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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: PD_puja

Welcum bak dear...hope u njoyd d function...waitng fr d update...:)


Thanks a lot di !
Yeah, I did !
Soon !
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*****

Continued


And with this post - congratulations to you all for page 50. 😊

Shakti ( to herself ) : Ab manao isse. Gussa dilaya hai toh manana toh padhega hi na. Kya karun, kya karun, kya karun ? Yes, Idea !!

Shakti ran her finger through her still wet hair and made them in a way so that they look natural. She adjusted her bathrobe and went towards Amar.

She hugged him tightly from behind. He tried to escape her grasp but she refused to let him go away. After a lot of tries he gave in and sat down.

Amar ( angrily ) : That's not going to work. So don't even try, oka ?

Shakti was now planting kisses on his neck from behind. Her hands rested on around his waist and she was seducing him.

Shakti : Hm ..

Amar : What hm ?

Shakti : Mmm'

Amar : Stop it Shaks. I'm telling you it's not going to work.

Shakti finally gave up and came from the back and stood right in front of him.

Shakti : Sorry Kunwar.

Amar : Tumhein toh sorry bolne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai. Tumhaari toh koi galti hi nahi thi. Tum ne kuch galat thodi kia. Bas mera mood kharab kar dia.

Shakti ( pouting ) : Kunwar, stop it na. Stop being a baby. Maine kaha na I'm sorry. ( holding her ears ) Lo, ab toh maine kaan bhi pakad liye. Ab toh maan jao. Please !!

Kunwar eyed her from up and down. She was looking really hot and her actions were making her look hotter. But he still pretended.

Amar : No ways. Tum har baar yeh hi karti ho. I'll not talk with you. In fact what am I doing over here. I have no work over here. I'll take your leave now. Excuse me..

Saying that Amar got up and started moving towards the door. But our Shakti is not less. She was even faster. She blocked his way.

Shakti : Arey ! Sorry baba ! Please Kunwar. Maaf kardo na.

Amar : No ways !

Shakti ( annoyed and irritated ) : Fine then, go ahead. Bye. I tried my best to stop you and apologise. But you will never listen to me. Right ? You may leave now. That's it.

Amar ( to himself ) : Arey, ab toh yeh naraz ho gayi. You're so stupid Amar. Abhi who itni romantic hui thi aur tumne naatak kiya. You're so mad. Ab manao isse. Urgh ! What should I do.

Shakti : Why are you still standing here ? Leave !

Amar : Arey meri Shaku bai naaraz ho gayi ? Sorry bacha.

He came forward towards her but she held her hand up.

Shakti ( almost shouting ) : Leave !!!

Amar ( to himself ) : Abhi isse panga lena galat rahega. She's way too much angry right now. I guess I should wait for the correct time.

Just then the bell rang. Amar opened the door slowly hoping that koi aur na ho. But, to save him, it was none other than Sneha. As she entered she could sense a tense atmosphere and Amar's expressions confirmed it. But as she took in Shakti's appearance she was shocked.

Sneha : Shaks, what are you doing in that bathrobe ? ( eyeing them both ) What were you guys up to ? Hun ?

Shakti : Nothing. Who asked you to go ? And why when I was taking a shower ? When I came out I saw him. You should've at least told me. That would've been better. Anyways, what are you doing here ?

Saying this Shakti went towards her bag and started opening it. Sneha was totally confused. She looked at Amar who stood there helpless.

Sneha ( to Shakti ) : This is my room also. I came here to change. It's almost time for the bonfire.

( to Amar ) : Are you going to tell me what happened.

Amar : Who actually'

But he was cut off in between by Shakti as usual.

Shakti : What are you still doing here ? Leave ! Right now. And what ? Time for bonfire ! Oh no ! I need to get ready. Kya karu ?

And she again got into her hyper-active mode. She started searching through her bag while Amar sighed and went out of the room.

As soon as Amar left, both began getting ready for the bonfire. Shakti was almost ready when Shantanu showed up at their room and Sneha spoke up.

Sneha : Shakti ! It's time. They've all reached there. Let us also go.

Shakti : Um, Sneha you go with him. I'll be there in five minutes.

Sneha : Are you sure ? I mean we don't mind waiting.

Shakti : No, no. You guys carry on. I'll be there soon.

Sneha : Oka.

And with that Shantanu and Sneha left the rooms.

*****

At park no. 3 :


Here's the picture :



Everyone was greeting each other and enjoying the night with each other. Only one person stood alone in a corner, looking low. Suddenly Alisha asked,

Alisha : Guys, where's Shaks ?

Vinti : Exactly. Um, Amar kahaan hai who.

