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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Asha_ArSha

loved it... BTW i loved the nicknames u gave for TanHa...

Shantannu;... pumpkinπŸ˜†



Thanks a lot !
I came up with them while editing. πŸ˜›
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: 21Neha21

wow aditi...

awsme update..even dere ladai has d magic in it..
loved it when shakti was seducing amar..but amar..idiot..maan nahi sakti tha..apni shakti ko naraz kar dia..
but loved dis ruthna manana...
now amar's turn to manaofy shakti...
n m sure shakti must be looking smoking hot in dat dres..
dat was just superb...
n yayy d bonfire is here..so m waiting eagerly for d much awaited fun of d bonfire.,n whats amar gonna do to manofy shakti..
plz update soon..


Thanks di !
Lol ! He's mad ! πŸ˜›
I bet, she will ! πŸ˜†
Hehe ! Zyada wait nahi karna padega ! πŸ˜›
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: aishasully

woww awsoome dudee man it was mindblowing i really thought the romance bit will cum in but looks lyk well have to wwait and if it goes to page 67 by tomorrow u beta update ill be waiting okk rocking ff lyk always


Thanks a lot di !
Haha ! Actually, bahut jyada lamba ho gaya tha. So I cut it into two !
The update is on it's way ! 😊

Originally posted by: PD_puja

Awesome as always...luvd it...pr yeh fite itni badi kyu ho gyi...cant see my arsha saddy saddy...plz nxt update mai make dem hppy...Waitng fr nxt part...romantic one...n ya ya i frgot sugarr n pumpkin names r awesome fr tanha...luvd it...

Thnx fr d pm...:)



Thanks di !
Arey di, just a twist.
Aagey aagey dekho hota hai kya ! πŸ˜›
Bas, I'll be updating in 10 minutes. 😊
I'm glad to see a positive response for the names ! πŸ˜†
Aw, you're welcome ! 😊

Originally posted by: The007Shivani

Thanks n the update was amazing loved it tons and thanks for the pm aditi and dont forget to pm asma or she will be upset and how nice ending to this chapter


You're welcome yar !
Aw, thanks a lot !
I din't.
In fact, I sent the first PM to her only. 😊
Lol ! I'm glad you liked it. I was thinking bahut daat padegi iss end ke liye ! πŸ˜›

Originally posted by: 21Neha21

yay..i got to read 2 back to back updates...

truth n dare..nice idea..πŸ˜›
but i was laughing hard when amar said apology game..πŸ˜†aww..he is so sweet n cute..
n our tanha..sugar n pumpkin..πŸ˜†dat was so sweet...n sneha at shan's rescue..aww..loved dat..
n how can i forget vinti's dance...i could imagine how awsme dat would be n when our diva joined it..its supposed to b super duper awsme..dat was amazing ..πŸ˜‰
n now coming to d ques alisha asked from shakti..i was wondering whats shakti gonna reply to dat..πŸ˜†
no wonder she left dat unanswered..πŸ˜‰
shaks is crying..but m sure amar mana lega apni shakti ko..
aditi yahan pe stop kyun kia..😭
i realy cant wait for d next update...
jaldi update karna plz...😊


Hehe ! Lucky Lucky ! πŸ˜›
Lol ! It was the best I had ! πŸ˜›
Lol ! Bechara he. All he can think of is Shakti and her gussa and manana ! πŸ˜†
Arey they are so cute !! Aw !! Thinking about them I go to TanHaland !! 😍 And ab woh uski rescue par nahi hogi, toh kaun hoga ! πŸ˜›
Hehe ! Everyone surprised. I tried my best to make it nice ! πŸ˜›
Well, do tell me aapne kya socha tha ! πŸ˜†
Hehe ! Chalak hai woh ! πŸ˜‰
I'll not reply to that sure part ! πŸ˜›
Di, bahut bada ho raha tha update isliye ! 😊
Bas update is on it's way ! πŸ˜ƒ
Thank you for lamba waala comment ! πŸ˜†
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Asha_ArSha

wait... u gave a huge pg demand...

but i promise, this time, i m helping others in completing it..😈

so get ready to give a romantic update tomorrow😈


What can I do ! 😲
Thinking of giving a huger one, next time.
Aap log itni jaldi puri kar dete ho ! 😑
Urgh ! Aap bhi shaamil ho jaaye, inke saath ! 😭
Well, chalo for a change, I'm ready ! πŸ˜›



Thanks dear ! 😊


Originally posted by: asmaju

Wow it was such a wonderful update aditi.

loved it.
Such a big fight between kriyaans. it'll make their bond stronger.
Superb description of the entire situation.
the update was great awesome blossom mindblowing and what not to say. plz update next part soon.
oh so u have a page demand i'll come home nd fulfill it sweety dont worry.

