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Amazing update full with cute ArSha moments.The TanHa moments were also so sweet.

Kunwar feeding Shakti, carrying her in his arms hayeee.

I wonder what will happen near the bonfire ???

Will wait for ur next update.

Originally posted by: lovely7010

awesome awesome...amazing n beautifully written...luved it sooo much awww tanha r sooo cute n amar's dialogue nautanki is awesome...cuming to arsh romance dey yake me to my arshaland u've described every thing sooo perfectly awww luved the way amar was carrying shakti in his arms...the way u write makes me fall in ur ff n OS...loads of luv n hugs for u 🤗 🤗 🤗 for such a mind blowing OS update soon...

Originally posted by: sujucoolstar

kk i had not got my pm dear why so?????????????
see but i read it nd i loved it dear frm now my comments go nly for shaks abut amar _______ i just dnt care any more nd archie nd shakti i love deir relationship its kind of unique but pure though
SHAKTI LOTS OF LOVE DEAR
ADITI DO PM YAAR 😭

Originally posted by: Arsha-4-Ever

Amazing update full with cute ArSha moments.The TanHa moments were also so sweet.

Kunwar feeding Shakti, carrying her in his arms hayeee.

I wonder what will happen near the bonfire ???

Will wait for ur next update.

it is amazign loved it and well asma told me see how much we stalk ur thread lol

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Continued

Before beginning guys, let me clear one thing with you guys. See it's already hard for me to write and then on top of that what I get is this ? Just 8 likes. I mean, I know that I'm not able to send PM's and that would continue for this part as well. But I'm really disappointed and sad with the decreasing number of readers and reviews. I continued it for you all. And now the choice is yours. Either you guys like and comment properly or I'll discontinue this SS soon. Maybe this is the last part, if I don't get a good response. 😡

I know I'm being rude. 😳 But what else can I do ? Just imagine there's a wedding at my house and I'm writing these parts and then the best part - I'm not getting any response. Wow !! When I don't get much response it frustrates me. And if it continues, forget this SS or maybe a thing I was thinking of turning itno an FF !! 😕

Another thing I'll be out of station for three days so next update - if there is any - on 20^th or 21^st only.

Now, without much talking here's the next update. Enjoy ! Maybe for the last time !!

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Their Hotel :

Graciously perched on a wonderful waterfront location of Goa in India, overlooking the ever changing blue and green hues of the Arabian Sea, *The Hotel* invite you to discover a haven of privacy and beauty.

Six luxurious private villas adjacent to *some random five star hotel*, ideally located close to the fort of Goa, promising dreamy and unforgettable villa holidays in Goa.

Mingling with supreme elegance contemporary style modern and traditional architecture, the casual chic *Hotel* luxury villas are designed to inspire.

( I'll be giving you pictures of the villas in next few chapters. They will be of a single villa which is meant for two people. They are adjacent to each other. To avoid confusion, the whole gang will use the word room. They have common parks, but different swimming pools, and dining. Though there is one common also. In this chapter I'll only show you the interior of the room and nothing else. May be even the dining. )

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Pictures :

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Shantanu leaves for the washroom while Amar lies on the bed.

While Shantanu was in the washroom Amar was already missing his lady love. He had a frown covering his face.

Amar to himself : Kuch toh karna hi padega. Pehli baar toh main aur Shaku aise kahin aur .. Nahi ! Kar Amar, kuch toh kar. Think, think, think !! Idea !

Just then Shantanu came out of the washroom and then began humaare Majnu ki acting. He was lying on the bed. Suddenly he turned. Then Shantanu saw his sad face. He got worried. Suddenly Amar sat up and put his head in his hands. This worried Shantanu even more. He walked up to where Amar was and placed his hand on his shoulder.

Shantanu : Amar, kya hua ?

Amar ( sadly ) : Kuch nahi.

Shantanu : Thappad marunga ek. Sachs ach bata, kya hua.

Amar : Shaks ki yaad aa rahi hai.

Shantanu : Oh god ! Itni si cheez ke liye itna bada natak.

Amar ( fake anger ) : Tujhe yeh natak lagta hai. Ridiculous. Jis din tu pyaar karega na tab tujhe samajh aayega ki main abhi kaisa feel kar raha hun.

Shantanu : Urgh ! Fine devdaas. Main kuch karta hoon. Give me two minutes.

