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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Kriyansh-love

thank god u updated it but u didnt PM me :'(


Hm.
I'm sorry but I din't PM anyone.
Actually din't have the time yesterday so I din't PM.
Sorry. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: snigdha143

I liked dis one..so i took again d tym 4 uploading..Thanks alot for continuing d ff..


Aw di.
Thanks a lot for all the replies.
Really love each and every scrap/pic.
And you're always welcome.
Anything for my friends. 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kritzzz_ArSha

Thanks 4 continuing ur ff!!!


You're always welcome. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: prrk86

awesome👏 pm me plz


Thanks a lot.
Hm, sure. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: The007Shivani


I know u r upset and want to discontinue it and I will stand by with all ur decisions and I understand why and plz if u can plz continue but I will always support u as u r friend


See I continued only for my friends. So please support me in future too ! 😉 < Well I know you will. 😛 By hook or by crook ! 😉 - Aaj kal yeh mera fav. dialogue ho gaya hai ! 😆 >
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Posted: 13 years ago

*****

Continued

They slept peacefully in each other's arms. Slowly everyone drifted to sleep. Our Sneha had her head pressed against the back of the seat and Shantanu's head was placed gently in Sneha's lap and he had a tight grip around her waist.

Sneha : Urgh Shan !! This will not be comfortable. Yeh bus hai.

Shantanu : Exactly aur uss seat ka sahara lena mere bas ki baat nahi hai.

Sneha : Arey, par.

Shantanu ( slowly with a puppy dog face ) : Main tera best friend nahi hun. *Fake sob* Main bahut bure hun na. *Sob* Tut mere liye itna bhi nahi kar sakti. *Sob* *Sob*

Sneha ( hitting her hand against her forehead ) : Hogayi, teri nautanki khatam ? Bekaar mein har waqt emotional blackmail ya filmy naatak. Kuch kaha maine ? Nahi na ! Cha lab so ja, mujhe bhi neend aa rahi hai. Good Night.

And she planted a soft kiss on his forehead. Shantanu giggled and held himself close to her. Wrapped his arms around her waist. Hid his face against her stomach. Closed his eyes and drifted to sleep. Sneha was messaging his hair when she also drifted to sleep. Her head fell on his and they also slept like that. In each other's arms.

*****

Amar woke up around 5 in the evening. He saw the time in his watch and looked around himself in the bus, and saw everyone was sleeping. He saw TanHa's position and smiled to himself.
Amar ( to himself ) : Humein mikwaana chahte hain. Par gadhoin ko yeh nahi pata ki khud yeh ek doosre ke bina kuch nahi hai. Best friends ka naatal laga rakha hai bas. Idiots. They are perfect together.

He again looked around and then at the driver.

Amar ( slowly so that no one is disturbed. So that his angel isn't disturbed ) : Bhaiya kitni der aur lagegi.

Driver : Bhaiya ji agar trafiic milega toh 7 ' 7:30 tak warna hum 6:15 ' 6:30 tak pahunch jaayeinge.

Amar : Oka.

He let his eyes wander to see if he has disturbed anyone. To his luck everyone was sleeping. Then he looked at Shakti. Of course, she was disturbed. She was so close to him. His smile disappeared when he noticed she was opening her eyes. He immediately shut his eyes tight and went back to their sleeping position.

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Shakti woke up. She saw herself and Amar's position and blushed a little. Amar was smiling widely from inside on seeing this but outside he held his expression. The Shakti freed herself. She traced her fingers across Amar's face and a small smile came on his face. She smiled wider seeing him smile. She leaned in and planted a kiss on his cheeks. As soon as she did that she looked at Amar's eyes which were open now. Embarrassment took over her and she immediately moved back and looked at the other side blushing hard. Amar had a huge smile on his face. He placed his hand on Shakti's shoulder and he felt her going numb. He made her face him. She was looking down and her face was still a faint red. Amar lifted her chin up and made her look straight into his eyes. But she refused to move an inch. She hugged Amar tightly and he rubbed her back. She hid her face against his shoulder and they both were like that for a few minutes. He pulled her back and now they both looked deep into each other's eyes. Amar broke the "Look Look Hawa Hawa spell", leaned in and gave a small peck on her cheeks. She again blushed and looked down.

Amar finally broke the unbearable silence between the two.

Amar : So, maine apni Shaks ko pehli bhi bataya than a ki who blush karte hue aur bhi khoobsoorat lagti hai.

Shakti blushed deeper and just nodded her head.

Amar ( smiling wickedly ) : Waise I love your surprises.

Shakti ( confused ) : Huh ??

Amar : Woh tumhaara surprise ( he said rubbing his cheek where she kissed him. )

Shakti just gave him a "stop it" look and pouted. Amar laughed out loud and hugged Shakti. Shakti hugged him back and they both sat like that for some time. Then she recovered and pulled back. She yawned and Amar chuckled.

Amar : Shaks ?

Shakti : Hm ?

Amar : Tum bahut thak chuki ho. So jao.

Shakti gave him a sweet smile. She held his arm and laid her head against it. Amar leaned and kissed her forehead and then he also adjusted himself accordingly. They both slept like that in each other's arms again.

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Soon they reached their destination and the driver woke Vinod Sir up who woke the others up. Sneha went towards Arsha to wake them up. When she reached their seat, she stopped in her tracks to admire their innocence. Seeing her stop Shantanu also walked toward here and he was also left staring at them. They were sleeping do cutely holding each other and their innocence was visible from their sleep. They just looked like those children lovers whose best moments are sleeping in the arms of their partners. Their happiness was visible on their faces. They were so happy to be in each other's arms. They were sleeping so cutely that TanHa could not hold back their laughter. Listening to it everyone came there and they all also started laughing seeing them.

