~~Betrayed * The End Of Love*~~

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Nimra

@Dazzling_Smile

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

Heya Guyz...

i knw i have already my FF Where's My Destiny in progress but i want to make a new one too cuz this idea comes in my mind again and again ...

now coming to the story...

It revolves around...

* Friendship the start of love

* Hatred the part of love

* Love the reason of life

* Betrayed the End of life

Ok guyz... now coming to the concept.

Concept

kriya had moved to dehradun but the hurdles of life make her life lyk hell

kriya and her mom has a great fight and after that kriya left her mom , her house and moved to mumbai... she was very happy cuz she was abt meet her love of life and her friends but after seeing something * thats suspense* she was broken... the pieces of her heart were shattered... she tried to commit suicide but always her friends save her * not weaklings they are new characters *... then she moved up in life... she makes her own new group after getting BTRAYED by her friends...her group was the best group of dehradun even of many other cities...now they moved to New York and after 2 years spending there , they were invited to mumbai by St. Louse Principal.. now the story starts here...

If u want to know more...

stay tuned

Now guyz tell me how was it??

do u guyz want me to continue???

If anyone wants PM , add me in ur buddy list

waiting for ur precious comments ..

and one thing more.. i am having my exams in the way so no bashing on updates ..

-Nimra

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Edited by Dazzling_Smile - 14 years ago

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Asha

@Zehnaseeb.

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

do u need to ask that... obviously u should continue... n loved to see that u r not one of those people who stopped writing... but u started writing more... love u for that...

the concept is amazing.. n wanna see what happens..

BTW.. i love the title '~~Betrayed * The End Of Love*~~'

n nothing to say about the pm thing... i have in my buddy list n i want pms..

thnx for the pm...*hugs*

Edited by Asha_ArSha - 14 years ago

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vaishali

@Vaish24

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

intersting..

lekin plzzz

isse sad-2 mat banana happy rkhna..
i know title aisa hai but then also.. hope u understand

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tina

@Sassybitch

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

omg nice concept do pm me and update the 1st part soon😛

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Yogini

@yogini64

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

Arre, jaldi se start it... 😉
Anythng related to kriyaansh is most welcome 😊

this story is gonna be super exciting . . . .

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Deetha.

@Deetha.

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

obviously and plzz pm me...i loved the concept to core...

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star_2012

@star_2012

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

hey i love the concep very much...

please update after ypur exames...

and all the best with your exams👍🏼

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Amina

@KreyaArshiLover

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

Nice story nimmi waiting for the update

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Puja

@puja_arsha

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

Nyc cncept...waitng fr frst part ...:)
N ders a request dear...mayb i wont b able 2 read n comment on further updates coz i hav entrance tests whole april...bt wenevr i'll gt tym i will definitely read n comment...so plz cntinue sending me pms...hope u understand...:)