My first SS:Jihne mera dil lutiya TEASER pg69 - Page 27

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Posted: 13 years ago
HEY KHUSHI...😊😊😊
ur first ff and it's just awesome 😊 it's perfect actually, concept wise, the course of the story, eveything, just lovely😊👏
i liked it a lot and kudos to you for sharing it, love u and miss u so much dear...PM bhejna math bhulna...take care sis😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
ok cutie...
Finally maine pura padh hi lia.. Pehle to sachhi punjabi itni tagdi thi ki samajh hi ni aai... But nw hindi me m fyn..

D concept is rlly funny dear...

MK ne eng bolke Geet ko impress kia to MSK ne to chauka maar dia ye kehkar ki wo MK ko padhata h... Lol...

Last part me... I luvd d sheroshayari msg exchange btw Geet n Maan.. It was beautiful..

Update soon cutie...
Luvya loads...
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update
cont soon
thanks 4 the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
"no thanks" for waiting for so long
totally mind blowing
so sorry to be in hurry dear, you know the reason

do cont soon & do PM me
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it
ab yeh kaunsa maan hai?????
maan khurana ya maan singh khurana????
n yeh kya story main naya twist woh vikram
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Posted: 13 years ago
ab ye vikram kaun hai??

continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Part-7

Thanks for ur all encourage and comments.this time i not able to thanxs individually but thanxs u all for liking this story

Geet-Acha ji ab ap bolo jo mene kaha tha.

Maan[with Smirk]-Ok bye Darling.With that he cut the call.Geet make a big O shape mouth.she call him again but he cut the call.

She got angry at this and goes to take a shower.while taking shower she feel something.

Geet:Par ye kase ho sakta hai.Nahi me awe jyada hi soch rahi ho.

He slowly peep into room and see nobody is their.He go inside and kept flower aside.

When suddenly he hear some noise.He smirk to himself.

Another side geet have done with her shower.She wrap towel around herself.

When suddenly feel his presence.She now sure he is around her,very near to her.A smile touched her face but she pretent to be angry.she dont move she know he is very near.

She melted as his strong arms make their way around her soft waist.She just melted he know it.she try to be angry again.

She just couldnot move nor speak.just stand their silently.He move his face towards her ears.His warm breath falling on her cold shoulder.She close her eyes to feel it better.

He goes near her ear and whisper huskily.

Maan:Shoni tumne to akele hi shower le lia mera wait bi nahi kiya.Geet want to capture that word in his heart.she just lost in it.

Maan start kissing her on her shoulder.Maan[sweetly]:Ab bi naraj ho shoni ke mene tumhara call cut kiya?

While he is busy giving her his wet kisses on her shoulder.She dont reply,lost in his passion. Maan[making baby face]:Kya tum sachme nahi janti ke mane asa kyu kiya?

Just then that words stuck in her mind.She has got tears of happiness in her eyes when something stuck her.

She turn aroung in his arms with his teary eyes.Maan got worried see her tears.Maan[in soory tone]:shoni muje maaf kar do agar meri wajah se tumhe itna hurt hua ho.Me tum hurt nahi karna chata tha me to...

Before he could say something further she kept her palm on his lips.

Geet:Chup Bilkul chup.

She start caressing maan face with his delicate hands with his outermost love seeing straight in his black almond eyes.She continue...

Geet:Muje pata chal gaya maan apne mera phone kyu cut kiya tha.Ap vo shabad muje phone pe nahi kehna chate the na.Ap chahte the ke jab me apke pass ho apke samne ho tab ap muje shoni kehke bulaye.

Now Maan got tears in his own eyes after seeing her this much understanding.He know very well his shoni know him more he know himself.Maan:Shoni...

Before maan could say something more.Geet capture his lips with her.

Geet encircle her arms around maan.She bit him on his lower lips.In respounce Maan grip around her waist get more stronger.He pulling her more towards him when already there in no any space left.Geet pulling maan more.

Geet sucked that part imidately.she commanding for an entry.Maan give her.Both started playing with each other tongues with this their saliva intermingle with each other.Maan bit her in kiss.She moans whick make him more wild.

This kiss not any ordinary kiss.It is full of passion.They telling each other how they missed each other badly through this kiss.

There was so much passion in this one kiss of theirs that none of them felt like breaking it both of them kept on pulling each other more close as their wants went on increasing.

Without breaking kiss maan lifted her in his arms and comes our from washroom.Maan made her led on bed and adjusted himself.

Precap:picture abi baki hai mere dost😳

I know it is short.Try to update next part as soon as possible.Plz do comment and press like button.It takes only ur 1 sec to press like button and less than 1 min to comment which mean alot to me.Ur comment means alot.

Edited by -knirwal- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice romantic part Khushi but sentences aur words ki framing galat lagi mujhe I think u need to improve
but overall a very romantic part and I loved the understanding between Maaneet
love-Piya
Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
ummm...
Romantic n hottie hottie update...
Me blushin blushin...

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