Amar looks at the watch and then says,

Amar : Um, Shan woh .. woh 6:53 ho gaye hain. Toh thoda jaldi kar sakta hai ? I mean agar 7 tak ho jaaye toh mere paas 1:30 hours hoinge. Pleaseee !! ( puppy dog face )

Shantanu : Fine. Tu jaa, fresh ho. Main kuch karta hun.

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Meanwhile in Sneha and Shakti's room. Shakti eventually got up and went to the washroom to freshen up. Jab tak Shakti uthi Sneha already fresh ho chuki thi and now she was resting on her bed beside Shakti's bed.

When Shakti was in Sneha received a call and she answered it without checking the ID because the ringtone Pehla Nasha told her who it was. ( No prizes for guessing the person. )

Sneha : Haan Shan bolo.

Shantanu : Sun, there's a problem.

Sneha immediately got up from her bed and sat still.

Sneha ( hyper ) : Kya hua ? Tum theek ho na ?

Shantanu : Chill baba. Main toh theek hun. Yeh Amar.

Sneha : Thank god you're fine. You scared me idiot. Paagal ho kya. And what about Amar ?

Shantanu : Arey, Amar depression mein jaane waala hai.

Sneha ( giggling ) : Shaks ki yaad aa rahi hai kya ?

Shantanu : Exactly. Acha I've plan.

Sneha : I was expecting that. Bolo.

Shantanu : Simple hai yar. You come over. And we'll say something personal. So Amar will be forced to leave and he'll have to come into your room.

Sneha : Cool. I'll be there in a few.

Shantanu : Ok. And they hung up.

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Sneha bangs on the washroom door. Shakti closes the shower.

Shakti : Kya hua Sneha ?

Sneha : Shan ne bulaya hai. Something personal. Main dekhke aati hun.

Shakti : Oka.

Saying this she continues with her bath and Sneha leaves the room closing the door behind her. She reaches Shantanu and Amar's room and locks the door. By now Amar was back and so he opens the door.

Amar ( surprised ) : Sneha, tum yahaan ?

Sneha : Teri madad karne aayi hun jaaneman.

Amar : Aw. So what's the plan.

Sneha : Maine Shaks ko bol diya hai ki mujhe Shan se kuch personal baat karni hai. So you go there ( looking towards Shan ) and give us some privacy.

Amar hugs her and whispers a thank you. He leaves the room, closing the door behind him.

Sneha moves up to Shantanu and says,

Sneha : Shan, mujhe bahut need aa rahi hai. I'm off. Oka ?

Shantanu : Pehle yeh batao, tum ne Amar ko jaaneman kyun bola ? And usne tumhein hug kyun kiya ?

Sneha : Arey what's wrong with you ? Usmein problem hi kyat hi ?

Shantanu : Problem thi.

Sneha ( confused ) : Kya ?

Shantanu : Mujhe acha nahi lagta. No one has the right to flirt with you except me.

Sneha : Chill baba. Who flirt nahi kar raha tha. Bas excited tha. Anyways, we'll talk about it later. Abhi I'm tried.

And saying that she yawn.

Shantanu : Aw, sorry. Aaja have some rest.

Sneha : Thankyou PU.

Shanatanu : PU ?

Sneha ( while laying down on the bed ) : Police Uncle.

Shantanu chuckled. He took his place beside her on the bed and said : We'll talk about this later sweetheart. Abhi you need rest.

Sneha : Yup !

She closes her eyes and soon dozes off. She is sleeping facing Shantanu. Shantanu looks at her and speaks to himself.

Shantanu : Kitni cute hai. Oh my god, what's happening to me ? Kahin main bhi toh Sneha ke liye ' No, not possible. We're just best friends. That's it. Stop thinking much about it Shantanu. Chal ab so jaa tu bhi thodi der. And saying that he also sleeps facing Sneha.

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Meanwhile with Arsha :

Amar enters the room without knocking. He sees that Shakti is nowhere in view. Then he listened to the shower stop and understands that Shakti must be in the washroom. He decided to wait for her in the room.

Shakti didn't realize that Amar has come. She came out immediately and was shocked to see Amar there. Amar himself was shocked to see Shakti like this. He was just staring at her while Shakti was looking down embarrassed. Shakti looked at Amar and blushed. Amar was looking at her from head to toe. He was checking her out. She was looking very sexy in that bathrobe. Shakti soon recovered.

Shakti ( a little panicked ) : What are you doing here Kunwar ?

