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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Angelic_Aditi

I'll update tomorrow. 😊

we will wait for the update
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Posted: 13 years ago
devil nah mere liye toh tu aditi keh rhi thi ki u'll update at night...

so u updating kab??????????????????????/
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Posted: 13 years ago
waiting for update pari.

banner was superb.
Edited by asmaju - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Thanks a lot. 😊


Originally posted by: shaffy_arsha

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unress

kitna chotu sa tha jst lyk u (only by age nt by mind or imagination 😉 )

awww tanha is lyk dem...bt dat dhakans are nt understanding y are dey behaving lyk dis...hehehe
chlo shaan ko kch to smjh aya...bt shena kb smjhegi

n our arsha da most happening n romantic couple awww...dat good morning is soo cute...n MISS U ALREADY is sooo sweet...wow man dey are PERFECT 4 each other

n hahahaha dere 1st nyt...i was lauging lyk hell...hehehehe 😆

n yeah as u rply ki kunwar ko hi le ayegi to i dn't mind ha... 😆

n ye teri demand krne ki adat kb jaygi...bt noo prblm sb puri ho jaygi n i want nxt update lamba okk na

n yes yes i want to say take care of ur self jyada stress lene ki jarurt ni h...n plsss fast mai kch aur b kha le for god sake warna tabiyat kharab ho jaygi...okkk sweety


Lol, I know di ! 😛
Lol, they are stupid ! Two love birds jinhein pata bhi nahi hai ki they are in love ! 😉
Lol, yea ! They are ! 😆 Agreed. They are beyond perfect for each other ! 😊
Acha hai, aapne toh galat sense mein nahi liya ! 😳
Hehe, bas uske saath appointment fix karva do kissi tarah se. Kya pata aapke liye baat karte karte, meri baat chal jaaye ! 😆 😛
Lol, kabhi nahi jaayegi di ! Next update usual se lamba hoga lekin waise lamba nahi hoga ! 🤣
Di, ab toh I'm fit as a fiddle ! 😉


Originally posted by: asmaju

res 'll comment 2morrow . its quite late now.


unress.
Itna chota update. i know u'll do this nbut itna choota.
the update was lovely and i loved it very much.
thanks for the pm and next update jaldi aur lanba wala deena.
hmmm take care of ur health chooti behana its more important.
aur aaj kal kya deemand badtha ja raha hai.
i know u deserve it but thoda tho hamare bare mai sochu. kitne pages deeti ho???
froim 93-107. 100 nahi de sakthi thi kya??


Sorry di, but aapki pari ke paas bilkul bhi time nahi tha. 😳
Thank you di ! 😊
You're welcome ! 😉
Yay ! Bahut jyada badta jaa raha hai ! 😛
Arey di. Dekho try and understand. Main itna bada aapke aur apne donoin ke baare mein soch ke deti hun. And galti aap logoin ki hoti hai. Main thodi na kehti hun ki itni jaldi demand complete karo. Araam se kara karo. Take your time you know ! 😛 🤣


Originally posted by: Asha_ArSha

awwiiee... loved the update...

u r sick... get well soon..

ok.. i m going to spam this thread now 😆


Thanks a lot di.
Ab main well ho gayi ! 😆
Kabhi mujhe shaanti se nahi jeene deta koi bhi ! 😛


Originally posted by: The007Shivani

It is amazing loved it from phone right now but will spam tomorrow


Thanks Shivs. No problem yar ! 😊



Thanks a lot.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kriyansh24

main kya kahun rey...

wanted to read arsha par tune itna kam diya rey..

chal koi gal nhi.. abhi araam aur maze kar


Joh aap kehna chaho rey ..
Sorry rey .. Time nahi tha ! 😳
Lol, pakka ? 😆


Originally posted by: yogini64

Omg . . . . Tanha are also on their way to become a couple... 😳

& shakti- she's really unpredictable... Amar se argue kiye bina usse maza hi nhi aata chahe vo baat usne hi kahi ho 😛

& amar toh for sure faint ho jayega tanha ko aise dekh ke... ☺️


Hehe, yes they are !
Lol, bahut jyada. She's so cute. 😆
Lol, fights bring them closer ! 😛
Lol, woh toh humein ruk ke dekhna padega ! 😳



Thanks a lot. 😊


Originally posted by: PD_puja

Chotu sa tha...pr it ws gud as usual...n luvd d tanha part...take care f urslf grl...health cums frst...:)


Thanks a lot di ! 😊
Hehe, TanHa rock na ? 😆
Di, am fine now. 😃


Originally posted by: ruta

well the update was short n sweet...:)..haha aditi ur our angel was writing sucha a wonderful ff..:)..good work..!!


