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Posted: 13 years ago
Nautanki,
Another awesom part jaan..
Poor geet..
Maan is really working hard haina?
Hope his hardwork does pay..
Ruchi is damn cute-real wali aur reel wali.(ruchs take care of ur health.I wil wait fr u nd ur updatez)
Nishu is feelin guilty.a great sign..
PS-wer r u nishu??mizzin u:(
Oh and ananya is her fav writer!
Thnks fr d links..
PS1-Ananya b prepared!i may b stalkin ur works:))
I wil check IF today ni8..
Updtin Tied By..2morro:)
So cheer up nd btw i replied to ur comment..
Love u:)
Teri kamini:)
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Posted: 13 years ago


geet is shattered to such an extent that these plannings will make her more irritated towards him...

Maan is making efforts but why he thinks that such small things like knowing her favorites and organizing a date like love sick puppy will rectify everything what he had done...

17 yrs of betrayal and longing takes that much big effort...

Nishu says sorry to him but she don't need his gifts because she is very angry and that anger will not subside very easily...

I think all these efforts by him will irritate Geet to such an extent that she will ruthlessly break his heart and he will be shattered and Geet will come to know about his health and tortures he did to himself...

awesome update...

waiting to know what he has planned and Geet's reaction...

thanx for pm...


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mansi.tripathi

AWESOME UPDATE!!
MAAN KO MAANSI BANA DIYA !!
LOL!!
MAGAR PRECAPE KYUN NAHI DIYA???
😃


kya karoon mansi mein who aadat se majboor😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: zaara2212

wow delhi mein snow ho gaya 😃
thanks for the update😊


yep you didn't now😆 well that's at least Ananya told me😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: SallyAmanda

Nautanki, 😲 you called me nautanki.
Another awesom part jaan.. thank you so happy to see your commenting again really missed it.
Poor geet..
Maan is really working hard haina?😆 he is trying his level best
Hope his hardwork does pay.. dehkte hain
Ruchi is damn cute-real wali aur reel wali.(ruchs take care of ur health.I wil wait fr u nd ur updatez)😆
Nishu is feelin guilty.a great sign..
PS-wer r u nishu??mizzin u:(
Oh and ananya is her fav writer!
Thnks fr d links..welcome you should defo read them
PS1-Ananya b prepared!i may b stalkin ur works:))😆 you should to that
I wil check IF today ni8..okay
Updtin Tied By..2morro:) really I love you for that
So cheer up nd btw i replied to ur comment..will check sweets
Love u:) love too meri pyari Sally
Teri kamini:)

😆

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tushti-kiran



geet is shattered to such an extent that these plannings will make her more irritated towards him...

Maan is making efforts but why he thinks that such small things like knowing her favorites and organizing a date like love sick puppy will rectify everything what he had done...

17 yrs of betrayal and longing takes that much big effort...

Nishu says sorry to him but she don't need his gifts because she is very angry and that anger will not subside very easily...

I think all these efforts by him will irritate Geet to such an extent that she will ruthlessly break his heart and he will be shattered and Geet will come to know about his health and tortures he did to himself...

awesome update...

waiting to know what he has planned and Geet's reaction...

thanx for pm...



will update tonight and will be waiting for another great comment from you so stay here
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Posted: 13 years ago
MEL amazing mindblowing update yar dehli main snowfall jaldi hogayai is baar 😲 🤣 🤣
waiting for next update
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Posted: 13 years ago


Part 13
Geet arrived at the address Ruchi had given her she was looked around she could not believe her eyes.


Maan sat there with a guitar in his hand. He stood up. he walked up to her. he started playing and singing for her.
You were like a shining star'
Spreading your warmth from far'.

Your smile's worth a million'
Good heart worth a trillion'

I killed your beautiful soul'
Made you a lifeless doll'.

Filled your life with sorrow'
Dreading the word 'Tomorrow''

Just give me one chance'
To your tunes I will dance'

Let me make it better'
An ideal husband & father..

Pleading your forgiveness..
Please oh my tigress'

Take away my everything'
For you I am living'

Oh please come back to me'.
From my guilt, make me free'.

Please oh please come back to me'
Please oh please come back to me!!! (written by Ruchi thank you Ruchs)

At the end of the song he went on his knees and spread his arms, hoping she would run right into them. Geet was completely shocked she needed some time to come out of the shock. Ruchi lied to her. So maan must have told her that he planned some suprise for her mom. There was no girl. Maan's voice brought her back to reality.

M:Geet please come back to me forgive your Maan.
G:Do you think it's easy for me to come back to you Maan.
M:Just one more change geet I promise I won't mess up this time please I need you Geet
G:But do you think I can love you again, when all you have done is degraded my soul again and again.Once you made me feel. I am the most important person of your life and the next moment you made me looth myself, to make the mistake to ever love you. it's easy to forget maan but hard to forgive. These scars you gave me, are there to stay forever till my last breath. My love was limitless and that's the reason but the pain you gave me is 10000 times worse and never healing. (written by angeldream, thx girl)

Maan felt tears make his way out of his eyes. It was horrible to know how much he had hurted his pure angel, whom loved him so much.

M:Geet I know I hurted you so much and my sins are not forgiveble. But please I will do anything you say I will go through any punishment please one change. Please geet I can't live without you anymore just one change is all I am asking Geet please I beg off you. Maan Singh Khurana is begging you to give him one change to live and breath again.