Thanks for the update nd pm(yup nt a formality)


Thanks a ton di !
Yep, it will !
Hehe, thank ya !
Next part bas kar rahi hun thodi der mein ! 😊
Not again ! Kabhi toh maaf kar dia karo ! πŸ˜›
Aw, you're welcome ! πŸ˜ƒ


Originally posted by: Nirju99

it was superv dear

awesome update
update asap


Thanks a lot dear !
The update is on it's way ! 😊


Originally posted by: kriyaanshd3

res... coll se aane ke baad comment karungi..


Sure di ! 😊


Originally posted by: sukanyaa

awesome part...details mein dissection baad mein...as hav no tym...exams hai...

Thanks a lot !
Sure ! 😊


Originally posted by: snigdha_arsha

Wow..it was really an awesome update..

Waiiting for d romantic update..😊


Thanks a lot di !
Well, its on it's way ! 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: luv_arsha

aweee its awesome update aditi...loved it very much

the game was really superb all girls dancing on bollywood number...its superb
and finally amar ko shakti ko manane ka chance mil hi gaya

awesome, superb
continue soon waiting eagerly for next part

Thanks a lot di !
Lol, yes. Mil gaya ! 😊

Originally posted by: kria1996

nice onE!

i want more cute romance!πŸ˜‰
update soon! & pm me:)

Thanks a lot. Soon. Sure. πŸ˜†


Originally posted by: lovely7010

awesome awesome!!!!!
i just luved this part...its amazing
awww luved tanha's nicknames sugar n pumpkin wow
n the arsha hug awww...update the next part soon

Thanks a lot di !
Hehe ! that was last minute addition.
Sure, I will ! 😊


Originally posted by: crazysky

yup am waiting 4 ur next romantic chapter n this was really awesome chapter love it

Thanks a lot !
Soon. 😊


Originally posted by: kritzzz_ArSha

Awesome update sneha wat a que!!!

Thanks !
Haha, Lol ! πŸ˜†


Originally posted by: kriyansh24

loved it.

waiting for romance.

Thanks di ! 😊
Lol, sabhi uska hi wait kar rahe ho kya ? 😲


Originally posted by: MahiSharma

Wow nice update...!!!!!

But no romance...
But still it was awwwesome as allways...
Plz update soon...!!!!! Waitinnng egarliii...!!!!!!!!πŸ˜›πŸ˜‰

Thanks !
Sorry dear ! But bahut bada ho gaya tha !
Pakka, next update !
Sure, bas 5 more minutes. 😊


Originally posted by: Saumya_D3

WOW...i just read ur whole FF together...and its ossom...!! i love how u have kept arsha's friendship intact even after their being relationship...!! lovely...!!!!!


pelase update soon...and please add me to the PM list...!!!!!

Aw, thanks a lot ! πŸ˜ƒ
Hehe, it can never be affected. 😊
Sure, I will ! 😊


Originally posted by: deetha

jaldi next part update karo!!!!!!!

Sure !!


Originally posted by: snigdha_arsha

Waiting 4 d update...😊

Doing di ! 😊



Originally posted by: shaffy_arsha

awsummm...awsummm
i too love truth n dare bt i lyk to add stairing session tooo...u knw na yyy πŸ˜‰
nw coming to update its too awsummm...jst love it...gang is full on entertaining n aww sugar n pumpkin chooo chweet names...n alisha ne to mauke pe chauka mar dia bt hmari shaks ne ans hi ni dia bt good 4 us yar πŸ˜‰
n dancer i knw i knw maine dekha ni bt i cn imagine...(n yeah vinti is gurly gurl in real lyf) bt i lyk tomboy vinti
thnkew 4 such abig big update baby 😊

Thanks a lot di !
Haha, I know why. But I wanted it to be original and epic. Isliye only the two main rakhe. And I personally love only the two ! πŸ˜›
Awie, thank you di !
Haha, acha hai nahi dia ! Bechari kya bolti ! πŸ˜‰
I know ! But I also like tomboy Vinti so I used that part here. πŸ˜†
Hehe, you're welcome ! πŸ˜†
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: RockStarHuda

Wow. Best Update. Liked Truth and Tear,

And Sugar and Pumpkin😊...
Update Fast...
Thax for the pm

Thanks a lot ! 😊
Doing ! πŸ˜›
You're wel. 😊


Originally posted by: MahiSharma

Aaditi tumne promise kiya tha ke 67 page par next part update karogi...!!!!!!!!

