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Posted: 13 years ago



Originally posted by: kria1996

*faint faint* !!

it was an amazing update!
in yur ff amar is soo romantic..so is shakti!!
luvd it , luvd it!!!!
thank u sooo much for such a long update filled with such hot romance!!!!!
yu are a fab writer...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜ƒ

Thanks a lot di !
Hehe, real mein bhi kaash aisa ho jaata ! 😍
You're welcome ! 😊
Aw, thanks a ton ! πŸ˜ƒ


Originally posted by: kriyansh24

this is what i call an update.

yesterday i was wandering till 2 in the morning par tab tak update nhi kiya tha apan ne.

but it was an awesome. loved it

Haha, toh baaki sab updates nahi lagte ? πŸ˜› πŸ˜•
Busy thi di.
Awie, thank you ! 😊


Originally posted by: crazysky

its too awesome n too hawt
loved it
loved each n every line

Thanks a lot dear !! 😊


Originally posted by: nams_arsha

Its simply awsum mindblwoing hot cute sweet romantic !! I dont hv words to explain very well written darls <3

Aw, thank you di ! 😊 πŸ˜ƒ


Originally posted by: shaffy_arsha

OMG...OMG...OMG...OMG...OMG...OMG...OMGGG...my sweet romantic little aditi meri sari boriyat ko ek dam se fur kr dia tune to...OMG kya likha h re tune

yipeee...yipeee sooo romantic...haye!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I M DEAD...koi uthao mjhe...hahahaha πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜†

nw after taking long breath...IN OUT IN OUT...nd nd apni xcitment n blushing ko km krte hue comment deti hu πŸ˜†

aditi meri jaan tu to bachi ni bacho ki maaa nikali...hehehehe...instarting i was enjoying da update bt bt jaise tune kaha aaj ke liye itna hi romance...i was feeling lyk 😑 😑...grrrhh!!!!!!! bt bt bt bt jaise jaise aage bade i was lyk woww aditi 😊

i jst love sam n vicky dance bt truly saying i m least intrstng in dat bt i love da song n da way u xplainig da dance moves...n n n n n den comes our most n important part ARSHA DATE PART πŸ˜ƒ

n kunwar is sooo cute...wow man kash meri lyf mai b kunwar jaise koi aye n aise surprises de 😳 😳 😳...bt abhi tpic ko drop kro n update par wapis aao...hehe

n da way u xplain each n evry scene b/w ARSHA is myyy...aditi sachi mai tu bachi ni h...hehehehe...love u love u love u love u love u love u love u meri sweety ❀️...n i want to give tight *HUG* to u

bs ab mai aur xplain ni kr pa ri...n u devil 86...nt fair...bt no problm mai fir b spam krungi...hehehe πŸ˜‰

Haha, pasand aaya ? πŸ˜‰
Arey arey, dead na bolo. Mera kya hoga, aapke bina !!
Jaldi, jaldi .. I'm waiting ! πŸ˜›
Hehe, diya tha na maine ek mini-heart attack ! See, how much I love being a devil. πŸ˜‰
Hehe .. sab excited hain uss ke liye ! πŸ˜›
Hehe, sachi. He's so hot. OMG, I love him again ! ❀️ ☺️
Aha, chalo dhundhti hun main aapke liye waisa koi. Agar woh hi acha laga toh batao, ussey hi le aati hun ! πŸ˜›
Arey yar ! Sab mujhe itni jaldi budha kyun kar rahe ho. I love my childhood. Nahi issey mujhse mat cheeno ! πŸ˜›
Aw, love you too and more !! ❀️ Huggies !! πŸ˜† πŸ€—
Arey koi nahi, itna hi kaafi hai ! πŸ˜›
Lol ! agla update dekhna ab ! πŸ˜›


Originally posted by: kriyaanshd3

uh teri yaar!!
aditi... i dnt knw... can i call it a hot update!!!
i mean seriously, pehle se hi itni garmi hain (thnx 2 summers) aur ab tera upd8 padne ke baad toh i feel mujhe fan on karna hi padega!!!!πŸ˜†
tanha n arsha ka in knew.. but.. ARCHIE N SAM A COUPLE!!! dats strange!😲

Hehe, sure sure !! πŸ˜†
Lol ! Maine already on kare hue hain. Sach mein too hot it is. That's why I hate summers. 😑
Lol ! I love to give shocks !! πŸ˜› That's just my imagination. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: MahiSharma

Plzzz

Update...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: MahiSharma

Aaditi...

