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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: aditi061

awww that's cute... i loved the friendship element... that smile works on everyone... plzzz update the nxt part soon...

thx ... and bat friendship element...
i have world's best friends so i think i can write good abt it...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: snigdha_arsha

Hunter n Kriya!!!

Loved deir friendship..
Beautiful update..

hayeee itna shota sa comment...
i didnt expect this from u...
anways thx sissy :)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: unnipgc

the update was just outstanding,but it was very short.update soon...😃

thxx.. and sorry for short thingy...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sorry Sorry Sorry Sorry Sorry ...
I know bahut jyada late hun ...
Aur joh aagey kehne jaa rahi hun, uske liye toh pakka pitungi.

But, abhi Res.

Bilkul bhi time nahi hai re ...
But once, I get free, I'll comment.

***Unres***
Sissy, I'm loving the way your story is picking up pace. I'm falling in love with this FF with every passing day. I don't know how to say everything in words! There are no words to describe this masterpiece of yours. Don't get me wrong - but I wait for your update on this one more than Where's my Destiny. Not that I don't like it, but I like this more.

You are an awesome writer. And I'm glad I get to read this piece of yours. And believe me start posting this on Fb too. I assure you a good and even better response.

Firstly, the story-line you have chosen is out of the world. I'm happy to see the same thing (Kria leaving) in a whole different way. A very creative FF, I must say.

I must say, I'm liking your picture concept. They makes it easy for us to understand things. You know sometimes, things become complicated. But here they do not.

Congos dear for making your way upto my Faves list. ( Bol toh aise rahi hun jaise kitni important hun main aur meri list! )


I know I know, abhi sissy tum yeh soch rahi hogi ki yeh kya comment kiya hai isne! Correct? Don't worry, it's just what I think of the overall story. I'm sure jaise yeh waala comment tujhe finally (mind you - finally) mil hi gaya, woh sab bhi mil hi jaayeinge. It's just that thoda time lagega. Abhi ke liye I hope tu iss comment se samajh jaaye ki how much I love reading your FF and what a great writer you are.

Love you Sissy! Keep writing like this. Always keep waiting for my comments. I promise, chahe late hoin (comments) but they will be worth the wait! :)
Lots of Love,
Aditi.

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  2. Chapter 1 - I'll give that soon. 😳
Edited by Angelic_Aditi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Angelic_Aditi

Sorry Sorry Sorry Sorry Sorry ...

I know bahut jyada late hun ...
Aur joh aagey kehne jaa rahi hun, uske liye toh pakka pitungi.

But, abhi Res. 😳

Bilkul bhi time nahi hai re ...
But once, I get free, I'll comment. 😳

aditi tum mujh se pitogi...
sach me i wanna punch u...
but dont worry i cant punch u throw pc or mob... ;)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Love ur ff very much... Waiting for the next part.. Jaldi update kro
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Posted: 13 years ago
Good job waiting for the next update
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Posted: 13 years ago

Chapter 2..

A normal as always rises in St.loius but this day was somehow different...

A feel of someone returning to their lives were starting to rise..

A sweet, husky voice of a boy started the conversation.

Sw: y I think this day is somehow too different then other days???? Am I the only one or u guyz are feeling the same??

Someone replied..

Rey: I m feeling the same... I m feeling somehow really excited but I don't know of what...

What??? He thought..

Taani: rey its just an ordinary day... that's it..

It was just taani who seems least interested in this unknown big day but everyone was having different yet same feelings...

Soon a tall and handsome, cute that all girls drools over him yet he was already married .. hmmm but he was just too loving .. simple yet awesome... wearing a black shirt and black pant...such a gentle man..




Rdx : heya guyz...

All : SIR U???

Rdx : woahhh ya its me.. what happened???

Neha: sir neha thinking that quit had u but now??? Here u are???

Rdx: yup... m back and that too with my lovely wife..

At that time a beautiful, cute yet bold girl appears in front of them.. she was wearing a blue saree with lots of work and looking amazing..





Nicole: hello students...

All boys were except Lousians ...ehm ehm I should say nilesh too was drooling over that beautiful lady...

Rdx: ok guyz well I wanna tell u something.. that's y I m here... its too important..

Sh: whats that important sir?? U just entered and are about to blast ...

All smiled at it..

Rdx: guyz its not that simple.. u knw na the upcoming events??

Sw: yes sir.. too many of dance festivals..

Sh: not festivals swayam.. they are parts of the dance fest..

Rdx: whatever.. I want to tell u CS and ASC that u will nt have to do anything.. all preparations will be done by someone..so u wanna know whos that someone??

Vicky: yes sir.. we wanna knw..

Sh: what sir??? No ways.. we r doing it so y will anyone else do it??? Are they from our college??

Rdx: no.. they r from New York... don't u knw Flaming Lovers group..its really rocking..and today they are coming and we have to start preparations for their welcome..they should have a blast welcome..

Sh: F.Flaming what??? I don't knw..

Nil: wait.. I knw them... they are the awesome dancers and designers of New York..but I didn't saw them...they are I think 6 .. is it???

Rdx: ya.. they are six..


Three girls and three boys..wait.. I should announce it..

Rdx takes the mike and get upon the stage..

Rdx: so guyz ready for the blast??? Flaming Lovers are coming here for attending ou dance fest and they will do all the preparations ot it too.. wat say guyz...?????

Boy 1 : hey that's Kat's group... oh MAN !!! she is gonna come here.. WOW THAT WOULD BE AWESOME...

Boy 2: WHAT??? KAT AND HERE??? That's so cool.. she's too HAWT man..

All were listening carefully to them..

Nil: woahhh HAWTT!! Ab ti milna hi par ga is kat se...

Simmi: ye kaisa name he... KAT??? * she shot a disgusting look to nil who was dreaming about the figure and face of that girl*

Sh: ya its to lame..

Rdx: QUIET!!! Quiet guyz.. ya they r coming.. the are here to make it more awesome fest.. they are here to blast of your minds... well Archie, Sasha, Killer, Ridzi and ... And HUNTER and at last our very own lady KAT !!!!!

Sw: woahhh just hear their name guyz,... So weird , so will be they... weirdo???

Rey: no.. I don't think so... they have such cool names and I don't knw but I think they will too cool but whose this Kat and Hunter??? They sounds too weird I mean everyone is literally drooling over them...

Vicky : yup yaar... I m eagerly to meet them... they sounds too popular..hmm and that too from New York... wow..

Sh: wow my foot... they sounds so yuckkk...but boys I mean hunter , killer and archie sounds too gud...

All boys whispered: JEALOUSS!!!

Neha: neha having weird thoughts... Feeling someone's presence neha is..

Vishaka: same here dude.. m feeling that K.. huh...nthing..

They heard shoutings and all hootings so they came to know that they have reached.. all are excited to see these so called popular weirdo's...



Guyz i think this is a very long update ...

so i want long comments too...

Edited by Dazzling_Smile - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome!!!!!!!!!!
hehehehe nil as usual drooling over nicole n now wondering whoz kat
awww every one is feeling something diff. n vishakha was abt to say kriya den she stopped...
n awww sharon jealous...update the next part soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Awesome updt nams..

Waiting for kriya to come..

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