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Part 111




maan wrapped his arm around geet n took her wid him...

turning...

neeva stood motionless wid her her stattered heart n watched d two walk away...

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1 months leap

neeva just broke down completely as she realised two most important truths..one dat maan was actually in relationship wid dat gal named geet handa...and other truth dat her liking towrds maan sir was not just a crush but she was deeply n madly in love wid him..it ripped her heart into millions of peices as she realised she hav fallen in love wid sum1 who could never hers as who was already madly n deeply in love wid sum1 else...

it was sunday, when she was walking over d road and d scene in front of her eyes made her heart wrench in unbearable pain..

FLASHBACKS

she was walking over d road lost in her thoughts when her eys fell on d two people she was thinking..

geet was dragging maan on d road while maan was making all kind of faces...

d emotions on maan's face shocked neeva as she never saw dis sight of him...startled she hide behind a pillor and watched dem...

geet dragged maan till dey eached a stawl of golgappa (pani-puri)..

geet cheerpily, "bhaiyya..do golgappa dena.."

maan tried again, "geet, jaan me tumhare liye golgappe ka mall banwa dunga..plzz dnt eat dis.."

jaan..d word shook d entire existance of neeva and she felt her head spinning...did maan just call dat gal geet..jaan..she clutched d cement on d pillor in her fist and felt sumthing stabbing her heart ruthlessly..

geet rolled her eyes, "maan chup..1 aur shabd nahi..chup chap khade rahiye.."

maan made baby face and he was worried thinking his jaan vil eat dis..

neeva looked at geet shokced...sum1 bossing around maan..dat was simply impossible..no1 dares to say a word again maan and dis geet..she is scolding maan sir..but den..he called her jaan..means dey r in..n den tears breamed in her eyes..

d stawler looked at maan like he hav seen sum ghost...ye admi meri dukan ke samne khada hokar..meri hi golgappa ko ganda bol raha hai..huh !!

geet smiled naughtily noticing d stawler's angry eyes on maan..thnk god maan didn't see it..warna iski stawl ka aaj akhari din hota...

d stawler grumpily served two plates wid litle too much spice...

geet took 1 golgappa in her mouth and enjoyed it as she loved d spice...

it was maan's turn...

though neeva was heart broken but she was sure maan sir can't eat dis..dis is just not pissible..

but to her utter shocked..

maan made cute face, "please baby.."

geet rolled her eyes, "maan.."

maan prayed babaji..n took d golgappa hesitantly in his hand..

geet looked at him impatintly while maan took a deep breath and put d golgappa in his mouth...

OMG

his mouth burned feeling so much spice...his eyes became red n tears roleld down from his eyes...

geet was shocked and so was neeva..

did maan just eat dat..just bcoz geet told him...

geet looked at him shocked and cupped his face, "maan kya huva..?? etna tikha nahi tha.."

maan managed to mumbled, "jaa..jaan..bahot...tikha..tha.."

geet looked at stawled angrily..d stawler frightened and handed her sum water...

geet gave water to maan but didn't drink it saying it must be very unhygenic...

geet didn't know wat to do..

his mouth was simply burning and his face was turning red...

it was den...

she slammed her lips on his...

neeva stumbled back on her feet...d broken peices of her shattered down on her ground and wid tears in her eyes, she just ran away from dere..

FLASHBACKS ENDS

she cired n cired realising maan sir was lready in love wid dat gal and so was dat gal...but why it hearted so much..it was just a crush she had thought it den..but soon she realised dat it was never just a crush or liking..it was alwz deep and true feeling..aftr wat he did for her family..she had felt a soft corner for him in her hearst but when it turned to love..she herself couldn't make out...

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time passed but things remained d same, geet n her gang got held up wid deir new important project while maan helped her wid all possible ways...he helped her wid her studies..her projects her day to day life while geet just all lost in him..taking care of his food..demanding him to rest when he would work hard...deir love only seemed to blosom...

his cuming to meet her every night remained d same..maan being maan singh khurana..none had d courage to say anythng..nor dey had any prob..mohinder n rano were more dan happy to know dat d prince of world loved deir angel so madly...leher was sumhow getting out of her sorrows and brij being her husband supported her every way..d relation between leher n geet once again became smooth...

it was just a week left for geet's bday...

maan knew it..he felt so happy to know dat like sum teenager...never on d earth he could expect himself getting excited like a kid on d bday of his beloved 1..but it was his geet's bday..he had to happiest person in d universe...