Plzzz update next part...!!!!!!

Doing dear. 😊


Originally posted by: Arsha-4-Ever

Hope Arsha's fight gonna end in ur next update. Cant see them sad like that.

Btw dear we are on Page 67. Plz update soon. Dying to read the next update.

I hope that too, lol ! πŸ˜›
Me too.
Doing ! 😊


Originally posted by: RockStarHuda

Best Update...


Sugar and Pumpkin Part was awesome...
But My Most fav Part was the Last Part. Loved That Movt... Shakti Don't Cry...
Update fast.. Thanks For the pm..

Aw, thanks.
Doing.
You're welcome.


Originally posted by: ruta

awww...i'm so sure kunwar would never do anything to hurt his precious lady love...:)..waiting for the next update..:)

Hehe, lets wait and watch ! πŸ˜›


Originally posted by: shaffy_arsha

oyeee meri heroin kaha h tera update jaldi se update kr na


haaha heroin...aaj mai full tooo masti wale mood mai hu πŸ˜‰

Di, kar rahi hun. Give me two minutes. 😊


Originally posted by: luv_arsha

waiting eagerly for the next part...continue soon

Just doing. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

*****

Continued


Before beginning, sorry guys, for a late update. But I went out with my cousins and when I returned I began writing. But mom started gussa karing and all, so band karna pada. And then, abhi jab maa hum ko dekhkar chali gayi hain - ki hum soye ye nahi, tab chupke se update kar rahi hun. So sorry.

Secondly, this part is for you - Asma di and Shaffy di. And I promise, yeh part toh likh dia hai, but agla part bilkul chota hoga. 😑 I hope you remember devil me ! πŸ˜›

So here you all go !


*****


But before he could say anything Shakti hugged him. Tightly. She was feeling very low being away from him that to because of a silly fight. She didn't break the hug for a long time. She hugged him and tears rolled down her cheeks. Amar didn't say anything. He remained silent and consoled her by rubbing her back continuously. Soon he felt her sobs. Yes, Shakti began crying loud. She cried her heart out. Amar again didn't interrupt. He let her cry and throw all the pain and anger out of her heart. He took immense care of her. He kept the rubbing on while she continued ruining his shirt with salt water ( tears ). Eventually she stopped crying, but she again didn't break the hug. After an immeserable long moment she came back to her senses and pulled back. Amar still held her by her waist. Slowly he spoke,

Amar : Are you fine now ?

Shakti ( whisper se bhi dheere ) : Yeah !

Shakti tried to move away, but Amar didn't let her go. He held her possessively with a tight grip around her waist. She struggled to get rid of it but he won't allow her to do so. Finally she sighed and looked up at him. He was looking at her. She immediately looked down as she didn't want to look at those strange deep eyes and get lost in them. Amar held her chin carefully with his hand and made her look up at him. Never breaking the eye contact, he took away his hand and loosened his grip around her waist. He slid his hand from her waist and took her hand in both of his. Again, never breaking the eye contact, he slid down on one knee, left her hands and held both his ears and said,

Amar : I'm really Sorry Shakti. I knew you are emotional but I never knew that you are emotional to this extent. I promise aagey se kabhi bhi aisa behuda mazaak nahi karunga. Please mujhe maaf kar do. Joh bhi tum saza doge, who mujhe manzoor hai. Joh bhi. But please don't ignore me like this. I really love you a lot and cannot imagine my life without you. Please, please, please agar ho sake toh mujhe maaf kar do. Main apni jaan ..

Shakti quickly placed her hand on his mouth and moved her head side to side symbolising a no. She kept both her hands around his shoulders and made him stand up. Then she carefully placed her hands over his chest and stepped closer to him. Not meeting his eyes she said,

Shakti ( whisper ) : Please, don't. Main tumse naraaz nahi hoon. And always remember, I love you too. Who bas mujhe gussa aa gaya tha ki itna bolne ke baad bhi tum nahi maan rahe the.

Amar moved his hands and placed them on her waist and pulled her close. He gave a small kiss on her forehead and said,

Amar : So, am I forgiven ?

Shakti : Not so easily. You'll have to make it up to me.

Amar : Tell me Sunshine, what do I have to do. ( P.S. - Sunshine is name given by Amar to the love of his life ' Shakti )

Shakti : You'll have to figure that out by yourself. Good luck.

