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Posted: 13 years ago
hey i luvd ur work...plz pm me 4 nxt updates nd i'll surly rply 4 them after 16 as i m having exams 4rm 3rd...
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Chapter 4


Ridzi and Sasha: lets go and check.. they ran towards the door waiting impatiently for her friend kat. uff she was too lovable by everyone.. all were addicted to her, to her shouting, to her adorable smile which make them relax, to her quarrel which remains just for 2 seconds, to her shouts like a mummy and they being a good child remains shut...to obey her so called mamaa..

But both sadely returned back..

K: what happened????

Sa: a.. actually they is no space left for us L that's why we returned.. she said innocently while both boys start laughing like maniacs ...

Ar: u...uh...u both are sad on this??? Oh...hahahahaha...

K: dude.. hehehehe look at them... they look sho innoshent ... she said laughing and making a puppy face...

Just then rdx came running..

Rdx: guyz.. have u all seen the preparations??? I mean all are done na??? the black carpet and where are who, who r receiving the guests???

Sh: sir, ehm..hmmm there is no one ..

Rdx :WHAT??? NO ONE??? WHAT U MEAN SHARON CANT..

K: wiat a min sir.. u don't knw but she didn't like strangers I mean she prefer friends more than strangers and our hunter.. he can adgust with anyone so there is no need of it.. its better u go there and please take these two babies with you...


She said pointing towards sasha and ridzi who were just standing there making weird faces...


Rdx : hmmm Its k and Sharon I m very angry at you..well I think u guyz should come with us..

Sw: k sir...

They headed towards the gate where they see no sign of kat and hunter...

Sasha and ridzi looked around and see literally everyone drooling over them...

Ridzi : u knw wat sasha??? Look around.. almost ever guyz is drooling over us .. woahhh what will happen if

Both : THEY SEE KAT ???? and then both burst out laughing..

All lousians just stared at them and thinked..

Re: I don't knw who is this kat but she sounds familiar..

Ta: with hell to these girls and that kat.. well why is this bluddy moron here??? And if he tells anyone about me??? No ways.. what will rey react to this???

Sw: ufff this much'...

Sh: arghhh this kat is such a SH**

Vic : I thinks I knw her , somehow... Heheheheh yup I will know her somehow as she sounds too HAWT .. wait.. what about my deewani??? nhiii

Ne: neha feeling strange.. one more girl... age se ye naked half larkiayn kam thi k in ki sardarni a rahi he ...

Bh: abhey is larki ne dimaag ka dahi bana diya he ... kab ayegi ye aeri????

Vish: arghhh how can these bimbo's can be half naked ?? And ye kat ehm ehm WTH man !!!

And vise versa..

Then they see a bike coming towards the gate ...


With a girl and boy on it' they can only see their bodies '. Nt their faces as they were turning towards left' hunter parked the bike and



Hunter's Dress


Kat's Dress


kriya was about to get off from the bike when she losts her balance and straight falls on hunter' they were both on the bike with kat on the top of hunter' he has a mischievous smile crept on his face as he was holding her by her waist ' she quickly sees it and made herself straight'

They were literally drooling'not only boys but girls too'. Some were burning with jealous and some adoring hunter and blah blah '. They just stood statue at that moment as they didn't know what to react on'

The gang was watching every move of them'

but unfortunately they couldn't see their face as their hats covers their faces above the lips' * I mean they placed their hats like that'*

Just then he asked her for a dance and she playfully slapped his hand and turned towards the entrance but stopped as she sees everyone hooting for her dance and she throw her cap on her friends and start dancing'.

Guyz just watch 0:17 to 0:42

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bFroFvngP6A&feature=related

Just play blow by kesha ..

Dirt and glitter
Cover the floor
We're pretty and sick
We're young and we're bored (Ha)

She turned towards rdx and held his hand and did some salsa steps..



It's time to lose your mind
And let the crazy out
(This place about to)
Tonight we're taking names
'Cause we don't mess around

Then she moved towards vishaka and did some hip hop and she held her arm as to jump her in' vishaka too enjoyed doing hip hop with her' she was full on dancing and making everyone crazy' she was in full mood now..





This place about to blow
Blow
This place about to blow
Blow
This place about to blow
Blow
This place about to blow
Blow
This place about to

(Blow)

She moved back and spreads her hands and did some hip hop still hands stretching there'

Go, go, go, go insane
Go insane
Throw some glitter
Make it rain on him
Let me see them Hanes
Let me, let me see them Hanes

She moved towards swayam and vicky did some hip hop'




Go insane
Go insane
Throw some glitter
Make it rain on him
Let me see them Hanes
Let me, let me see them Hanes (C'mon)

We are taking, over (Blow)
Get used to it, over (Blow)

She went near rey, held him by his shoulders and pushed him and again pulled him closer to her by his collars but was succeed in hiding her face under her hairs'

This place about to blow
Blow
This place about to blow
Blow (Oh)
This place about to blow (Oh)
Blow
This place about to blow
Blow

she then leaved him and moved towards staircase.. *the staircase outside the college* and turns her face towards them and falls back intentionally as it was her one move and there hunter catches her and throw her in air and again catches her and then settled down her on the floor.

They again tried to see her but failed as her long curly brown hair fully covered her face..

They saw her dance' they were like OMG awsmmm'

Vish : awssmmm man'

Ta: what awsm huh???

Nil : she is pretty HAWTTT !!!

Vic : actually not pretty but too much HAWTT!!

Sw: but I think more she is way too WILD !!!

At his comment everyone was just like' SWAYAM COMMENTED A GIRL????

Sw: y cant I comment her???? Well m not more than puppy dog '

He said with a disgusting look '

After her dance there was all shinning something falling on her and them two muscular arms covered her by her waist' she wasn't shocked at all as hunter always did that.. and now it was their dance ' he held her hand in his and starts dancing'

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jjf4hHWK3nM&feature=related


After their dance he too throws his cap somewhere he didn't know'and that was the moment the gang saw HIM'.

Their friends after their performance ran to them and pulled them in a BIG CRUSHING HUG'. Killer hugs her too tightly that she fell down with him upon her'. That was when they all saw her face'.

ALL : W*F!!!

Edited by Dazzling_Smile - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Yay... First one to comment
That was awsume.. Loved it.
Bt cant see kat's dress!
Update the next part soon
Edited by star94 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
it was awesome yaar ❤️ really i don't have words to explain it how i felt when i read the update
yaar i know you will say that i m mad 😆 but when u gonna update next i really can't wait .😳
please update soon 😉

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Posted: 13 years ago

res

unres...

loved it Nimmi...

waiting for their reaction...

Edited by Asha_ArSha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Awesum nams..


Waiting for their reaction wen they see Kat.

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Posted: 13 years ago
superb update as always .
next time no cliffhanger
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wowww...!!!kya solid entry kari hai kriya ne...d dance ws aewsome...waitng fr nxt part...:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update...
Waiting 4 the gangs reaction after seeing kriya oopsss means kat... 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nimmi dat was just mind blowing dude!!!!
amazing luved kriya's new avtar
n i could clearly imagine her dancing
at last dey could see her face...eagerly waiting for the next update

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