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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hola people...Hope u all are doing well. I just hope u did not forget me. I wrote a oneshot few weeks back in this forum. Well'I am back as some ideas and thoughts are pestering my brain.This is very small, but hope this entertains u all.

"Gopi, hit it right there", squealed Rashi.

"Bhabhi, if u will listen to Rashi, u will definitely lose this game", smilingly said Jigar.

"JigarJi'",shouted Rashi with mock anger.

Gopi smiled at both of them at their childish antics and turned her attention towards her opponent of the game, her Ahemji. He was neither interested in listening Rashi and Jigar's bickering nor interested in playing this stupid game of caroms. He was lost in staring at his wife and her beautiful angelic smile which brought a silly and stupid smile onto his face.

Gopi felt the heat rising into her cheeks. "Its ur turn Ahemji", she said. Rashi and Jigar stopped fighting. Thay looked at Ahem and started giggling. Ahem became conscious and now even he was blushing.

"Bhai, do u need a cold shower?", Jigar teased him even more.

Hetal and Kokila who were preparing Puja Thali and watching the couples play also laughed at Jigar's teasing.

Ahem looked towards the carromboard as if it is the only important thing that matters to him right now. Rashi suddenly said, "Stop Jiju!"

Rashi said excitingly, "We did not decide the bet."

Ahem and Jigar unitedly said ,"Bet?".Gopi was confused.

"Yes,Bet. We don't play games without bets. Do we Gopi? ", Rashi said winking at Gopi.

Gopi was uncertain what was her sister's plan, but still decided to go with her sister and said ,"Yes, Rashiben is right.We should have bet ."

Ahem and Jigar unitedly said, "But what?"

"That--- we would tell u after we win the game", said Rashi confidently.

"That would never happen, bcoz we r going to win this game", said Jigar.

"Then, I hope u enjoy disappointment",said Rashi.

The game continued with Gopi's constant attention on game and Ahem's constant attention on Gopi.

"We won!!!", Gopi shouted excitingly. Rashi and Gopi cheered. Ahem looked at his wife's innocence and childishness and smiled happily.

"Bhai, You made us lose.",wailed Jigar.

"I know, it's ultimately my Gopi Vau who would win", said Kokila proudly and kissed her Gopi Vau.

Ahem watched the whole interaction smilingly. He never thought that his life would be so perfect with Gopi in it. But she fitted in his life so perfectly.Perfect!!That's what his wife is,His Perfect Wife,thought he happily.

"Now as u are lost, u will follow our orders. Are u ready?",said Rashi cheerfully.

Ahem and Jigar looked at each other skeptically and said "We hope so'"

Rashi excitingly said, "So the bet isss..."

I am so sorry that I have to stop at this point.Hopefully, I'll write the next part and post it soon. Till then,keep guessing what is Rashi's bet. Bye...


Part 2 TASTE OF LOVE...Pg.6



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Scarlet28 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#2
Well done...nice OS please continue...your Ahem and Jigar are both cute.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice one...refreshing to read about them enjoying the little pleasures of life. Update soon😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow that;s a good start as rashi's mind still healthy and positive...need one epi like this as ahem will have more time to spend with gopiii
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Posted: 13 years ago
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WOW...lovely OS...plz..plz...continnue soon...bet should be to hug???😉..anyways...any bet u put i would love it😊
n about the word "perfect"...aww...love it... I want Ahem to say it again...he last spoke that word during gopi birthday scene..when gopi was playing carrom n she strike the striker properly
and afterall...she is the perfect sathiya to him😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i loved ur os...waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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really wow, nice one.plz do continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I didn't like.. don't mistake me.. I didn't like where you have stoped.. :) Beautiful OS.. i just loved.. couples are playing games, update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wonderful os...so what is the bet??
cant wait to read the next part...update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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😆😆😆Bet is to make tea and snakes to be made by Gihem? 😆Pl. continue soon.

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