A New Beginning....t-r ficpart 4(pg 5)

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hi guys im back!!! after a long time...with another fic!!! hope u dont get bored of reading my ficsšŸ˜†

neways this ones a bit diff....its kinda a family story also so ....maybe u wont like it.

and i cant cont regularly also anyways so if its not very good kindly tell now itself ok?😳

ok here goes....

A NEW BEGINNING

It was the first day of college…..tia ahuja lunged her bags through the corridor into her room.she pushed back the door with her legs and leaned back against it.

'whew!!! Maine to isme sirf kapde dale the!!! Itna heavy ho gaya hai!!! Uff!!!'

aur yeh dono abhi tak nahi aaye!!! akele hi canteen jaana hoga..'

she sighed and went outside again.

She felt happy to be back in college again.it was her second year and there would be a lot of interesting things to do.she was looking forward to it!

She smiled to herself and walked airily towards the canteen.

She sat down at a table,alone…smiling in short intervals at the people she knew.

Anvesha was sitting at the table right next to her,with a new girl.

Ashi pointed her finger towards tia and said something….both of them laughed.

Tia just looked away and settled her gaze instead on the boy who was serving them.he was talking to ashis friend…the girl in glasses.

tia looked away….then glanced at him again,involuntarrily.

He was cute…actually…damn cute….his smile was killer…as he laughingly said something to the girl he was serving. Tias heart did a weird flip flop and she turned away.

She slowly turned her eyes back to him.he was still talking to the glasses.she pursed her lips.

tia:Hello!!! Yaha dusre log bhi baithe hai.unhe bhi serve karna hai ya apne glasses ke saath hi baithna hai!!!

The three felt silent. Glasses looked curiously at her.she was an extremely good looking girl….sharp…even with the glasses tia could see her eyes twinkling.

Ranveer stared at the girl who had spoken.he had noticed her as soon as she had come into the canteen….and had been trying hard not to stare at her. Anvesha and her friend…ananya…had provided him a much needed distraction.

He walked to the counter and got the coffee she had ordered, then slowly walked towards tia.he smiled.

ranveer:Hi. I am ranveer.ranveer sissodiya.im sorry humne apko intezar karvaya…but as you see…hum thode busy the…im really sorry?

Tia warmed to his smile.

Tia:its ok.waise ive never seen you before.1st year ho kya?

Ranveer:nahi.2nd year.hum pehle B wing mein the...phir enterpreneurship devolopment mein major karna chahte the aur woh combination nahi tha so...i shifted here.hum pehle se hi maurya mein hi the..

Tia:oh!! Ok.

Ranveer smiled at her again.she was even more prettier upfront than when he had seen her the first time…and nice too…he liked her voice.

Tia:so tum kya kar rahe ho?

Ranveer:manegement.

Tia:kya?? Par tia bhi toh wahi kar rahi hai!!!par combination mein yoga liya hai.

Ranveer:really!!! Toh phir hum dono ek hi class mein honge!!! Phir …aap humari madat kar sakti hai na?kyunkiki hum yaha pe kisi ko nahi jaanthe.

Tia:oh sure!!! Tia wold love to.par right now tia apne friends ki wait kar rahi hai.tum residential student ho right?

Ranveer:ji…par…aone apna naam nahi bataya?

Tia:oh ya. Mera naam tia hai.tia ahuja.

Ranveer:thinking to himself.(totally approproate name.suit karta hai aapko…tia!!)

Tia:umm...actually tia ko ab jaakar dekhna hai ki uske friends aaye hai ki nahi.tia tumhe class mein milegi.ok?

Ranveer felt dissapointed.he wanted to talk to her…know more about her…

Tia gave him a sunny smile and left.

She could feel ranveers eyes on her as she left the room.but didn't notice another pair of eyes looking at her.ananya saw her out of the room ,a slight smile on her face.

how was it?????😳

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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee šŸ‘
pls cont soon.
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awsome jusst mindblowing
and welcome back
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wow vinitha too gd..i luved this part..and plzzz cont soon..
actually i luv reading all ur fics..
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really nice Vinita šŸ‘

continue soon 😳

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thanks everyone....and disha i cant cont now cause ive written only the next part and if i cont then i wont have anything for some more time cause i dont have time ti write the other next parts everytime...that is regularly so im sorry but ikl try to post soon.
was it confusing? šŸ˜•
Edited by vitak - 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: vitak

thanks everyone....and disha i cant cont now cause ive written only the next part and if i cont then i wont have anything for some more time cause i dont have time ti write the other next parts everytime...that is regularly so im sorry but ikl try to post soon.
was it confusing? šŸ˜•

it was a little bit...confusing.šŸ˜†

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