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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesome part
If you have written the next part the puhleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeezzzz zzzzzzzzzzzz post it soon

BTW only one thing was confusing------Tia went to Ranny and said that there are other people waiting ---that means she must have thought that he is a waiter.
Then while he was serving her ---why did she ask him whether he is in 1st year????????????
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Posted: 19 years ago
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[QUOTE=vitak]

Hi guys im back!!! after a long time...with another fic!!! hope u dont get bored of reading my fics😆

neways this ones a bit diff....its kinda a family story also so ....maybe u wont like it.

and i cant cont regularly also anyways so if its not very good kindly tell now itself ok?😳

ok here goes....

A NEW BEGINNING

It was the first day of college…..tia ahuja lunged her bags through the corridor into her room.she pushed back the door with her legs and leaned back against it.

'whew!!! Maine to isme sirf kapde dale the!!! Itna heavy ho gaya hai!!! Uff!!!'

aur yeh dono abhi tak nahi aaye!!! akele hi canteen jaana hoga..'

she sighed and went outside again.

She felt happy to be back in college again.it was her second year and there would be a lot of interesting things to do.she was looking forward to it!

She smiled to herself and walked airily towards the canteen.

She sat down at a table,alone…smiling in short intervals at the people she knew.

Anvesha was sitting at the table right next to her,with a new girl.

Ashi pointed her finger towards tia and said something….both of them laughed.

Tia just looked away and settled her gaze instead on the boy who was serving them.he was talking to ashis friend…the girl in glasses.

tia looked away….then glanced at him again,involuntarrily.

He was cute…actually…damn cute….his smile was killer…as he laughingly said something to the girl he was serving. Tias heart did a weird flip flop and she turned away.

She slowly turned her eyes back to him.he was still talking to the glasses.she pursed her lips.

tia:Hello!!! Yaha dusre log bhi baithe hai.unhe bhi serve karna hai ya apne glasses ke saath hi baithna hai!!!

The three felt silent. Glasses looked curiously at her.she was an extremely good looking girl….sharp…even with the glasses tia could see her eyes twinkling.

Ranveer stared at the girl who had spoken.he had noticed her as soon as she had come into the canteen….and had been trying hard not to stare at her. Anvesha and her friend…ananya…had provided him a much needed distraction.

He walked to the counter and got the coffee she had ordered, then slowly walked towards tia.he smiled.

ranveer:Hi. I am ranveer.ranveer sissodiya.im sorry humne apko intezar karvaya…but as you see…hum thode busy the…im really sorry?

Tia warmed to his smile.

Tia:its ok.waise ive never seen you before.1st year ho kya?

Ranveer:nahi.2nd year.hum pehle B wing mein the...phir enterpreneurship devolopment mein major karna chahte the aur woh combination nahi tha so...i shifted here.hum pehle se hi maurya mein hi the..

Tia:oh!! Ok.

Ranveer smiled at her again.she was even more prettier upfront than when he had seen her the first time…and nice too…he liked her voice.

Tia:so tum kya kar rahe ho?

Ranveer:manegement.

Tia:kya?? Par tia bhi toh wahi kar rahi hai!!!par combination mein yoga liya hai.

Ranveer:really!!! Toh phir hum dono ek hi class mein honge!!! Phir …aap humari madat kar sakti hai na?kyunkiki hum yaha pe kisi ko nahi jaanthe.

Tia:oh sure!!! Tia wold love to.par right now tia apne friends ki wait kar rahi hai.tum residential student ho right?

Ranveer:ji…par…aone apna naam nahi bataya?

Tia:oh ya. Mera naam tia hai.tia ahuja.

Ranveer:thinking to himself.(totally approproate name.suit karta hai aapko…tia!!)

Tia:umm...actually tia ko ab jaakar dekhna hai ki uske friends aaye hai ki nahi.tia tumhe class mein milegi.ok?

Ranveer felt dissapointed.he wanted to talk to her…know more about her…

Tia gave him a sunny smile and left.

She could feel ranveers eyes on her as she left the room.but didn't notice another pair of eyes looking at her.ananya saw her out of the room ,a slight smile on her face.

how was it?????😳

[/QUOTE]Hi, read it this is very good but what is this? I mean r u creating a new story frm your mind or the new season will start like this?? I don't understand.Plzzzzzzzzzzz tell me!!😭 I am very confuse.😕
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey vidya,vini wrote a fanfic,its her story,she created 4m her mind,its not releted with remix.iis fotum main aise bahut sweet stories hai abt the 4some,so enjoy reading them.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#14

So the most important thing about communication is your body language.your face,the way you sit,look at the person who is speaking,your posture is all…..


Tia stiffled a yawn as she tried to look straight at the lecturer.pri was already sleeping.
She looked at ranveer the exact moment he looked at her.both of them stifled their laughter.


Ranveer imitated the lecturer as he sat back straight and scribbled something in his notebook.tia looked down at her note,trying to control her smile.

MAY I KNOW WHAT IS GOING ON HERE?

Prof. Desai came up to where tia was sitting.
Tia hurridly closed the book where she had been doodling.


Tia:not..nothing…sir!!!
Pri jerked awake.
Prof desai turned to where ranveer was sitting.


Prof. Desai:Mujhe lagta hai tum dono abhi class ke mood mein nahi ho.toh theek hai.tumhe class attend karne ki bhi koi zaroorat nahi hai.both of you leave my class immediately.OUT!!!

Tia(scared now):sir…
Prof:please leave miss ahuja I DON'T HAVE TIME TO WASTE.


Tia and ranveer picked up their books and walked out of the class slowly.


Tia:oh god!!! First week mein hi mera attendance gaya!!! Awesome!!!
Ranveer: right.awesome. ab hum atleast theek se baat kar sakte hai.apke naam ke alawa hum aur kuch nahi jaanthe hai apke baare main.


Tia leaned back against the wall outside the class.
Tia:hmm…so kya jaana chahte ho tum?
Ranveer:anything.apke parents kya karte hai?
Tia:papa ka business hai.cloth export karte hai.aur…tia ki ma nahi hai.


Ranveer looked shocked.


Ranveer:o..i..im sorry…I …
Tia(giving him a bland smile):nahi..actually you don't have to be sorry.unke gaye toh 19 saal ho gaye hai.tia ko toh who yaad bhi nahi hai.tia unke baare mein zyada sochti nahi hai.
Ranveer looked at her.something was wrong somewhere.
Ranveer:umm…tia…hum aapse ek baat puche?
Tia:ha.kaho na ranveer.
Ranveer:who…us…article review ke liye…humare paas koi partner nahi hai…aur…hum kisi klo jaanthe nahi hai yaha pe…so…
Tia:(quickly):but tia hai na!!! Tia bhi toh tumhari friend hai.il be with you.
Ranveer(feeling something flying in his heart):you will? Oh…thanks…thanks a lot tia.
Tia:no probs.tia toh isse acha kuch imagine bhi nahi kar sakti.


Tia smiled at him, feeling very nice.she didn't KNOW why she was feeling this but….she liked being with ranveer….


Pehla nasha ….pehla khumar….naya pyar hai…naya intezar….
She hummed softly.
Ranveer looked at her and sang with her…in a low voice….
Karlu main kya apna haal…aye dil bekarar….


They looked at each other …and smiled, something bright encompassing their world.

Edited by vitak - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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WOW VINITHA..IT WAS SUPERB..MIND BLOWING,AWESUM..AND THANX A LOT FOR CONT WITH UR FIC..
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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VOW!! THAT WAS AMAZING.... PLZ CONT. ASAP... 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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vinitha where are u..plzzz cont soon.

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