Lol, thanks a lot ! 😊
Aw, thank you ! 😳


Originally posted by: 21Neha21

wow aditi...what an update..its awsme..

loved d tanha scene..good to see shantanu realising his felings for sneha..
n d arsha scene was so adorable..it was amazing..
n u r nt wel..!! what hapened..??n if it bcz of d vrat den y r u not eating vrat ka khana?
frutis r not enuff n dat too abhi kitne din aur pade hain,,.
take care of urself n take proper diet plz,,


Awie, thanks a lot di ! 😃
I love them ( TanHa ) too ! Aw, bas jaldi se inhein bhi hum karne ke plans soch rahi hun main ! 😛
Di, I told you na - the reason for not eating the vrat ka khaana. 😳
Di, ab I'm good and fit as a fiddle. 😊


Originally posted by: Asha_ArSha

Dirty minds... pata nahi kya soche te hai😆


Hehe, yes ! 😉


Originally posted by: Asha_ArSha

Archie n Sam... Unexpected tha😲


Lol, I know ! 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
Guys, it's taking to long like this.
You know replying to everyone individually.
And I have to update now only for some one special.
So, a thank you to all those who reviewed.
Please maaf kar do. This is the first time I was not able to reply to your reviews.
And I really hope this is the last time as well.
So, really sorry and a bada waala thank you for liking and reviewing.
- Lots of love and hugs
Devil. 😊 🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago

*****

It's been a long time this time. ( Waah waah. Ktina time time ho gaya ! 😛 )

Sorry for the delay but to cover up here I'm with a longer update than planned.

This part is dedicated to aishasully. She's the reason I'm updating today. 😊

Before beginning I suggest you all to check out my post. Thanks.

New Post : Click Here.

Finally, continued.

*****

On the other hand when Shan woke up he saw Sneha was already awake, but she had not moved an inch.

Shan : Good morning.

Sneha : Hey sleepy head. So, finally you decided to wake up ?

She didn't get an answer so she tunred to see Shan checking out their position. Sneha shrugged and explained.

Sneha : Who, tum so rahe the and ..

She motioned towards his arms wrapped around her and continued.

Sneha : Aur main tumhein disturb nahi karna chahti thi. So, …

Shan : You know you don't have to explain anything to me.

Sneha : Hm, yes.

Shan loosened his grip on her and she got up.

Sneha : There's coffee for you on the table. Amar will be here soon.

Saying that she went to the washroom, splashed her face with water and came out wiping her face with a towel.

Sneha : Now I feel fresh.

Suddenly the door opened and Amar came in.

Amar : Hey guys. So how was your night ? *chuckle*

Shan : Pleasant. *smiling at Sneha*

Sneha ( smiling back ) : Exactly. Acha, tu bata kya kya hua kal raat ?

Amar blushed, playfully hit Sneha and headed off to thee washroom.

Sneha : Paagal. Acha I'll leave now. Get ready and be fast.

Shan : Yeh maam. *salute*

Sneha laughed and Shan was lost in her laughter. Sneha left from there and went back to her room.

Sneha : Shakti, where are you ?

Shakti : In here.

Sneha : Madam, jaldi bahar aaiye. Tut oh late bhi ho sakti hai. I need to be on time.

Shakti : Five minutes maximum Sweety.

Sneha : Hm.

Shakti came out in time and Sneha went in. They got ready and were in their dresses. Shakti dressed in her dress with the same accessories as in the picture ( that is she only wore some hand bands and nothing else. She didn't have make up on. She was simple and sober today. Yet she managed to look hot and sexy. ) and Sneha in her costume.

Shakti's dress :

Sneha and Shakti left in a hurry as they were late. They joined the others. As the others saw them coming, the boys couldn't take their eyes off Shakti. With the lot of determination, they took their eyes off her and concentrated on what Palki was saying but there was still one who was checking her out from head to toe. Shakti realized his gaze and blushed. He smiled seeing her blush. He went to Shaktiland immediately. He came back to his senses when he heard Palki shouting on Shakti and Sneha.

Palki : So finally you decided to join us.

Sneha : Sorry woh Shakti ne bahut time laga diya.

Shakti shot her an unbelievable look. Sneha looked back at her with a 'please' look.