Amar ( dreamily ) : You look sexy, love !

Shakti blushed deeply and looked down. Now Amar couldn't hold back. He got up from the bed and came towards her. Shakti kept on moving back until she hit the wall. Amar trapped her in his arms.

Amar : I'm sorry but I din't know ki ..

Shakti : It's ok. But what are you doing here and where's Sneha ?

She sees this as a chance to move away and tries to do so, but Amar is clever. He held her back into place.

Amar : Pehle toh, don't even try to run now. And then, Sneha said ussey Shantanu ke saath kuch baat karni hai akele mein. So she sent me here.

Shakti : Um oka.

Amar by now started planting gentle kisses near Shakti's neck.

Shakti : Kunwar, chodo.

Amar : Please. Tumne bus mein bhi yeh hi kia tha. Don't spoil the mood now. Agar mujhe pata hota ki tum aise bahar aane waali ho toh main room ko thoda decorate kar deta.

Shakti smiled but tried to run away. Amar held her in time but they both lost their balance, and fell on the sofa beside them. Amar was on top of Shakti. And now there position made him go even wilder. He lost his train of thought and got lost in his Shakti who was already lost in him. Shakti carefully placed her hands on the sides of his face and leaned in. She gave him a small peck on his cheeks. Amar gave her a wide smile and she blushed. Amar was surprised but he loved the sensation. Amar started planting kisses all the way along her neck. She moaned with pleasure and blushed a lot. He breathed on the skin giving her Goosebumps. Shakti's heart beat fluttered and her insides did somersaults. Amar gave her a kiss on her eyes and lifted Shakti in his arms. He carried her to the bed and placed her on it never breaking the eye lock. Amar got on top of Shakti and quickly started kissing her all over again. He was totally lost in her. Soon he shifted and they rolled. Now Shakti was on top of him and it was her chance to seduce him. She moved towards him and unbuttoned his shirt. Rey smiled and removed his shirt throwing it in some corner of the room. Shakti started kissing all over his muscular chest. Amar was all the while moving his hands against her back. This was giving Goosebumps to her yet again. Amar quickly changed their positions and they kissed each other in the earnest. But then Shakti came back to her senses and she realized what's going on. Before they could do something wrong she gave him a surprised kiss and said,

Shakti : Kunwar ..

Amar was still kissing her near the hollow beneath her throat.

Amar : Hm ..

Shakti : Who ..

Amar : Haan bolo.

Shakti : Chalo, koi movie dekhte hain.

Amar ( groaned ) : Common Shaks, don't spoil my mood.

He gave her love bites all over. Shakti moaned with pleasure. But she recovered.

Shakti : Amar bahut ho gaya romance. Abhi chalo, let's do something else.

Amar : Nahi ! Mujhe yahi karna hai !

Shakti ( pouting ) : Please ??

Amar leaned and gave a kiss on her lips and then got up saying fine.

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Then Shakti also got up and saw Amar sitting on the couch with an angry expression searching through the channels on the T.V.

Shakti ( to herself ) : Ab manao isse. Gussa dilaya hai toh manana toh padhega hi na. Kya karun, kya karun, kya karun ? Yes, Idea !!

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To be continued.

That's all for now guys.

As I told you before only, PM's later.

Take care, good night and enjoy.

Cheers !!

And yup, the future of this SS lies in your hands. Lol.

Lamba update means lambe comments.

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Originally posted by: The007Shivani

it is amazign loved it and well asma told me see how much we stalk ur thread lol

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aditi dear i want to ask a simple ques dat ki tu IX mai hi h na...bt is update se to ni lgta...hahahaha

its freaking hawttt dear...i was jst lyk hawww ye aditi ka SS h na...while reading all tym i was blushing to da core...n arsha OMG kya bolu...no words yar speechless

n nw finally hmare budhu shaan ko b jealousy ho ri h n thoda thoda samajh b aa ra h...hehehe...bt ye PU kuuu????????

n arsha...cn't say yar kitna hawttt scene tha...chl bs kr yar abhi tak blush kr ri hu mai...hahaha...n thnkew 4 dis awsummm update

n plsss dn't stop dis SS...i thnk pms na milne ki wajah se h ye sb soo chill yr n heart attack mat de mjhe

I m on phone so small comment I loved it n thanks for pm and do no stop It n I think that others are not commenting as u did not have enough time to pm anyone so that is why