Saying that she gave a small peck on his cheek and ran away. Amar gave a wide smile and ran behind her. After a lot of running here and there, he finally got his control on her. He held her by her waist and began planting gentle kisses all over her face and neck. Shakti moaned with pleasure. Now, Shakti also gave small kisses to him on his cheek and jaw. After some time of romance, Shakti spoke up.

Shakti : Kunwar, let's go. Sab tension mein hoinge. Humein sab ko jaake batana chahiye ki we're back to normal. Romance ke liye toh humein aur bhi bahut time mil jaayega.

Amar knew that she was right and so he agreed at once and they headed back to park no. 3.

*****

P.S. ' I know, I said full on romance. But that's all I've got for now. Pakka se baad mein kabhi aur bhi acha waala dungi. Just like the previous one. Iss baar ke liye bhool jao. :P

*****

As they came near the bonfire, they could see tension clear on everyone's face. After all, it was the first time, these two crazy best friends had such a big and serious fight. Then they saw Bharat look up and he saw them. Seeing Amar and Shakti,

Bharat ( irritated ) : Guys, look they are here.

All looked up at where he pointed and were angry to see what they saw. They saw Amar and Shakti walking towards them. Hand in hand and laughing on something. All in all everything was fine between them now. And the two crazy best friends were back.

Priyanka ( irritated and angry ) : Of course, things ko back to normal hona tha. Yeh dono jyada der tak toh lad nahi sakte. Hum hi paagal hain, joh bevkoofoin ki tarah inki tension le rahe the.

Sneha : Exactly. And here these two are back enjoing themselves. I swear I'll kill them both, just let them come here.

Amar and Shakti reached the others by now.

Amar and Shakti ( together ) : Hey guys !!

On realizing that they said it together they both began laughing but stopped on seeing the angry faces around them.

Amar ( a little scared ) : Kya hua guys ?

Shakti realized that Amar was scared so, she held his arm tightly. Amar looked at her and she just blinked her eyes symbolising she's with him. Amar wrapped his arm around her waist and they both were again lost in each other. Seeing this irritated the others even more.

Sneha : Nautanki !

This pulled Shakti out of her trance and she looked up at her with confusing eyes.

Priyanka : Ladte tum ho, aur tension humein hoti hai. Even when we know, patch up toh ho hi jaayega tumhaara. Paagal hain hum sab. Huh !

Shakti realease Amar's arm and went forward to Priyanka.

Shakti : Sorry. We didn't mean that. Sorry. * holding her ears*

Priyanka : Huh.

She turned her face. But this encouraged Shakti even more. She wrapped her arms around Priyanka's slender waist and began tickling her. Priyanka began laughing and both of them fell on ground. They both laughed at this. They stood up and hugged each other. Seeing this the others also began laughing.

Amar and Shakti ( again together ) : Sorry.

Everyone laughed this time.

Shantanu : Fine, you both are forgiven.

Amar ( to himself ) : But abhi ek insaan ki forgiveness bachi hai.

By this time everyone settled around the bonfire once again. Amar excused himself for two minutes. Shakti looked at him with questioning eyes. He murmured a "nothing" to her.

*****

Amar was back after two minutes and he took his seat beside Shakti. When he came back, the game was still going on and it was Archie's chance who got a dare.

Priyanka : Simple, chose your favourite partner and dance on a slow number.

Archie : I'm cool with it. Waise toh main Shakti ko chunta, but kya karein uspar toh sirf humaare Amar bhai ka copyright hai. Aur Shantanu ka Sneha pe. So let me think.

Everyone laughed at his statement while *the four* looked away and blushed slightly.

Archie got up and went towards Samentha. He held his hand out in front of her and spoke in a very gentlemanly manner,

Archie : Can I have this dance with you, princess ? ( P.S. - Just like that. Here Princess and Prince are no nick names. )

Samentha ( giggling ) : For sure, my prince !

Saying that, Sam placed her hand in his and he helped her stand up. Once they stood up and took their dancing positions, the song ' Tere Naina ( Movie ' Chandni Chowk To China ) began.

*****

To all my readers, if you have the song, then play it in bachground as it will help you get the feeling. One more thing, I know most of you wanted Arsha in their place, but it was very important for the two and why sab ko pata chal jaayega. Last but not the least, I'll give you the lyrics and steps done on them. But still, so play the song in background. Guys here is the key :

Italics ' Song lines

Normal ' Steps or whatever dance done.

Music

They begin there dance by standing away from each other. Archie stepped closer to her and slid on his knee, held out his hand on the beats. She put her hand in his, and they take up the dancing position ' Sam's hands around Archie's neck, elbows straight and Archie's haned around her waist. Again in the music and on beats itself.