Archie : Who toh dikh raha hai.

Shakti : Huh ??

Archie : You look stunning.

He intentionally took her hand in his and they stood like that. Archie turned his head a little to have a look at Amar and beamed. Amar was burning with jealousy.

Palki : So, guys. We don't have much time with us. Today will be full on shooting. Tomorrow you all can practice for the actual event and you will have your performance in the evening. And the day after tomorrow will be a day off. You all can roam around and visit places. Then we'll be back to Mumbai. Is the plan fine ?

Priyanka : Yeah it is.

Palki : So, let's not waste time and begin already.

Director : Positions.

Everyone took their positions. Shakti went over to Palki.

Shakti : What's the scene ?

Palki : Rey is uncomfortable and so he refused to dance saying he has a sprain. But Swayam noticed his hresitation and discomfort. Sharon is lost in Swayam and senses that he is not the usual Swayam.

Shakti nodded. They both turned their attention to the stage as the heard Vinod Sir saying, Rolling, Camera, Action.

They all acted pretty well and the scene came out to be a prefect one. It was a perfect one one shot. They continued shooting. After one-two hours of continuous shoot, Vinod Sir announced that half the part had been shot. As soon as sir said cut, a group of girls attacked on Shan and Amar. Both the girls – Sneha and Shakti didn't like this. They were irritated. What irritated them more was the boys' response. The way they were hugging them back and talking to them. They didn't even care about their girls.

Sneha ( irritated ) : What the hell.

Shakti ( angry ) : This is the limit. Come, it's a break for us. Let's enjoy.

Sneha : Correct. Chal chalein.

Without giving another glance at the boys, they both leave from there. They had barely walked for a minute when they were surrounded by a group of fans.

Boy 1 : OMG !! Is that Shakti Mohan ? I can't believe it.

Boy 2 : Seriously. Shakti, I'm a great fan of yours.

Boy 3 : And look that's Sharon ( obviously real name thoda log kam jaante hoinge na. )

Boy 2 : Can we please have a photo with you ?

Shakti : Sure.

And they both pose with the guys for a picture. After a photoshoot of five minutes the girls excuse themselves and go to the beach for enjoying the rest of their break.

They boys had also excused themselves soon after the girls left. They felt sad that they didn't wait for them. They went to look for them and it's then they noticed a group of people surrounding to girls. It didn't take them much time to recognize the two girls. So basically, the boys had seen everything. Now they were the ones who were again burning in jealousy. They followed the girls till the beach. The beach was unusually quite.

The two were strolling across the beach talking about random stuff. They weren't aware of the fact that they were being followed by two people and watched by two more. They were walking, when some one came from behind, wrapped his arms around Shakti's waist and lifted her off the ground. Shakti was caught off guard but she soon realised who it was and stopped struggling. One person was watching this from a little distance and his anger was now reaching its limits.

Shakti : Punit !!!

Punit : Hey Shaks !

Punit put her down. She turns and hugs him. He hugs her back. They break the hug. Then Shakti sees Dharmesh was also their. Shakti hugged him also and he hugged her back. While Sneha just shaked her hands with both of them.

Shakti : Guys, this is Sneha and Sneha this is Dharmesh and Punit.

Amar and Shan ( yes, they were the rest two. ) : Aur hum hai Shan and Amar.

Amar just looked at Shakti who looked back at him. They both were lost in each other's eyes. TanHa noticed this and to save them Shan smacked Amar's head from behind. This brought Amar and Shakti back to their senses. All this didn't go unnoticed by Dharmesh. After all, they both were closer than real brothers.

Dharmesh shot Amar a 'Tell-me-what's-cooking' look and Amar just shrugged. Amar held Shakti's hand and Shakti gasped. She looked at him with surprise clear in her eyes.

Shakti ( slowly ) : Kya hua ?

Amar ( with anger ) : Ek min.

He pulled Shakti to a side with a fierce look in his eyes and a tight grip on her arm.

Amar ( looking away ) : We have to tell Dharmesh.

Shakti ( smiling ) : Um, I understand. Sure go ahead.

And saying that she secretly gave him a small peck on his lips.

Amar's all anger melted at her innocence. He looked at her. Into those deep eyes of her. He squeezed her hand and said,

Amar : We'll have to do it together.

Shakti now blushed. She dropped her gaze to the ground in an instant.

Shakti : Kunwar but I ..

Amar : Don't worry sunshine, maine hun na tumhaare saath.

