Maan replied "we know."

"Good." Ayushman said nodding positively. "We need your help in legal case. And more than that you have to help us to teach them."

"I hope we will succeed in this very soon." Henry spoke. "the Govt. is ready to provide us money for the school but the commoners are yet not ready to go to school.

"with help of you two and Geet and Blair I hope we can fulfill our dream of a school." Ayushman said joyfully.

"sorry for interrupting" Chuck said putting his cup on the table. "I think we should go to the school site just to take a look. It will help us to make an idea about work."

"Oh! Sure young man." Ayshman said and turned to Henry. "you should go with him to the spot. I'm coming with Maan after a few minutes."

As they left Ayushman turned to Maan. "Maan please tell this to Nayantara if she is ready we all are ready. She just need to say yes." Maan gave his a puzzle look. Ayushman smiled "your expression is telling you don't know anything yet. Well I won't tell you anything but she will, just go and ask her."

As soon as Chuck and Henry went inside the carriage the rain started to fall heavily.

"Geet, no don't. You'll get cold."

"Don't act like an old lady Blair. Don't you want to enjoy the first rain of 1857?"

Chuck heard musical tones of two girls. As he took a look outside he found two beautiful girls in the rains. They were looking like made out of marble. Both of them were wearing white gowns of Victorian fashion. [ watch it for an idea of Victorian fashioned gowns]

The Indian girl is Geetanjali and the British girl must be Blair. Chuck looked at her through the glass of the carriage which was hazy cause of the rain. She was the most beautiful being he had ever seen. She was a brunette and her skin was like porcelain, made all the more obvious even so in contrast with the dark hair she had that cascaded down her back. Her eyes'he shook his head. He appreciated all beauty it was true but he never put much else in thought on it. The one thing he did admit was that she was truly beautiful. He kept looking at her as long as the carriage exited the main gate of palace.

Maan was standing at the ground floor corridor with no intention of getting drenched waiting for Ayushman who went to take some important papers. Suddenly two girls totally soaked in rain entered laughing.

"I'll get cold for you." The British girl spoke.

"Don't blame me. You enjoyed a beautiful moment only for me." The Indian girl replied laughing even harder.

"Geet." Unknowingly her name escaped from Maan's mouth. Water was dripping from her body making her more beautiful.. if possible. Her body was like statues of Ajanta like a spell on eyes. She was running her slim fingers through her hair trying to smoothen the entangled hair. She was like a bright sunlight in the dull day' can any living being can be so beautiful, so enigmatic Maan thought. Maan closed his eyes to feel the fragrance of her body.

She ran towards the stairs not looking at him even without noticing him. Her anklet drop on the floor while running. He picked that up. The rain was falling even harder. But now he wanted the dark cloud to rain forever so that he could drain in rain of love.

He lost the track of time. He doesn't know how many seconds, minutes and hours had passed. He came back to sense by voice of Ayushman calling his name.

"Sorry for keep you waiting. It took time to find it." He pointed at the roll of papers he was holding. "shall we go?" As Ayushman said Maan nodded positively and followed him but only after keeping the anklet in his pocket.




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This part "The First meeting "

will be continued in the next chapter also

Edited by princess_mimi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved the update...
Felt bad for NT..loved maan-NT bond..
so geet dint meet maan!!!
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❤️Beautiful update... the scene in the rain and Maan watching Geet is soo beautiful ... it has a fragrance of that era ... n the pic of the horse drawn carriage ... make me feel like that era... n wow u gave a pic of Victorian fashion... I'm soo impressed sis... loved d update... cont soon ❤️

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Posted: 13 years ago

beautiful dear

rain scene was awsome

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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update dr,
rain scene was lovely.

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