he didn't make it obvious to geet dat he knew about her bday and geet being geet didn't even remember her bday was cuming..maan had carefully told every1 in her frnds not to mension about her bday...

he wanted to do sumthing special for her...but wat could it be...

every time he thought sumthing..den he felt..no..sumthing more special could be dere...

not knowing wat to do..

he finally made his way towrds dadi maa...

dadi maa smiled, "beta..aap chhote se bachhe lag rahe hai..aise sad sad face kyu banaya hai.."

maan rolled his eyes, "to kya karu dadi maa..mujhe kuchh samaj nahi aa raha hai..i want to do sumthing special..sumthing different.."

taking his hand into hers, dadi maa smiled, "maan bete..jahan pyar hota hai..wahan har chiz special ho jati hai apne aap..aap unhe ek gulab ka phool bhi de denge..to bhi wo unke liye special..dis is how it is.."

maan smiled, "me samaj raha hun dadi maa..aap kya keh rahi hai...par mujhe aisa lag raha hai..ke mujhe kuchh special karna aata hi nahi..i wonder me ye business kaise handle kar pata hun.."

dadi maa laughed at his state, "isliye kyunki business dimag se hota hai..aur pyar dil se..aur ye jo aapka dil hai..bahot massom hai...aur bahot shaitan bhi.."

maan made face like huh !! "shaitan kyu ?? "

dadi maa shook her head, "kyunki ye aapko hamesha satata rehta hai..isliye..wo sab chhodiye..ye batatyiye ke aapne kya kya sohc hai humari bahu ke lye ??"

maan smiled at dat, "parti to hogi hi..par uske alawa..me ranbir aur uttara ke naam jo foundation ka kaam krwaya hai..uski opening bhi usi din hogi..geet ke hathon.."

dadi maa smiled widely, "ye toh bahot achhi baat hai..geet kitni khush ho jayegi.."

maan smiled, "haan lekin..fir bhi sumthing is missing.."

dadi maa smiled, "to aap uske badde ke din..usse apna naam kyu nahi de dete ??"

maan looked at dadi confused, "kya matlab ??"

dadi maa naughtily messed his hairs...maan made grumpy face and straitened dem again..

shooking her head, dadi maa went to her cupboard and take out a box...

handling it to maan ,dadi maa smiled, "i mean by dis.."

"dadi maa ye kay..." maan's words trailed off as he opened d box n realised..it was d khandani ring..

his eyes instantly lit up, "u mean.."

dadi maa smiled widely, "yes i mean..engagement ke liye isse achh din ho hi nahi sakta..."

maan was on 9th cloud wid dat..he almost shouted, "omg.."

dadi maa giggled widely, "aur humne mohinder aur rano se is baare me baat bhi karli hai..dey r hapily ready for it.."

WATT

dat came as a most surprising thing for maan..

he hugged dadi maa tightly in happiness, "dadi..thnq so so much..i loev u so much..omg..m so happy..dat perfect gift.."

dadi maa patted his head lovingly, "love u too son..now go n strt preperations d way u want..."


maan smiled brightly and made his way out...

while dadi maa shook her head..

she just couldn't believe..dis was d same maan singh khurana whom people called heartless..geet has managed to seach d emtoional maan singh khurana from d heartless maan singh khurana..

babaji..plzz keep d happiness of my maan and his love..

***************

rolling in d bed restlessly, he picked his cell and dialled geet;s number..

geet made face, "aap aaye kyu nahi.."

maan smiled, "sorry baba..meeting me fas gaya tha.."

geet pouted her lips but asked, "aapne khana khaya.."

maan had to go silent..and geet understand it..

"aap humesha aise kyu karte hai ??.." geet aksed getting baby angry..

maan made cute face, "sorry baba..meeting kafi der tak chali..aur ab to dinner ka waqt bhi nikal gaya.."

geet rolled her eyes, "dinner ka koi waqt hota hai.."

"jaan.."

"mujhe kuchh nahi sunana..abhi jayiye aur jake dinner kijiye..." geet gave verdict..

maan sighed..he basically hav no option but to listen to her comand...smiling at his own thought he agreed n walked into kitchen...