Shakti just nodded and they made their way back to where Dharmesh was standing. All that just happened between the two hadn't gone unnoticed by Dharmesh. When he saw the two – a smiling Amar and a blushing Shakti - heading towards him only, he understood what was happening. He inwardly smiled to himself. The two approached him.

Shakti : Hey Dharmesh, woh main aur Kunwar tumhein yeh batana chahte hain ki ..

Dharmesh : Ki kya ? Don't tell me fir se jhagda hua hai ? *smirking inside*

Shakti : Nahi woh ..

Dharmesh : Toh kya ? Ab kya kiya iss paagal ne ?

Shakti : Nahi isne kuch nahi ..

Dharmesh : Chal uski side mat le. Ache se jaanta hun main. Kiya toh kuch issi ne hoga. Bata ..

Amar ( who was patient till now, lost his control and shouted ) : Haan maine hi kiya hai. Maine issey propose kiya aura b hum saath hai. Khush jaanke. Idiot.

Dharmesh ( laughing ) : I knew it. Nautanki ho donoin. Itna time laga diya realize karne mein paagal.

Shakti was now blushing deeply and Amar was looking at her lost in her beauty. They forgot that people ( TanHa and Punit ) were also there. They heard it.

Punit ( coming from behind ) : Ahem ahem ..

They both came back to their senses and Shakti looked away.

Punit : Toh tumne mujhe nahi bataya.

Shakti ( innocently ) : Kya nahi bataya ?

Punit : Yahi ki ..

Shakti : Ki kya ?

Punit : Ki tu aur Amar ..

Shakti : Aisa kuch nahi hai.

Punit : Oh no, main toh keh raha tha kit u aur Amar best friends ho.

He smirked.

Shakti : Urgh ! I hate you all.

Amar ( pouting ) : Main bhi ?

Shakti looked at him and couldn't resist his cute face.

Shakti : Aw !

She wrapped her arms around his neck. He was shocked, but didn't want to spoil the mood. He placed his arms around her waist.

Shakti : Nah. Tumse toh ..

Amar ( smiling ) : Toh ??

Shakti ( blushing ) : Kuch nahi..

She gave a peck on his cheek and ran away from their blushing.

Amar : Did she just do that ? God, I love her so much.

He ran behind her while other kept on laughing.

Sneha :They're so cute. ( smiling widely )

Shantanu : Yes, they are.

And he got lost in her smile.

*****

To be continued.

That's all for now.

Since I don't know when I'll update next, therefore a chota sa sneak peak.

Shakti : Oh ya, I forgot what are you doing here ?

Girl : Common yar, dance karne ki jagah hai. Of course dance hi karne aaye hain.

Kunwar : Guys, let's get the old days back and rock together.

They all : Yay !!

*****

Next update : I don't know when. I gave you the week numbers though.

Those of you who haven't seen the other post. Please Click Here and check out the post. Do read the note regarding PM's at the end of the post and yeah, believe me, I'm damn serious this time.

For PM's add this Id to your buddy list : KriyaanshFF

I repeat I will not send any PM's from this Id in future. This the last time I'm sending because I told you about the other Id now only.

Do hit the like button and comment. Smallest of your comments are welcome though I would love if you go for bigger one's.

And guys, one more important thing. Since, this update was due a long time back. But due to my health I was not able to update. So, to cover up I gave this big update. Don't expect such long updates in future ( I know itna bhi long nahi hai, but I spent three hours on this one, which I surely will not have once my school reopen ). Sorry but I'm telling you know only, so I don't disappoint you later. Though I think I made the reason clear in the other post. Thank you.

Do check the Main Post for the banner.

Next update ( whenever done ) will be done only after you reach page 127.

So keep spamming.

PM's will be sent later. Maybe tomorrow morning.

Till then, all those who spam the thread, enjoy the update.

Thanks a lot. Cheers !!

*****

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Next Part :

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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely update aditi.👏
kitna acha likha hai yarr tune.
loved it.🤗
bad awala comment bad me karungi.
s i understand u got busy so wil wait for it.
16 pages ka demand. fine wil finish it.
hope i have 2days time atlest now.

Edited by asmaju - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago


first of all thnx 4 the deserving pm

rest tommorow

lovely update
now tht did contestants have shown up we are to expect full dhamaal
Edited by sauravkathuria - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part aditi...loved it very much
arsha love and romance is really magical ...loved it very much
and the page demand its too much 127 but its ok we will complete it
waiting eagerly for next part
continue soon

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