Update...
sooon

Originally posted by: MahiSharma

plzzz...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Update next part...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜³

Originally posted by: MahiSharma

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Originally posted by: MahiSharma

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Originally posted by: MahiSharma

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Originally posted by: MahiSharma

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Originally posted by: MahiSharma

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Originally posted by: MahiSharma

Yes yes yes Yes yes yes...πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

75 page tak to aa hi gaye... aage ke page bhi aise hi aa jayenge...!!!!
Yeee...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ok now i know its to rubbish & stupid...!!! par kya kare tumhare sorry sorry "Humare" (i hope u dont mind to call it humare) ff hai hi itne pyare ki me inke agle updates pane ke liye kuch bhi kar sakti hu...πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜› Sorryyy...!!!!!!!!!!
But I love your updates like helll... so what to do...??????????
Plzzz update next part sooon... Love you Aaditi...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†πŸ˜›πŸ˜ƒ


Baap re ! 😲
Itne saare comments.
You guys are impossible. 😑
Update kiya nahi ki demand puri karna shuru.
You know I was shocked when I saw all this !
Sure, its humaara FF ! 😊
Aw, thanks !! πŸ˜ƒ
I'll update in 8 minutes. 😊
Love you too ! πŸ€—
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Posted: 13 years ago
awww...i absolutely loved your update...:)..i had a smile on while reading it..i must say you've matured so much as a writer..with every update you get better and better...:)..keep up the good work as always...!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
absolutely loved ur update aditi...:)
Edited by ruta - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
aditi when will you update next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
Aditi plzzz updt na...I'm waitin
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Posted: 13 years ago

*****

Continued.

Before I begin, I would like to clarify one thing. In the last chapter, I said that it was their first night and some of you took it in the wrong way. What I meant was first night as ArSha and not Amar and Shakti. They slept together doesn't mean the real slept which many dirty minds ( no offence ) thought. It was that first night they slept together in each other's arms like together as one. So, if any one took it in a wrong way, I'm sorry for not making it clear then and misleading you all. One more thing, I wanted to bring in something different than the usual and so I paired up Samentha and Archie. I know it was unexpected, but what's the fun without a little shock ! :P Thank you.

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In Park No. 3 -

After finishing their dinner, everyone wished each other and bye and went off to their rooms. Shantanu came up to Sneha.

Shantanu : Shall we ?

Sneha : Haan.

Sneha took his hand and they walked off to their villa hand in hand. Shantanu had his hand around her waist. Shan opened the door and Sneha went in and was shocked. The whole room looked like a it was struck with a hurricane. Everything was scattered around the room. She gasped and Shan came there to see what made her gasp. He chuckled and Sneha looked at her with an expression which said "it's not funny". Shan stopped chuckling and put on a serious expression.

Sneha : What's this ?

Shan : Um, our room.

Sneha : Very funny. I know that very well. But what's all this ? What happened ?

She took a step forward, and picked up a shirt from the floor. She turned with it in her hand and looked at him.

Shan ( taking it ) : Sorry, woh .. woh .. tum baitho, main karta hun na.

Sneha : Nevermind, I'll help you.

They divided the work and began working while Shan just stood there, looking at her. He smiled seeing her. Sneha completed her part of the room and looked to see if Shan had completed his or not. But when she turned she saw nothing has changed and she looked at Shan who was standing there smiling like an idiot.

Sneha called his name twice, but he didn't respond. Sneha snapped her fingers in front of him, and then he came out of his dream.

Shan : Haan, haan..

Sneha : Yeh kar kya rahe ho tum ? Bahut dinoin se dekh rahi hun, weird behave kar rahe ho.

She went forward and checked his temperature.

Sneha : Bukhar bhi nahi hai. Are you fine ?

Shan just smiled and turned and cleaned up the room.

Sneha : Paagal.

After they finished they both sat on the couch and took a sigh of relief.

Sneha : Bahut thak gaye, chalo let's sleep.

She got up, but Shan pulled her and she fell back on the couch.

Sneha : What ?

Shan : Let's watch a movie !

Sneha : It's ( turning towards the clock ) 11:27 in the night, and you want to watch a movie. Are you out of your mind ? I'm tired and am going to sleep, kal shoot bhi hai. Bye, good night.

Shan ( pouting ) : Fine, jao tum bhi. Amar ne bhi dhokha diya, ab tum bhi chali jao.