Priyanka : Aw !! They're so cute.

Samantha : Ya man. They so sweet.

Vinti : Again. They look so perfect together.

Hearing the commotion, Amar woke up. He looked at all of them.

Amar : Kya hua ? Aise kyun khade ho ? And what's with that smile ? *brows knit together*

Shakti stirred in her sleep and Amar looked at her. He gave her a smile and was about to be lost in her when,

Shantanu : Amar !!!

Amar : Haan bol ! ( giving him a sorry look )

Shantanu : Shakti ko utha de. We've reached the place.

Amar was about to say something when,

Alisha and Sneha : Haan, haan. Hum sab chal rahe hain tum log aayo.

Sneha winked at Amar who just gave him a smile. They all got out of the bus and started collecting their bags.

*****

Amar again looked at Shakti and smiled. He was lost in her beauty when he recollected himself and started waking her up.

Amar : Shaks, Shaks utho.

Shakti : Just turned in sleep and tightened her grip on Amar.

Amar : Shakti. Utho.

After a lot of tries, Shakti finally woke up.

Shakti was rubbing her eyes.

Shakti : Kunwar, yeh sab kya hai ? Aise kyun kar rahe ho ? Sona hai mujhe ! *pout*

Kunwar : Shaku pata hai mujhe. Lekin hum pahunch gaye hain. Chalo hum room mein chalke soyeinge. Chalo, abhi utho.

Shakti : Mere andar himmat nahi hai chalne ki. Tum chalo. Main tum logoin ko kal subah yahin milungi.

Amar : Main apni Shaku ko aise chodke thodi na jaunga.

Shakti : Toj fir kya karein ?

Amar : Tum so jao. I'll manage.

Shakti : Thank you.

And she goes back to her sleep.

Amar : Paagal.

He bent down and picked up Shakti in her arms. He went down with a sleeping beauty in his arms and everyone was looking at him with questioning eyes. He shrugged and answered all of them.

Amar : Who who so rahi hai. Uth nahi rahi. Toh main kya karta.

Everyone burst out laughing.

Palki : Guys, tum sab, two log ek room share karoge. Amar ' Shan, Archie ' Macce, Bharat ' Amar, Shakti ' Sneha, Alisha ' Priyanka, Sam ' Vinti and Me ' Vinod. Abhi you guys go and freshen up. It's 6:45 now and at 9 we all will meet at park no. 3 for a bonfire. So take some rest, freshen up and we all will party.

Everyone : Woah !!

Shantanu : Um, Amar tu Shakti ko Sneha aur uske room tak chod de. Sneha tum Shakti ka bag bhi le lo. Aur main apna aur Amar ka bag leke jaa raha hun.

Amar and Sneha : Oka.

They all take their keys and leave the place.

*****

Sneha opens the door and moves in being followed by Amar and Shakti. Amar places Shakti on the bed and makes her comfortable. He removes her footwear and the jacket. Then leans in and gives a small kiss on her forehead. All the while Sneha was arranging the baggage.

*Ahem* *Ahem*

Sneha : Abhi aap log akele nahi hain. Main bhi hoon.

Amar blushes and then moves out. Sneha shakes her head chuckling and closes the door. She also lays on the bed beside Shakti and closes her eyes.

On the other hand in Shantanu and Amar's room. Shantanu keeps the entire luggage on one side and was heading to the washroom when he heard the doorbell. He went to the door and opened it to find Amar standing there. He had a half - smile on his face.

Shantanu : Acha hua tu aa gaya. Acha sun, have some rest main fresh hoke aata hun. Fir tu bhi fresh ho jaiyo. He leaves for the washroom while Amar lies on the bed.

*****

To be continued.

That's all for now.

Hope you like it.

Di hit the like button and give your reviews.

Next update will be done soon. No promises though.

PM's will again be sent later. Actually I don't have time. Update karne ke liye hi badi mushkil se mila. Busy in marriage arrangements these days. So, sorry.

Since bade dinoin baad I've given a bade waala update, I want bade bade comments.

Take care, good night and enjoy.

Cheers !!


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Edited by Angelic_Aditi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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sorry aditi i read it long back. it was wonderful.
i'm getting speechless by reading few ff's
tum log tho muje shok mai le jate ho
Edited by asmaju - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful update aditi...
tanha r so cute..hehe...nautanki shantanu...dat was so funny...😆
n amar ne sahi kaha ye dono bhi kuch kam nahi hai...best friends ka natak laga ke rakha hai..😆..hopefuly inka bhi kuch jaldi ho jaye...😉
n now come our arsha..dere romance always take me to d arshaland...😳..love u for d sweet..cute..adorable n totaly out of d world arsha moments...😛
aww..arsha sleeping in each others arms..i can imagine how could dey would be looking..😳..no wonder d whole gang find dem so cute n sweet...😊
n now came our darling sneha..always making sure our arsha get ample time to spend wid each other😆
amar carrying shakti in his arms..aww...u took my heart away wid dat..😃
now i m waiting eagerly for d bonfire...update soon...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
It was really gud..thnxx for spending tym for dis...
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Posted: 13 years ago
sooo beautifully written aditi😊
tanha scene awww dey are soo cute...n yeah ye best frnd wala tag faltu mai latka rkha h tanha ne...hehee 😆
n arsha scene wow soo beautiful...dear kaise likhti h itna acha 😊...shakti's surprise awsummm...n den fir se soo gyi aww...i knw she is tired...n i knw dere inocence of dere relation depicts in each n evry part...n shakti in kunwar's arms i means he is lifting shakti dats sooo cute..
luv uuu dear itne awsummm update ke liye...n lamba wale update ke liye b

n njoy da function...😊

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