A New Beginning....t-r ficpart 4(pg 5)

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ritwika

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Posted: 19 years ago

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awsoem just loved it plzzzzzzz cont it fast

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sayantika

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Posted: 19 years ago

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viniiiiiiiiiiiiiiii,tu kahhan gayab ho gayee hai??pls,pls post asap.we all r waiting.pls post fastttttttttttt.

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Rimli

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vinita where r u darling?plsssssssssssssssssssssssssss cont soon.

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kiran

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Posted: 19 years ago

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vinitha ur fic toooooooo good. cont soon.

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ritwika

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sagarika ghosh

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Posted: 19 years ago

#27

vinitha where r u?

did u forget ur fic?

no no i'll die

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vitak

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Posted: 19 years ago

#28

sorry for the delay il try to cont regualrly now 😳 hope you like this part....

Tia:Ranveer!!! Tum yeh kaise likh sakte ho!!! I mean…its wrong!!
Ranveer:Nahi tia.dekhiye..budget is just one area.aur isme likha hai ki companies ko tight budget mwin work karna hoga that it is the only criteri..
Tia raised her voice to overrule him.
Tia:par hume sirf reiew karna hai apne views nahi…
Ranveer:hume improvement ke areas dikhane hai!! Phir article aur humare review mein kya difference hoga?
Tia:par…
Ranveer:NAHI tia.
Both of them just looked at each other.
Tia swallowed and said in a small voice.
Theek hai.who bhi likh lete hai.

Ranveer tum ek idiot ho!!! Aise hi upset kar rahe ho unhe!!

Ranveer kept down his pen and leaned towards her.
Ran:tia…im sorry..hume chillana nahi chahiye tha…im sorry?
Tia (giving him a aweet smile):no..ranveer…upset hone wali kaunsi baat hai?tia toh bas…aise hi…aur waise bhi is sab ke bare main tum tia se zyada janoge rite?tia ko toh is sab mein interest hi nahi hai.
Ranveer pulled his chair closer.
Ran:agar aapko yeh subject nahi lena tha toh kyun liya?
Tia:papa ke kehne par..papa wanted ki…main yeh karu aur…tia unke khilaf nahi jaana chahti thi toh…isliye..
Ranveer:oh…
They were quiet for sometime.

Ranveer felt a pat on his back.
Ananya!!! Hi!! Humne aapko aaj dekha hi nahi.
Ananya smiled and plonked down beside him.
Ananya:haan!! And you know what??maine bhi tumhe aaj pura din nahi dekha!!!
Tia rolled her eyes at this.
Ranveer (laughing)who ek joke tha??? Ananya???
Ananya:haan.dekho tum khud has rahe ho aur puch rahe ho funny tha ki nahi.dumb ranveer.
She flipped back her hair in an easy gesture that quite facinated ranveer.

Ananya:you know,college here is so boring!! I mean…mere bangalore college strict tha par..itna bhi nahi.i mean…we bloody had freedom yaar!! yaha pe toh ek din bunk bhi nahi kar sakte.EK DIN …EK DIN main nahi aayi aur itne saare formalities!!! Godd!!!
Tia:(in a cool voice):maurya itna bura bhi nahi hai.shuru mein tumhe aisa lagega..par it's a great place to be.
Ananya:(casually,without looking at tia):yeah!maybe!!
Then she turned to ranveer.
Ananya:umm ok ranveer I have to go.ghar pe wait kar rahe honge.bye.aur haan…kal ccd jaana hai don't forget ok?ashi ne kaha hai kuch manage kar legi.
Ranveer:ha baba hum aajayenge.pucca.
Ananya:oks then.bye.she smiled sunnily at him and left.without a word to tia.
Ranveer looked at her receding figure,smiling.

Tia looked at ranveer sideways.
Tia:toh…kal…kaha ja rahe ho tum?
Ranveer:o ha.humne aapkko bataya nahi na?hum sab kal bowling ja rahe hai…ccd ke pass.aap ayenge?
Tia:(coolly)nahi.tum apne friends ke saath jao.waise bhi tia ko aur hi bahut kaam hai.aur yeh asignment bhi tia finish kar degi.

She hurridly picked up all the books.il see you in class tomorrow…she stopped…unless,of course tum log kal class hi nahi aa rahe ho?

Ranveer(puzzled at this sudden change):nahi…hum classes ke baad ja rahe hai.par…apko kya hua?any problem?
Tia:(getting up )nahi na.koi problem nahi.im fine see you tomorrow.
She walked away fast,before ranveer could say anything further.

Inhe kya ho gaya!!!

Edited by vitak - 19 years ago