Geet had it she couldn't take is anymore. She hated this weird feeling inside her why was she having the urge to wipe his tears away why. It was making her more furious. Enough was enough. She walked over to maan and grabbed the gitare out of Maan's hand.

G:Looks like you won't understand what I have to say or how I feel maybe I should tell it in your way.

Geet started playing the gitar and sung the next hurtfull words:
Dil-o-jaan se pyaar kiya tha aapko
Man se apna ya tha aapke pyaar ko
Socha tha Pariyon ke jaahan ke Raja ho aap
Laga tha Phoolon ke raaste pe chal rahi hun
Kya pata tha mujhe ki ye phool nahin kaante the
ki ye pariyon ka jaahan nahin rakshash ka ghar
ki main apna astitva kho doon
Pata nahin tha mujhe ki maine jiska haath hai thaama
Jisko apna Zindagi maana
Woh kabhi mera tha hi nahi
Andaaza nahin tha mujhe ki uss raste main chalte yeh Geet kahin kho jaayegi!!
Itne Zakhm de chuka hai Zindagi ke abb... (written by Ananya, thx girlfriend)

Maan's eyes got bigger in shock. Her words hurted her so much. Geet stopped singing ans started yelling.

Geet Geet Handa hi na rahi!
Woh toh kahin samay ke bhanwar main kho gayi!!
Itne dukh diye hain aapne
Ki Geet Khurana abb Zinda hi nahi rahi!
Reh gayi hai toh Sirf Geet Singhania
Ek Maa jo apne bachiyan Nisha aur Ruchi ke aage
Na kuch dekhegi na hi kuch sunegi!
Chahe kitna bhi koshish karlo aap
Na hi Zinda kar paoge aap apni patni Geet Khurana ko
Aur na hi Dhoondh paaoge Geet Handa ko!
Kyunki Woh insaan jo mera kusoorwar hai woh aur koi nahi aap ho, jinhe main kabhi apna sab kuch apna Pati maana karti thi..
(Also written by Ananya)

Maan grabbed a glas where thight in his hand to let the pain in his heart go away.Geet threw the gitar on the sand and continuted.

Maan Singh Khurana!
Chale jaaiye mere duniya, mere bachiyon ki zindagi se
Kyunki Yeh toh kabhi aapki thi hi nahin
Yeh toh sirf aapke liye zariya tha
Badla lene ka
Poora ho chuka hai woh
Nahin chahiye aapki humdardi
Kyunki Geet abb Geet nahin rahi
Na RUCHI aur NISHA aapki betiyan!
Mar chuka hai woh har ek dor har ek ehsaas jo humein aapse bandhaa karta tha
Yehi thi meri Zindagi ki Kahani
Meri Takdeer ka faisla
Yehi hai Har Ek Dirty Revenge Ki Asliyat!
Zindagi ko tabah kar dene wali hakikat!! (Thanks Ananya love ya)

Maan broke the glass with his hand blood oozed out of his hands. Geet s eyes fell on his hand. Maan looked at her he tried to hide it thinking she would get hurt. But when he saw her looking at his hand with a cold expression, he couldn't believe it. Geet looked up at Maan's face.

G:I hate you maan get out of my life leave me alone.

She turned around and left. She heard maan muttering she doesn't love me anymore. Maan feel on the ground.

M:She doesn't love me she is right I killed Geet Khurana. She is not my geet. My geet can't be that cold.

Maan kept sobbing and hurting himself thinking nobody cared. Then he closed his eyes and saw Ruchi's face infront of him. No he had to be strong for his daughter.
Maan cleaned his wound as always and headed home.

Ruchi was sitting on her bed and smilling. Nishu gave her a weird look.

N: Why are you smiling like that
R:Just thinking about mom and dad they must be ahving a fab time
N;Matlab

Ruchi told her everything.

N:What mom went to meet that
R:Yeah sweet na

Nishu wanted to reply but Geet enterd looking horrible. Ruchi and Nishu stood up.

G:Girls I am leaving behave yourself and listen to Renna aunty. (Renna is the girls maid since their childhood)
R:Yes mom but are you okay your sounding so low didn't you like dad's suprise
G:I loved it I am just tired Ruchi bye girls

She hugged them both and left.When Geet left Nishu turned to Ruchi seeing mom like that hurted her so much, that she wasn't thinking.

N:What have you done. look how upset mom is because of you. Why did you send her to Maan huh
R:Nishu first of all don't call him maan but dad and secondlly mom said she is tired how can dad's suprise upset mom.
N:First of all I will never call him dad and seconf of all you now what he did.

Nishu told Ruchi the whole truth. Ruchi was in tears.

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Edited by mel420 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Reserved;)
Edit!

Ewww...I am first [:D/]
NO!!
I am feeling bad for both of them 😭
Maan is broken beyond repair and so is Geet 😭
OMFG!!
😲
Nishu told ruchi the truth 😲
Bad bad nishu 😡

Well i wrote sumthing..
Just a request:

A smile of yours,
Had me dreaming,
A life full of promises,
That would be fulfilled..

Your one touch
That would always send chills
Down my spine
And make my heart twitter..

Long forgotten are those memories
You and me-Happily together!
Now all I see in front of me
Is a mirage that would dissappear any moment..

If i had to wish ever,
I would ask for only one thing,
To be back in your arms and
Never let you leave me..!
Edited by SallyAmanda - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
very emotional update mel beautifully written👏👏
Edited by sona-rai - 13 years ago

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