Tere Naina .. Has diye .. Bas gaye, mere dil mein, tere naina .. ' (2)

They sway side to side on the first line. And in the second line ( same ) ' Archie lifts her up holding her by her waist and she moves her hand and open them abover her like feeling he air around and Archie takes turns. Matlab who gol ghoom rahe the.

[ Mere dil mein joh armaan hai, paas aake zara dekho na .. ( dekho na - echos )

Dil ki taar mein hai sargam, chede hai ab koi anjaana .. ( anjaana - echos ) ] ' (2)

First time : Archie puts her down back. Loosens the grip around her waist and holds her hand. Sam turns and they stand away from each other holding one hand ( ver common step ' zaroor dekha hoga sab ne ). Then Sam caresses her own face ' right side with her free left hand. Right hand holding Archie's left hand who was just looking at Sam, lost in her. ( step the joh aisa lagta hai ' If I use technical terms toh bahut logo ke sir pir se nikal jaayega. So, I'm explaining on how it looks. No offence. ) Then in flow, she moves the hand down and with it pulls her right leg up along her strainght left one up till the knee, toe pointed. Both legs are side by side. And her hand moves down and then up to the left side and it stops above her head, palms facing up and slightly curved. She bent a little towards the left side, her full balance in her left foot. She was being given support by Archie who held her hand strongly supporting her. Sam was looking towards her left and Archie too. Matlab Archie looking at Sam who was facing someone/something else.

Second time : Archie pulls her back. She comes in rolling. Now her back faces his front and his arms around her body holding both her hands. ( another common step )

Yeh pyaar ki hain baatein ..

Kuch ankahi mulaakatien ..

Ho .. Aise hi milte hain, milke machalte hain, do dil javaan ..

Archie pulls her closer, finishing the *thoda sa* distance between them. Sam places her head against his shoulder. Her back was still facing his front. And they swayed from side to side.

Tere Naina ..

Tere Naina ..

Has diye ..

Bas gaye, dil mein tere, mere naina .. ( cut there ' matlab song wahaan pause kar dena sirf wahin tak ka hai. Warna bahut long ho jaayega and I don't have time. )

Tere Naine 1 : Archie turned her carefully. Now they were facing each other.

Tere Naina 2 : Look Look Hawa Hawa

Rest : A little sway from side to side and end as a hug. And yep, one more thing, throughout the performance, they din't break the eye contact.

*****

Everyone hooted a lot after their performance ended gave them applause ( which they very well deserved ). But everyone was shocked on seeing the chemistry between the two. Amar couldn't hold back so, he asked.

Amar Go : Guys, that was amazingly superb and sensuous. But, what's with the chemistry.

On that Sam blushed hard and buried her face in Archie's shoulder who just wrapped his arms around her shoulders and gave a smile.

Archie : I guess, it's time. Guys, we're together. ( P.S. ' Guys, this is just my imagination as I wanted a shocker :P. I don't know ki aisa kuch sach mein hai ya nahi. )

Everyone : What ?!

Sam pulled back and held Archie's one hand. They faced the others and said,

Sam : That's true. We'll soon be completing a month.

Everyone cheered harder this time, but two people were sad now. Both Archie and Sam noticed that.

Archie : Shaks, you're not happy ?

Sam : Yeah, and Vinti you too ?

Vinti and Shaks : How could you do this to us ?

Shakti went forward and slapped Archie ( halke se ). Everyone is shocked. While Vinti does the same with Sam. Again shocked. Everyone was wondering what's wrong with them. Both Archie and Sam looked at each other, then at the one's who slapped them, then rubbed their cheeks and then faced them, with questioning eyes.

Shakti : And here you call me your sister ? And this is what I get ? Ek month hone waala hai aur mujhe pata bhi nahi. I hate you. Huh ! Go to hell aur mujhse kabhi baat mat karna.

Archie smiled on hearing that and so did the others.

Vinti ( to Sam ) : Exactly. Don't you dare call me your best friend now. Bhool jaana ki Vinti naam ki meri ek best friend bhi thi. Actually dost bhi thi. Huh !

Now Sam also smiled.

Both Sam and Archie looked at each other, winked and took their respective partners in a hug. The other two were surprised.

Archie : Sorry guys. But we wanted to be sure, before we tell anyone. We were afraid, whether it will work out for the both of us or not, and it did. So, let's just forget the past and enjoy the present and future.

Vinti : Well, fine then.

Shakti and Vinti break the hugs and step back.

They all go to congratulate both of them. Amar pulled Shakti aside making sure that no one saw them.