"khane me kya banaya tha ?"

maan rolled his eyes, "dekh raha hun baba.."

geet pouted her lips, "gussa kyu kar rahe hai..mujhe laga abhi tak dekh liya hoga.."

maan smiled, "m not angry jaan..aur khane me roti hai..aur koi ajeeb se sabji hai..mujhe naam nahi pata.."

geet was shocked hearing dat, "sabji ka naam nahi pata ?? ae lo...aap ko sabjiyon ke naam bhi nahi pata hote.."

maan shook his head, "jaan..me idian kam khata hun..aur italian.."

geet made a thinking face, "ohh..aapko italian pasand hai..mujh to italian banana aata hi nahi.."

maan smiled while eating, "tumhe khilana aata hai ??"

geet made confused face, "haan..par.."

maan smiled, "to bas..banane ki tension tu matlo..tumhe bas mujhe khilana hai.."

geet had to smile n blush on dat, "maan aap bhi na.."

maan smiled n continued eating, "waise tumhe kya khaya ?? "

geet was silent at dat...

maan stood up angrily, "tumne dinner nahi kiya ??"

geet made cute baby face, "mujhe pata tha aapne nahi kiya hoga...to me kaise karti ??.."

maan sighed but was still angry, "jaan dis is no behave..i vil not tolerate dis again.."

geet twisted her lips, "thik hai.."

maan sat on d bed n sighed..knowing she was angry now, "jaan..."

"hmm.."

"sorry baba...from now on i vil eat on time.."

"promise ??"

maan had to smile at her cute gesture, "promise baba..ab chalo..tum bhi khalo.."

geet smiled widely and ran to her kitchen...

making maan smile once again..

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nxt pt - part 112
IMP - reader, i need good response from u all...d lack of likes n comments every time in every update of any story makes me sad...n i dnt feel like updating...if u want more n more updates from me...dnt forget to like n comment..it takes a sec to LIKE n a min to COMMENT..dnt i deserve a min or ur time aftr d update ??...i request all silent readers to listen to my request !! THNQ !!

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Edited by Angelic_mishty - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
😭😭😭 for neeva

nice update mishu...
Edited by ruby3 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it
waiting for dbhj...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsome



mazza aa gya



finally neeva come to knw abt maaneet


true its heart breaking


bt to remain for ur love pnes who are happy



missing RANBIR ND HIS PJ'S lyk helll



finally leher and geet relation back in action


nd omggg geet birthday


maaneet engagement



nd ranbir nd uttara foundation




loved it


romance going on


nd maan having gol gappe




nd gol gappe ka mall



lolzzz



mishty love u for dis ff


really close to my heart


i can read dis again nd again


nd when i read ranbir death scene


omg i cried alot again nd again
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Posted: 13 years ago
sweet update. geet never eats before maan?? wow
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey mishu pls dont be angry yaar that note of rs litterally scared me !!!!!!! i love u na doll.. we all love u na sis !!! but seriously . what about dooriyan bhi hai zaroori and maaneet bay secenes ????? u know how much we crave for your updates !!! ATLEAST I DO ! and guess what I gave my exams just last week and now i just sit waiting for ur update and check the forums every 1 hour !! pls update !! more frequent !1 THIS IS A DESPO ASKING U OUT HERE FOR UR PIECE OF MARVELLOUS ART !!!! and I NEVER EVER FORGET TO CLICK THE LIKE BUTTON !!! luv u babes !
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Posted: 13 years ago
feel bad for neeva...

but love maaneet...

cant wait for their engagement...😃

continue soon,..,.

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Maan eating gol-gappa or wo bhi spicy...
Water is not unhygienic so...
Atleast Neeva now know that Geet is Maan's jaan...
Geet's b'day is coming...
& Maan is preparing 4 der engagement...
it so much...
10x Angel...

Edited by Sailor_N - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanx a lot for the awesome update... loved the golgappa scene... now eager for geets bday as a lot of suprises has been planned for her by her beloved... i was wondering y their families are not getting them at least engaged and here you are... continue soon

my net giving probs so not able to press like button will try later on but if not then pls count me on as i didnt liked the update but loved it
Edited by -lakshmi- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update dear...
i like geet bossing maan...that was a cuteee...scene
loved maan's surprise plan for her B'day...
maan and dadima's convo is too good dear...loved that cutey maan who is jumping around to celebrate his jaan's B'day..

i am so happy..they r getting engaged...

loved their cute...lovely conversation on phone...
waiting for next update dear..
thank u for the update...love u MISHTY...


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