Amar just shrugged and his frown deepened.

Amar : How would I know.

Bharat : Now I understand. Yet another fight. Am I right ? Well that makes it Worl War No. 139.

Amar gave him a 'please' look and said,

Amar ( in a serious tone ) : That's not funny dude.

Alisha looked at his expression and turned towards Sneha and asked her what the matter is. She just told her that they were fighting when she got into the room for some reason which she is unaware of. Just then Archie spoke,

Archie : Oh look, there my sweet sister is.

Then, everyone looked at her and everyone stopped in their tarcks. Everyone was looking at her from head to toe. Shakti saw it and a smile automatically covered her face accompanied by a warm blush.

Archie stepped ahead and held out his hand. Shakti carefully placed her hand in his and Archie kissed it.

Archie : Seriously, agar tu meri behen na hoti na toh main bina kuch soche samjhe tujhe pro maar deta.

Shakti : Tujhse toh mujhe aur kuch expected bhi nahi tha.

Archie grinned and Shakti joined in.

All this while Amar was just staring her. Admiring her. Shakti saw her from the corner of her eyes checking her out but she just ignored him.

She wore a multi-colored, printed, half thigh to almost knee length halter neck dress. She had no make up on just a little eye make up. Coming to the accessories stuff, she wore a necklace ( as in the picture ) and a stylish watch ( picture given below ). She was looking absolutely stunning and could take every boy's breath away.


The much awaited - Shakti :



Watch :



Macce : He's absolutely correct. You look sexy and stunning and pretty and hot and what should I say Shakti. I bet agar tu aise bahar chali jaaye na, saare ladke tujh pe fida ho jaayeinge. Even SRK !

Shakti ( shyly ) : Thanks Macce.

*****

Palki : So guys, let's begin with the party ?

Everyone hooted and they all took their places. Shakti was just, sitting down when Amar came there. He was about to sit beside her but she got up and changed her position. She sat in between Archie and Shantanu and Amar was sitting right in front of her. They all got into conversations, but our majnu was still looking at his laila.

*****

Kya Kunwar, kar paayega Shakti se baat ?

Kya mana paayega who ussey ?

Kya Shakti karegi maaf ussey ?

Jaan ne ke liye, stay in touch !

*****

To be continued.

Guys, please hit the like button and give your valuable comments / reviews.

Thank you for being patient.

I know, it's an small update. But I got back today itself and started writing. Am very tired and in no mood, so cannot write more.

But, I kept it short for two reasons. First, I'm very tired. Can't write more than this. Second, If I would've continued then, it would've been a very long update as the next part cannot be broken and given like half with this one.

I also know that this was a full on ladai waala update. Please, don't be upset. I have some great plans for the next update. It will be full on romance. So watch out.

PM's on their way.

Next update : Depends on the reviews. If I'm satisfied, then maybe tomorrow or day after tomorrow.

Thanks a lot.

Take care and enjoy.

Cheers !!

*****


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Edited by Angelic_Aditi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow this was a ow update for amar lol this was funny
i liked the fight it was cute and also loved the update it was amazing and wow the dress was amazing and thanks for the pm
loved it aditi

and yaay first to comment
Edited by The007Shivani - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
I Just Read All Three Parts And As Always They Were ROAKING.
And I'm So Glad That You're Continuing This SS Thankyou So much For That. 😊

I Loved The TanHa Part That Was Really Very Cute 😊

And ArSha Were MEJICAL As Always. And The Food Feeding Part Was So Adorable As Well As The Sleeping Position Awww 😳
And The Last Part Waoh! That Was HOT Man ☺️

Loved All The Three Updates And Waiting For The Next One 😛


*EDITED*

I Loved The Fight It Was So Cute 😆 Awww Poor Amar 😛
Natak Bhari Par Gaya Bechare Ko 🤣
Edited by ArSha_Forever - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update aditi.
thanks for commenting it among ur hectic schedule.

wow u didnt pm me anyways jus spammed ur thread and read it.😭
forgot me.

it was wonderful update as such.
Sorry aditi i'm sad now and i have pmed u the reason so i'm nt able to give better comments.
plz update next part soon.

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Posted: 13 years ago
sorry that i jus read the update first and the note. enjoy with ur cousins der and s my name not in ur pm list still shocked...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Aditi... the like button isn't working... sorry re😔
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Posted: 13 years ago
Luvd it...fites honi chahiye...dat makes a relation more strong...shaks us dress mai seriously bahut hot lagegi...cud imagine it...
Plz aditi...nxt part jldi update krna dear...cant wait...i jst luv reading dis one...:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update... ArSha small small fights😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
😊It was really a nyc update...😊

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