Amar : Abhi tumne dekha, tumhein kitna gussa aaya on hearing that Archie and Sam are together. Don't you think ki ussey bhi bura lagega, when we tell him late.

Shakti : I think you are right. I'll tell him right away. But not the others. Not now. Four people know, that's enough. Um, wait here oka ?

Shakti gave a quick peck on his lips and went towards where Archie was. Amar was surprised at her actions but he just stood there with the world's biggest smile on his face.

*****

Shakti went towards Archie and pulled him at a side.

Archie : Kya hua Shaks ?

Shakti : Need to talk. Who udhar Kunwar dikh raha hai ? *pointing towards where he was*

Archie : Yeah.

Shakti : Come there in a minute. Aur dhyan se aana, koi dekh na le.

Archie ( confused ) : Sure. Tum chalo, I'll be right behind you.

Shakti : Cool and make it fast.

Saying that she left from there and went back and joined Kunwar. Just after a minute Archie came there as told. Archie looked at them with a confused expression.

Archie : What's wrong guys ?

Shakti : Um, nothing's wrong.

Archie : Then ??

Amar : Actually I need to tell you something. *We* need to tell you something.

Archie : Haan bolo.

Shakti : *sigh* Oka, let's get over with this. I and Kun .. Kunwar are .. I mean .. We are ..

Amar ( completing her sentence ) : dating.

Archie : What ? Sach mein ?

Shakti ( slightly blushing ) : Yes.

Archie : Tabhi main kahun, aaj face par itna glow kaise. By the way, congratulations guys !

He pulls her in and unexpected hug and lifts her off the ground and twirls around. Then he places her back on ground. Holds her left hand and places it in Amar's hand.

Archie : Meri behen ka ache se dhyan rakhna.

Shakti gave him a smile. Amar lifted their hands and kissed the back of Shakti's hand. Shakti blushed and looked down.

Amar ( to Archie ) : Forever.

Archie ( to Shakti ) : Ab bol tu, tune mujhe bhi toh nahi bataya. *pout*

Shakti : Naatak mat kar jyada. Aaj hi hua.

Amar ( mischeviously ) : Kya aaj hi hua ?

Shakti : Woh ..

Amar : Hm, who kya ??

Shakti : *blushing* Kuch nahi !

And she ran away from there.

Archie : Teri toh nikal padi boss.

Amar : *smiling* Yeah ! By the way, teri bhi toh nikal padi.

Archie : *giggling* Yes !!

Amar : Acha sun. Yeh baat sirf tujhe, Alisha, Sneha aur Shantanu ko pata hai. Abhi auroin ko batane ke liye Shakti isn't ready. And I'll not do anything she doesn't want. So bhai, please kissi ko mat bataiyo abhi. Sam ko bhi nahi.

Archie : I understand. Sure, nahi bataunga.

Amar ( teasingly ) : Haan haan, tut oh understandega hi na. Experienced joh hai. *wink*

Saying that he too ran away before Archie could beat him up. Archie also left and joined the others.

Sneha : Guys, bahut bhook lagi hai. Um, let's have dinner what say.

Everyone : Yeah !

Amar : Um, guys can you all please excuse me and Shaks ?

Vinti : Hone se bhi kya farak padta and waise bhi it's nothing new. Fine, go.

Amar holds Shakti's hands and walks away from there.

They all start moving towards the food counter.

*****

Shakti : Kunwar ??

Amar : Shh !

He stops as soon as they were out of other's sight. Amar took out a silky cloth from the back pocket of his jeans and quickly put it on Shakti's eyes ?

Shakti : Kunwar what's going on ? And what's this ? *touching the cloth*

Amar : Blindfold, Sunshine.

Shakti : Very funny. I also know that.

Amar : Bahut sawal poochti ho tum. Chup ab bilkul. Come now.

Saying this, Amar picks up Shakti in his arms and starts moving.

Shakti : Kunwar ? Kunwar ? Ruko ! And put me down. Chodo mujhe.

Amar : Agar chod diya toh gir jaogi. Gir jaogi toh lag jaayegi. Lag jaayegi toh dard hoga. Aur tumhein dard hoga toh mujhe bhi dard hoga. And secondly, main tumhein dard mein dekh bhi nahi sakta. So, sau baatoin ki ek baat, am not going to leave you.

Shakti : Urgh ! You're impossible.

Amar : Thanks a lot !

He gave her a kiss on her cheeks.

Shakti ( very sweetly ) : At least tell me, where are we going ?

Amar : It's not going to work. And just feel around and try and guess.

