MayUr OS Gallery: OS 19 - Upd Pg. 114 (5/7/2011) - Page 82

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Posted: 14 years ago
Ahem Ahem!
So what do we have here? Mayank n Nupur after 8 years of marriage?😍
Do you have any idea how easy it is for you to write the married life scenes? This is not the first time you have written a married life OS. When I had first read your first ever one shots on IF, I was amazed by the beauty of those. I could not imagine that they were written by an unmarried teenage girl. But now, I very well know your love for these kind of warm and light married life moments.
There is always a certain tinge of practicality in your writings. Evenif you write a mushy romance between the married couple, it never becomes mushy, in fact your style of writing brings out a variety of flavors of married life. Plus you add a touch of humor which makes them all quite engaging read.
And this OS is a charm... total Akki charm!... I LOVED IT...
A loving huband who has broken a promise and is scared of facing the wrath from his wife... and his thoughts... But no, Nupur loves me. She'd rather torture me than kill me...😆.. This is awesome!! I mean that's called married life! You make mistakes, but you know your wife so well... and you know she will forgive you.. and you very well know the ways to make her lose the anger. That's the thing about happy married life... it's charm never fades. I loved it how he tries to save himself.. Which one do you think will earn me less anger from you?😆
I was grinning while reading this OS. It totally suits a certain couple we know. 😆
You know you should write many many of these kind of one shots. Romantic hubby and feisty but adorable wife and their two little cuties! 😳
Love you Sweets 🤗
Di
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Posted: 14 years ago

Akki this was totaly mind-blowing OS

loved mayur in this OS n the kids were amazing
thanks for the pm n cant't wait the AYNIL update
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Posted: 14 years ago
awww..that was just too cute!!!
i just can't help awwing at this os :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
WOW...WONDERFUL OS..
U hav got a unique sense of humor added vid romance..in ur writing.
It is a real pleasure to read ur update..
liked dis os 2 d core.
ur update brings a big smile😆 on my face..
👏keep writing...n please pm me next time.
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Posted: 14 years ago
awww... 😍so sweet! y u said romance isnt ur forte? ofcourse it is! just so mushy mushy..& stopping b4 it goes overboard..🤗 alwyz perfect! 👏

n by d way, a belated happy birthday fantasia. :)) 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
How many times i said that noone can never ever write like u...U r my FAVORITE writer on IF...
Like i said before only u can write romantic stories with so much humor...And i love this most...
The lines wr typically akkish 😆 and cheesy and romantic...Loved it completely...🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey aki..lovely one-shot.
nupur was pissed with maynak, for breaking a promisee. and of course, she needed the melodrama to convey the point across :P lol, n i totally loved mayakn's drama at the beginning!
he did somehow manage to make her forgive him, with a romantic excuse, aww! and she melted, so easilyy. they started kissing, aww..
but too bad it was spoilt by the kids, who were just like their parents! how awesome is that? :)
mayank gifted her a ring, and then tried to kiss her in front of the kids..but they were smart enough to find out :P lol.
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
i loved the drama king today instead mayank was jus tooo funny...i loved d kids and their dad...wow yaar gr8 os do write more n ofcrs i loved nups too...

thnx fr d pm!

love
komal
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved Loved Loved this!!!

A perfect mixture of love, nok-jhok, sweetness...FAB FAB FAB!!!

Waiting for the next update of AYNIL :))
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Akki... 😃
I absolutely, most definitely really loved this.. the whole thing flowed so wonderfully, all credits to u of course, u r a fabulous writer.. 👏
Really cute, sweet lil scene, i can just picture this happening actually..
Mayank as always was too cute and Nupur was Nupur, the loveable Nupur whose anger sits on the tip of her nose lol, i loved what she was doing with the magazine article, lol and Mayank knew exactly how to handle it, how to handle her..
I like how he has reverted to melodrama coz thats the best way to get around Nupur 😆
Loved the lil cuties, the kids i mean.. a complete duplicate of their parents, arguing and fighting just like them, even i got nostalgic. 😆
And the end was just perfect. Clap
Loved this OS, it had a perfect balance of all the right things.. nice one. 😃
Edited by pagli91 - 14 years ago

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