Sneha : Aw, mera pumpkin apni Sugar se gussa ho gaya ? It's not possible. Chalo tell me which one do you want to see ?

Shan ( grinning ) : That's my Sugar.

They both hugged each other, settled in the couch and put on the movie - Step Up 3D and. ( I couldn't think of a better dance related movie ) And soon Sneha fell asleep. ( Shan was half - leta hua and Sneha sat at the end ) She fell on Shan's chest. Shan smiled and caressed her face. He closed the T.V. and did some serious self-talks.

Shan ( to himself ) : What's this happening to me ? Why was I behaving like this ? Ho kya raha hai mujhe ? Kyun in madam se related har baat itna affect karti hai mujhe. Kyun I feel so sad jab yeh kissi aur ke saath hoti hai. Kahin mujhe bhi toh iss pagli se ?? Um, I don't think so. I mean.. Urgh !! Forget it. So ja beta, warn aka shoot ke liye late ho jaayega.

He wrapped his arms around Sneha and they both slept like that.

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And they both slept in each others arms. This was their first night together being a couple which will be always cherished by both.

The next morning when Shakti woke up, she found Amar staring at her. She gave him a kiss on his cheeks and whispered a "good morning". Amar smiled and gave her a kiss back and murmured a "good morning" as well. Shakti also smiled and got up. As she moved towards the suitcase, she said

Shakti : Kunwar, tum bhi jao. And get ready. It's 7 and we have to be at the sets by 8.

Kunwar came and hugged her from behind. Shakti smiled and turned. She put her arms around his neck and said,

Shakti : Kunwar, We have lots of time in the world for being together but for god's sake, I stink and need a shower immediately. So, it's better for you to leave.

Amar : I guess you are correct, 'cause I guess it's not only you, but I stick too.

Shakti ( scarastically ) : If it was a joke, then I din't find it funny.

Amar gave him a sweet smile and she gave him a kiss. He quickly kissed her back and then pushed him out.

Amar : Miss you already.

Shakti : Aw, same here. Now, go !!

Amar sighed and went to his room and Shakti went to the washroom.

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To be continued.

That's all for now.

PM's will be sent after 10 mins - today itself - pakka.

Next update ' Page 107 ( This time give me more than 24 hours, please. )

So, keep spamming ! :P

I know short update tha. Three reasons. First, I'm not well. You know these fasts and all. I'm feeling really week, cause I don't eat vrat ka khaana and living on fruits that too only some is difficult. And it was the second one today. Secondly, I went out with my cousins who'll go back on Monday. So I've got a little time more with them. And lastly, I'm also being a devil. You know na, last time I said.

So to make up, I'm giving a precap this time.

Precap : Shoot and some couple moments. 😊

I'll try my best to update tomorrow but no promises.

So tell me, I acted as a true devil na ?

Well next time - long update. Pakka.

For now, take care. Enjoy.

Cheers !!

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Next Part : Click Here

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Edited by Angelic_Aditi - 13 years ago
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Edited by Angelic_Aditi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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kitna chotu sa tha jst lyk u (only by age nt by mind or imagination πŸ˜‰ )

awww tanha is lyk dem...bt dat dhakans are nt understanding y are dey behaving lyk dis...hehehe
chlo shaan ko kch to smjh aya...bt shena kb smjhegi

n our arsha da most happening n romantic couple awww...dat good morning is soo cute...n MISS U ALREADY is sooo sweet...wow man dey are PERFECT 4 each other

n hahahaha dere 1st nyt...i was lauging lyk hell...hehehehe πŸ˜†

n yeah as u rply ki kunwar ko hi le ayegi to i dn't mind ha... πŸ˜†

n ye teri demand krne ki adat kb jaygi...bt noo prblm sb puri ho jaygi n i want nxt update lamba okk na

n yes yes i want to say take care of ur self jyada stress lene ki jarurt ni h...n plsss fast mai kch aur b kha le for god sake warna tabiyat kharab ho jaygi...okkk sweety
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Posted: 13 years ago
res 'll comment 2morrow . its quite late now.

unress.
Itna chota update. i know u'll do this nbut itna choota.
the update was lovely and i loved it very much.
thanks for the pm and next update jaldi aur lanba wala deena.
hmmm take care of ur health chooti behana its more important.
aur aaj kal kya deemand badtha ja raha hai.
i know u deserve it but thoda tho hamare bare mai sochu. kitne pages deeti ho???
froim 93-107. 100 nahi de sakthi thi kya??

Edited by asmaju - 13 years ago

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