Shakti sighed and concentrated hard on trying to recognize their location. She heard a door open and close and also something sliding. And finally, Amar set her down on the floor. Well, it felt to soft to be floor.

Amar ( to himself ' on the way ' poore time Shakti ko dekhte hue ) : Kitni cute lagti hai jab kissi cheez par itna dhyan deti hai. Aw, I love her so much. Damn, why din't I realize this earlier. She's so sweet and cute. And today, in this dress, she looks so hot.

Back to present :

Shakti : Pahunch gaye ?

Amar : Yeah !

Amar slowly removed the blindfold, but Shakti's eyes were still closed. She slowly opened her eyes and was shocked to see. She turned around and could not believe her eyes. She realized it was the same place but Amar had decorated it. Each and every part.

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P.S. ' Now, part to further describe the villas and let you know more about you. Well, I guess that day I gave you info about the entire interior. Today I'll tell you about the exterior of the Villa ( poora nahi ' abhi only half ' baaki ka half with time ). So, basically when you go out through one of the door length and too wide sliding windows, you come out. ( just like, when you go out of your house ) Now as soon as you step out, there is a big garden. A very big one and a stony path. It goes in two directions. I'll tell you about one now. So when you take the left path, you come across a beautiful gazebo on the sea shore ( only thoda sa sand ) made of stones perfect for romantic dinners or any other normal thing as well. It was very beautiful and simple. Covered with curtains. Now, Amar brought her there. He had decorated the entire gazebo. Let me clear one more thing, ther villas are like in between the sea. And a little beach-sand. As promised, I'll give you the pics. Of the un-decorated gazebo. Of the original one.

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Shakti : Kunwar, what's all this ?

Amar : This is my way of making it up to you ! So, do I get the pleasure of having dinner with you my Sunshine ?

Shakti : Of course stupid. Aw, I love you so much !

And she hugged him tight. Amar chuckled.

Amar : Love you too sunshine. Chalo, abhi dinner karte hain.

And he lead her to the table there. Shakti saw the whole place and was feeling lucky that she had Amar with her. He had covered the whole floor with rose petals ( that's why she felt softer before ) and the whole places was decorated with flowers of various kinds and candles. The setting was purely heavenly and romantic.

Amar made Shakti sit comfortably on the sofa and sat beside her.

Amar : So, do you like it ?

Shakti : Like it ? I love it ! I can't believe this is my own room. Arey haan, what about Sneha.

Amar : Don't worry. She'll be with Shan, this night.

Shakti : Aw, that's so sweet of her.

Amar : Yeah !

Shakti was eyeing the bowl kept there.

Shakti : So what's for dinner.

Amar : Your all time favourite noodles !

Shakti ( excited ) : Noodles ??

Amar ( chuckled ) : Yup. Actually na, aur kuch banana mujhe aata nahi tha.

Shakti ( lying her head on his shoulder ) : Aw, yeh tumne banaya.

Amar : Yes, Sunshine.

Shakti : Thank you !

Amar : It's all my pleasure. Chalo khaana khaayein ?

Shakti : Yeah !

Shakti picked up the chopsticks and took up the first bite. She gave it to Amar. Amar ate half of it, took the chopsticks from her and gave her the other half. They had their dinner like that ' chatting, laughing, blushing, caring and feeding each other. After the dinner got over they both got up and went for a walk along the sea shore. There they both sat on the sand side by side. The water touching their bare feet.

Shakti : Thank you Kunwar, for making the night special for me! *keeping her head on his shoulder*

Kunwar : Anything for you Shaku. Can I ask you for one thing in return ?

Shakti : Anything, baby.

Amar smiled at her random use of the word baby.

Amar : Pakka ?

Shakti : Yes.

Amar : Can you make the rest of the night special for me ?

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P.S. ' Did you guys really think, I'm gonna break my promise. Zinda nahi bachti main. Do baar se bol rahi thi. Cancel thodi na karungi. So here you all go. :P I would advise that only (16+) read this. Please. J

Mahi Sharma ' This is specially for you. Hope you and all the others like it.

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Shakti : Of course, what do you want ?

Amar didn't say anything. He just turned Shakti and looked deep into her eyes. His gaze shifted to her lips and she understood what he meant. She blushed and looked down. Amar lifted her chin up with his finger and leaned in. Shakti's heart started beating loudly and shivers ran down her spine. Close to her lips, he paused and asked looking into her eyes,

Amar : May I ?

Shakti was so shy that she din't say anything and just closed her eyes. Amar smiled and closed the gap between their lips. He kissed her softly and then pulled back to look at her. She still had her eyes closed. He waited for her to open her eyes. She understood that and slowly opened her eyes. He stared deep into them and was happy on what he saw. He could see the same hunger, the same passion in them. He smiled and took her up in his arms and went back to the bedroom his eyes all the way on her. She was blushing deeply and seeing her blush he smiled.

As soon as they reached the bedroom, Amar placed her on the bed and went over her. Yes, he was on top of her. He again looked at her eyes and smiled. He closed them with his one hand and gave two small kisses on his eyes. Then he went down and gave another small kiss on her nose. Going a little sideways, he kissed her cheek. Moving further away, he bit her earlobe. Shakti moaned with pleasure which made him go wilder. He did the same thing on the other side of her face. Now he went towards her jaw. He planted wet kisses all along her jaw line leaving her to moan with pleasure. Suddenly she held his chest and pushed him. They rolled over and now Shakti was on top of Amar. She gave a shy first kiss on his cheek. Amar smiled in anticipation and pulled her closer. She also started planting kisses all along his jawline and neck. Amar was getting lost in her with her every move. He understood how much she loved him. She slowly unbuttoned his shirt and made him sit. She sat in his lap and kissed his cheek, all thw while removing his shirt. When done, she threw it away and ran her hand on his mascular chest. Then she began planting kisses along his chest making him go wild. He could not wait any longer. He took a sharp turn and they fell back on the bed. Shakti below and Amar on top of her. Amar moved his hand and rubbed them along her bare back. ( remember it was a halter dress ) This sent shiver down her spie and she shuddered. Amar felt her shudder and smiled. She gave lovebites all over her neck and Shakti kept on moaning with pleasure. Eventually Amar went back to from where he stopped and Shakti took the charge. Now, he made his way to her neck. He kissed her in earnest along the collar bone. Finally he made his way back to top. He gave a small kiss on her forehead and then made his way towards her lips. He brushed his lips against hers. He took her upper lip between his and she took his lower. They both had a lip-lock and kissed each other. It was soft in the beginning but it turned passionate. Soon, both stopped as they were gasping for air. He looked at Shakti who looked away and blushed. Amar smiled and gave a kiss on her lips. This was a short kiss. He then made her look at him. He gave another kiss on her forehead and said,

Amar : Thank you for making the night special for me Shakti. Thanks a lot.

Shakti just blushed deeper while Amar moved back and took his place beside her. Shakti laid her head in the hollow beneath his throat while he wrapped his arms around her waist and said,

Shakti : I will always remember this day and .. and .. and this n .. night !!

She blushed and turned her head to avoid his gaze and kissed his neck. Amar kissed his hair and said,

Amar : Same here Sunshine. Now, sleep. Kal jaldi uthna hai. Shoot hai. Common sleep now.

Shakti : Oka !

And they both slept in each others arms. This was their first night together being a couple which will be always cherished by both.

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To be continued.

That's all for now.

Have to say, that's one of my longest write-ups.

And now I demand that you give me lamba lamba comments. It's not a request but and order.

I tried my best to make it romantic and long.

I hope I stood up to your expectations.

And Mahi - Please tell me whether you like it or not. Or if any problem, do tell me.

I din't get time to edit this one. So please bear with me and ignore the mistakes. πŸ˜ƒ

Again - same rule for PM's. Joh log iss post ko like kareinge and will give reviews, will get the PM's for next update.

PM's for this update will be sent tomorrow morning. Have school at 11. Ussey pehle kar dungi. Actually jaldi uthna hai, warna abhi hi kar deti. Sorry for the inconvenience. Tab tak ke liye, spammers, have fun ! πŸ˜›

Next Update - Page 86. πŸ˜† ( The devil is back πŸ˜‰ )

Till then, take care and enjoy.

Cheers !!

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Edited by Angelic_Aditi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
😊fir spamming ur thread nd first one to comment😊
lovely update aditi.
wow such a romantic one.
one question y do u update at late night???
but fine i get a wonderful suprise in the morning.😳
now to the comments u want bala wala sure i'lll give but ponce i come home from coll
tab tak i would have received ur pm and a big hug to u for this wonderful update.
i really dont understand how do u imagine such stuff but lucky ki tum imagine karthi ho and we get great updates.
ab u came back to devil mode den dont forget there r 3 others here me shivs and shaffy
to fullfill this demand.
i hope u remember the speed at which we do thisπŸ˜‰
so coll se akar tere ye demand bhi pura kar deti hun.
anyone else who wanna join can join us to do this...
Edited by asmaju - 13 years ago

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